旅行的作文英语五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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旅行的作文英语五年级【二】
到了那里，我们在一个同事的带领下，直奔我们要去的登的山，却发现这是一座没有人走的山，或者路不在我们所走的地方，总之，我是糊里糊涂之中跟着同时去登一座没有路的山，说穿了，这是我第一次，也是最后一次的探险活动，因为我天生是个胆小鬼，如果一开始知道要做这样的冒险活动，打死我也不会去的，但到了那里我就没有去路了，只好硬着头皮往上走。起初，还有一点点路的痕迹，但是当我们爬到一定的高度时，就没有什么可以让人放心的.地方了。冷雨落在身上，都没有感觉，因为所有的注意力已经集中在如何往上爬上，我偶然一回头，发现自己已经处身于一座半山腰，下面已是悬崖峭壁，我感到头晕目眩，再也不敢往下看了。走到一处，发现一个一点点大的山洞，我们几个人就挤在山洞里，让一个同事先上去，上去之后，他们找来一些藤条，放下去拉我们，我们就这样一个一个的被拉上去，正在这时，有个同事的手机却不合时宜的响了起来，接起来一听，发现是保险公司打来，要他参加保险的，这让我更加为自己的处境而担忧。后来，我们听到了几声鸡叫声，知道山顶上有人家，心里稍微的放松了一些。于是就一个先上去问路，后来他们带来了一个山里人和一根非常粗大的绳子，我们就这样一个个被拉了上去。这样的经历真是难忘。
旅行的作文英语五年级【三】
秋风飘向了果园。它悄悄降落在苹果树的枝梢上，只一挥手，一个个硕大的苹果就成了高雅古典的红宝石，沉甸甸地垂在树上，摇摇欲坠。它又忽忽赶去，将橘树上晶莹剔透的露珠拂去，一个个艳艳的小灯笼挂在树上，可喜庆了。突然它又猛地扑向银梨树，顿时，茵茵绿丛中洒满了金色的喜悦。调皮的它好像想到了什么，快速窜动着，“唰”，一片嫩嫩的桃树叶被它夺走啦！小桃子可不开心了，使劲涨红了小脸，嘟起了鲜红的嘴巴，秋风只得慢慢抚摸桃子的小脸蛋，也把那一片秋的叶子放在桃树脚下。红枣结出了丰硕的果实，桂圆也相继成熟了，火红的杮子争先恐后地落地，板栗被扔进了一只只箩筐。人们望着这一张张美丽的笑脸，秋风的足迹就按在了果园里。
秋风跳入了田野。它小心地爬上了高粱，用力挥舞着高粱头顶的红缨，高粱这个红脸酒鬼，被秋风摇得更晕了，开始东倒西歪。它又一跃而起，在空中翻了个跟头，将头儿一低，身儿一摇，再猛地抬起，溅了秋风一身水，它只好赶紧逃，免得再被甩一身。它突然冲进麦田，与金麦一起沸腾、欢呼，麦子被秋风的热情感染，掀起了滔天麦浪，可谓是“一浪更比一浪高”啊。玉米秸的杆子十分结实，白菜的.叶子绿的发亮，萝卜变的雪白雪白，茶树也开始散发清香。人们望着这一张张美丽的笑脸，秋风的脚印就留在了田野上。
秋风溜进了森林。它伸出手，小心地点了一下松树，“啊！”风儿的手被尖利的松针扎破了，流出绿色的雪，松树就被染成绿色了，一直没有褪色。它又飞到枫树旁边，枫树为了迎接秋风，把自己的手拍得“啪、啪”响，巴掌都拍红了。它快速飞行着，忽然听见森林中“沙沙、沙沙”的美妙歌声，便放慢脚步，彬彬有礼地走到银杏旁边，它喜欢这位大自然歌唱家，便送她好多金色的小扇儿，银杏可开心了，优雅地扇了起来，可美了。秋风又变成鹿的知心好友，陪它一起散步，一起奔跑。秋风见松鼠从树上跌落，连忙托起了松鼠，将它安全放回地面。它和小熊撒娇，和小鸟歌唱。人们望着这一张张美丽的笑脸，秋风的身影就刻在了森林中。
秋风像一丝彩色的绸缎飘向了果园，像一位可爱的精灵跳入了田野，像一个调皮的孩子溜进了森林，当然，它还去了许多地方-……让我们祝福它，神奇的风儿哪！
旅行的作文英语五年级【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
旅行的作文英语五年级【五】
So people call it Mountain City。 In Chong Qing，I went to the Red Stone Center， to see the places which the prisoners lived in the past。 It is a terrible and awful trip。 There are a lot of dogs， and soldiers with guns near the prisons。 And most of the prisons are good， they didn't want to tell the bad people where the other people were。 They lived in very small houses。 No good food to eat， no good water to drink。They had only twenty minutes to stay out side per day but they still said nothing。
I think they are the heros in that century。 I will follow their spirit。
