上海五年级上英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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上海五年级上英语作文【二】
今天，秋风送爽，阳光明媚，爸爸妈妈带我来到了上海。
到了上海，我们直奔目的地——上海科技馆。到了科技馆，这里人流如潮。各种各样的东西显现在我们眼前：动物世界、地球的奥秘、机器人表演、球幕影院、魔球……其中，我最感兴趣的还是地球的奥秘和动物世界。在游览地球的奥秘的途中，我学到了不少知识，如：世界最大的湖泊：欧亚大陆的里海370999平方千米，最高的山峰：亚洲的珠穆朗玛峰8844.43米，最深的海沟：太平洋的马里亚纳海沟11022米……来到动物世界，我的视线立刻被什么东西给吸引住了，定睛一瞧，哦！原来是一头大象的雕塑!这只大象的耳朵有扇子那么大，鼻子又长又卷。它站在门口，像是一位热心的服务员在对我说：欢迎来到动物世界！再往里走，我又看见了一条蛇，头还在左右摇摆着。这里还有许多动物的雕塑：长颈鹿、猴子、蜻蜓、熊猫……观赏完动物世界，我又看见了一个水龙头，腾空在空中，没有水管，居然还在不停地流着水，这让我惊叹不已，不知这里面隐藏着什么奥秘。接着，我们去玩了魔球，这魔球真是神奇，只要你把手放在上面，球里面立刻会显现出一道电，顺着手放的方向来回地旋转着。
今天科技馆里的东西都让我感到十分神奇，不知里面隐藏着什么奥秘，所以，我现在一定要好好学习，争取以后能解决这些难题。
上海五年级上英语作文【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
上海五年级上英语作文【四】
星期天，学校组织春游，我有幸参加了。
在去的路上我十分激动。到站了，我冲下车，跑向大门。大门景色真美！我班的七位同学一组。拉。项目有很多：蚂蚁王国，四维电影，上海滩……我们的第一个目标就是上海滩，里面的游戏有很多：大摆锤，鬼屋，过山车，碰碰车……其中最令我深刻的是大摆锤。看着他们从高空摔下，又从低处甩到高处……心不由得砰砰砰跳：如果我现在不玩的话，必会被同学们笑话。我决定了一定要玩。顺便挑战一下恐高的我。我心中暗暗的给自己加油鼓劲。上一批结束了，现在该我们了。我摸遍全身，把钱和发夹，全部放入橱柜。又蹲下身来把鞋带系紧。我慢慢坐上椅子，按下安全口开始游戏了，先是慢慢的左右摇摆，之后越摇越高，越摇越高，大约七八层楼高，上面的风大极了。吹的我几乎无法动弹，接着甩倒最高空时，在空中倒挂停留三秒左右，那是我几乎快要抓不住了，马上要掉下来心一直在冒汗，感觉马上就要被甩到湖里去了似的，这种感觉来回了好几次。我的心脏快要崩溃了。我在上面不停的尖叫，快要哭出来了。停止后，我慢慢的从椅子上下来，总算松了一口气。当脚触到地面时，我的脚发软，必须要扶着栏杆才行。
我不由得赞叹，好刺激但又很恐怖。我下次再也不敢玩了。真的好恐怖，还有更多刺激游戏等着你。胆大的你，敢去吗？
上海五年级上英语作文【五】
今天是周六，我们先搭爸爸的车来到上海同济大学的校园，在那里下了车，然后我和妈妈来到地铁站，开始了我们今天的征程。
我们先坐10号线来到了上海博物馆，上海博物馆门口真是人山人海呀，队伍排得很长很长，绕了很多个弯，我们也没找到排队的起点。我和妈妈不约而同地想，这要排到什么时候呀，排到天黑也排不到吧！
于是，我们妈妈来到了附近的上海工人文化宫，正好工人文化宫正好在举行邮票展，我们看到了很多漂亮的邮票。原来不仅要邮票漂亮，粘贴方式也是非常重要的，还有邮寄的地址。同一套邮票，不同的人，可以收藏出不同的风格。
接着，我们逛了书城，看了电影，买了小吃，最后来到南京路坐我最喜欢的小火车。好不容易挤上了小火车，你别说，风景还真不错！炎热的夏天，坐在小火车上享受着习习凉风，看看南京路的人山人海，还真是一种享受。这边不像太仓，这边有各色的人种，有黑人，白人，最多的是我们黄种人，还有浅咖啡色的人…。穿着的衣服更是各不相同，有红色的，有黄色的，有绿色的，有黑色的，有白的的，有橙色的……随着小火车的行驶，到处都是靓丽的风景线。
