网课作文加评语【一】
2021年10月16日0时23分，搭载神舟十三号载人飞船的长征二号F遥十三运载火箭，在酒泉卫星发射中心按照预定时间精准点火发射，约582秒后，神舟十三号载人飞船与火箭成功分离，进入预定轨道，顺利将翟志刚、王亚平、叶光富3名航天员送入太空，飞行乘组状态良好，发射取得圆满成功。
是日拂晓，喜讯传来，国人振奋，神舟十三号成功发射，三名航天英雄被送入太空，将对接天宫，开启半年征程。中国航天事业，又上一层。
***昔日“上九天揽月”之宏图，不再是梦。航天事业，科技巅峰，群体作战，众志成城彰显国力，引领未来，造化苍生。其所耗人力物力财力甚巨，然着眼未来，乃深远之计，关系国计民生。非下苦功夫，焉得幸福梦。若夫拘于小家之见，则航天与我有何干系，则漠不关心，反怪劳民伤财，真乃愚见。非也，航天事业，人民与共。一者，其事关人类大局，发展之高度，彰显国力，引人尊敬。二者，其于太空探索，科学研究，造福人民，大有裨益。三者，事关国家安全之大计，抢占科技制高点，方能不受制于人，乃和平真保障。故对内可科学研究，以成果来造福国民，以荣誉来增强民族自信。对外可服务大家，提高安全，促进人类共赢。如是者，方是航天事业之使命。
由此及彼，探索无止境，上天入地，国之英雄。时代呼唤英雄，唯有敬重英雄，方能民族复兴。航天英雄，寄托亿万人之梦，敢于担当，勇作先锋，时代之楷模，国人之春风。民族复兴，始于儿童。航天熏陶，点燃梦想，去娱乐之浮躁，还高尚之信仰;树高远之志向，去物欲之平庸。如是者，少年有梦，理想初衷，非精致之利己，非利益之蛀虫，乃民族之希望，民族之光明。
重科技，敬英雄，树新风，利苍生，如是者，乃长征精神之延续，两弹一星精神之传承，民族有望，中华复兴。范仲淹名句：先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐。顾炎武曾云：天下兴亡，匹夫有责。林则徐诗云：苟利国家生死以，岂因祸福趋避之。诸如此类，方是民族文化浩气之风。
航天事业，功在当代，利在千秋，人人有关，人人受益也。故可知，光阴逆旅，点燃梦想，不负使命，造福苍生，是为航天事业之初衷。不忘初心，牢记使命，助力民族复兴。向航天英雄致敬，上九天揽月，遨游太空。着眼人类未来，是为格局;立足国家实力，是为务实;弘扬探索问天之精神，是为信仰;以太空为舞台，科研丰收，造福人民，是为果实。如此者，既有战略之高度，复有高尚之使命，则知人人有责，国家与共。
故可知，宇宙为家，上天真英雄。勇者无畏，大爱利苍生。重塑信仰，民族复兴。诚所谓：心无国胆人无根，人有担当国有梦。
网课作文加评语【二】
网课，是疫情时美丽的流行；关怀，是生活中永恒的经典。——题记
E-learning is a beautiful epidemic in the epidemic; caring is an eternal classic in life. ——Inscription
疫情的肆虐使今年的.寒假出奇地漫长。为了让我们“停课不停学”，老师们都摇身变成了“主播”或线上“客服”。一时间，网课成了美丽的流行，而老师们隔空的帮助让学生觉得这个寒假不太冷。
This years winter vacation is surprisingly long because of the epidemic. In order to let us "stop classes and never stop learning", teachers have become "anchor" or "customer service" online. For a while, online classes became a beautiful fashion, and the teachers help in the gap made students feel that this winter vacation was not too cold.
网课之初，我们学生大部分还可以管控好自己。可“路遥知马力，日久见人心”，有些同学渐渐显示出了本色，私底下约定时间玩游戏、跟同学聊天，甚至忘记了上网课。可是你们知道吗，老师为了让我们“不停学”，费尽了心血。
At the beginning of online classes, most of our students were able to control themselves. However, some students have gradually shown their true colors. They have privately arranged time to play games, chat with their classmates, and even forget about online classes. But did you know that the teacher made great efforts to keep us going.
就说我们班的黄老师吧，每天傍晚，都要为我们准备第二天的所有学习任务清单。老师要先把视频课看一遍，如果效果不好，又会继续搜寻，一定要寻找到最好的学习资源，争取不给学生留下一丝漏洞和不好的体验。
Lets say that Mr. Huang in our class prepares a list of all the learning tasks for us every evening. The teacher should watch the video lesson first. If the effect is not good, he will continue to search. He must find the best learning resources to avoid leaving any loopholes and bad experience for the students.
接着随时监督学生的作业完成情况，那一份份电子作业发出去，每一次都收到写55份作业图片。是图片啊，你能想象得到，老师在屏幕上认真批改每个同学作业的情景吗？不仅有勾画圈点，还有批语呀。张同学哪个字写错了，李同学这个句子不通顺，王同学的字迹太潦草……老师都会一一批注，还经常出现鼓励性语言，为同学们加油，而且几乎不重复。
Then monitor the completion of the students homework at any time. When the electronic homework is sent out, 55 pictures of the homework are received each time. Its a picture. Can you imagine that the teacher carefully corrects each students homework on the screen? There are not only sketching circles, but also comments. Whats wrong with Zhang? Lis sentence is not smooth. Wangs handwriting is too scrawly Teachers will annotate one by one, and often use encouraging language to cheer students on, and almost no repetition.
那次小朱同学忘提交作业了，老师便马上用短信提醒，收到作业图片后，又马上批改，并督促订正。面对作业质量差、态度不认真的同学，老师还会进行电话家访。老师还会在百忙之中抽时间解答学生的疑问呢！
That time, Zhu forgot to submit his homework. The teacher immediately reminded him with a text message. After receiving the pictures, he immediately corrected them and urged them to correct them. In the face of the students with poor quality and not serious attitude, the teacher will also make a telephone home visit. The teacher will take time out of his busy schedule to answer the students questions!
那一次，我在学习文言文《掩耳盗铃》时遇到了困惑，便发了一条信息咨询老师。知道老师很忙，根本没指望老师马上能回复。可出乎意料，不到一分钟，竟然收到了老师的回复，回复中不仅有文字，还有查证的图片，最后还附上一段让我信心满怀的鼓励性话语：很高兴你能这么积极主动地钻研，老师为你的发现和大胆质疑叫好。以后学习上遇到有分歧的问题，不要迷信权威，只管大胆求证。为你的探究精神点赞！
That time, when I was learning the classical Chinese "hiding my ears and stealing the bell", I met with confusion and sent an information consultation to the teacher. Knowing that the teacher is very busy, I didnt expect the teacher to reply immediately. But unexpectedly, I received the teachers reply in less than a minute. There were not only words but also verified pictures in the reply. At the end of the reply, I also attached a piece of encouraging words that made me confident and full of confidence: Im glad that you can study so actively, and the teacher applauds your discovery and bold query. In the future, if you encounter different problems in your study, dont believe in authority, just dare to prove it. Praise your spirit of inquiry!
我不知道这次疫情还有多久才能结束，但网课却给我们的学习增添了新时代的快乐，已成为我成长中遇到的最美丽的流行；老师的付出和大爱，让我们的心通过互联网这根神秘的丝线，紧紧地联系在一起，那无微不至的关怀，已成为我生活中永恒的经典。
I dont know how long it will take for the epidemic to end, but online classes have added a new era of happiness to our learning, which has become the most beautiful fashion I have ever met in my growth. The teachers efforts and love have made our hearts closely linked through the mysterious thread of the Internet. That meticulous care has become an eternal classic in my life.
网课作文加评语【三】
暑假到了，我与许多小朋友一样，第一个想到的就是可以有更多的时间进行“网上冲浪”，可老师却提醒我们不要把时间都交给电脑和手机。我想：那我们到底该不该上网呢？
上网的好处数不胜数，它可以帮助我们进行网上读书、网上聊天等活动。要是不想在烈日炎炎的天气下，汗流浃背地走去书店花钱买书的话，那就只要坐在房里轻点鼠标，搜索自己喜欢看的书，马上可以坐享其成了；如果学习负担太重，就可以上网聊天，与自己的好友敞开心扉，倾吐心事，使人与人之间的关系更加亲密；另外我们还可以适当地玩一些小游戏，娱乐一下，放松心情，缓解压力。总之上网的好处是不计其数的，它能为我们的生活带来许多便利。
万事都有“利”与“弊”，上网亦是如此，如果不遵守“利”的规则，那便会是“弊”。
现在许多小学生都被限制着不能上网，因为网上有许多不健康的信息，可能会影响到我们的身心健康，而且电脑的辐射佷大，非常容易近视。太沉迷于电脑游戏还会让我们孤独、暴力、忧郁等等……总而言之，上网的坏处也是很多的。
网络是一把双刃剑，只要运用得当，它就会为我们带来好处，使我们懂得更多的知识。可如果控制不好，它就会带来许多麻烦。因此我们要合理使用网络，让我们的生活充满阳光！