小火车的终点是上海外滩，外滩的人更是摩肩接踵。于是，我们选择在外滩坐上轮渡，享受下黄浦江上的风景，逃离会儿人声鼎沸。
上海真是个繁华的大都市，这一天我逛了好多地方，买了很多好吃的，过得很开心，很快乐，当然也很充实！
上海五年级上英语作文【六】
看着夏天只留下了一个小尾巴，在我们的软磨硬泡后，爸爸终于答应我们去上海自驾游。我高兴了好一会儿，
这天高速上时晴时雨，加上爸爸那120码的速度使我心惊胆战。过了一个半小时，沪昆高速四个大字出现在我眼前，我欢呼道：上海到了。大约再行了一个小时就到了“锦江乐园”。爸爸把车停好，我们便向“锦江乐园”进军。
走进大门，迎面来了一座60米的高塔，附近的花散发出迷人的香味，使我感觉清新无比。我们先去玩了“步步惊心”，一进门就出现了一个女妖，接着出现各种妖魔鬼怪。出来时每一个都是脸色苍白，不愧是步步惊心。接着我们来到海盗船下，检票员阿姨接过票后，我们便上了船。船开始摇晃，摇晃越来激烈，尖叫就越大声。渐渐船恢复平静，一下船我们便直奔厕所，“大吐不止”。
时间接近黄昏，在我的提议下，我们稍作调整，去做温馨的摩天轮。在摩天轮中，我们决定做一下过山车就回家。我们陆续坐上过山车，只听见“呜”的一声，过山车出站了，我提心吊胆的，生怕机械出故障，过山车又“呜”的一声进站了，一下来我手心都是汗。
在黄昏的照映下，我们又回到了迷人的家乡，虽然只有短暂的一天，我却觉得，只要和爸爸妈妈还有姐姐一起玩，就很愉快。
上海五年级上英语作文【七】
刚进大门，我们就先看见一座大钟塔，钟面上印着米奇的图像，米奇的两只手竟就是时针和分针，米奇好像就是这个乐园里时间的守护者。
我们来到了神秘的“米奇大街”。仔细观察，我发现建筑的每一层都会比下面一层矮一些。因此才会产生一种奇妙的感觉：我变高了！
走完“米奇大街”，经过“迪士尼小镇”，我们到了“明日世界”。“明日世界”里有在空中飞旋的喷气背包飞行器，有充满互动的巴斯光年星际营救，还有《星球大战》系列的精彩电影片段欣赏……
但我还是玩了全球迪士尼乐园中速度最快的过山车之一——创极速光轮。我排了两个小时的队，终于轮到了我。门打开了，里面灯火一片，赛车沿着轨道停了下来，我坐了上去。当广播发出“三、二、一、零”的`声音后。赛车“咻”的一声飞驰起来，顿时眼前一片漆黑，风从我耳边“呼呼”地吹过，速度快得我都无法呼吸。赛车一会儿快，一会儿慢；一会儿向左，一会儿向右；一会儿往上，一会儿往下，翻来覆去地左揺右晃。过程中，不断有人发出刺耳的尖叫。我却轻松极了，感觉就像在驾驶着一辆属于自己的赛车。
出了“明日世界”，我又去玩了“梦幻世界”、“奇想花园”、“宝藏湾”和“探险岛”里的各种游乐项目。
到了晚上八点半，我们还观看了城堡上精彩的烟花表演，我觉得自己收获满满。
上海迪士尼乐园之旅真是一次充满创造力、冒险精神和快乐的旅途！
上海五年级上英语作文【八】
上海欢乐谷充满了惊喜与刺激。
下了车，首先来到了摇摆伞的面前，我们坐上去，没想到游戏开始了，跟看他们玩完全不一样。先是慢慢地旋转，然后越转越快，越转越快，似乎整个人飞起来了，似乎飞到那些游客的上面去了。我闭着眼睛直到快停了才睁开来。
接着，我们走刀了绝顶雄峰的'等待处。差不多排了一个小时的队伍，终于轮到了我们。正当我坐上去的时候，我心惊肉跳，因为玩过的人都尖叫过。先上升到离地60米的高空，正要下去的时候，突然停了一下，迅速下降，好像这个人要掉下去了，顿时我似乎要哭了，乘完以后我依然心惊肉跳。过了好久才恢复过来。
然后我们玩了梦幻驼鹿。它6也是旋装式的。只不过会让人觉得要撞到了。
到了中午，我们吃了一顿丰盛的午餐，之后，又玩了矿山历险，轨道建设在山中。速度极快。简直是过山车的翻版。
最后，玩了形状像章鱼的游戏，一会伸出这只触手，这只触手上的人就会被甩到半空中。一会伸出那只触手，那只触手上的人也会被甩到半空中。
如果你胆子够大，又喜欢玩。那就一定要去上海欢乐谷游玩下噢！
