英语作文介绍名人的短语【一】
2.文句短。长句表意丰富，含蓄蕴藉，行文舒缓，给人严谨缜密之感。然而，无深厚的文字功底，加之时的思想紧张，句子一长，极易顾此失彼，造成病句。短句构建快捷，简洁明了，凝练生动，写之顺畅，读之清楚。因此，应力求多用短句，少用长句，长短结合，参差错落。
3.段落短。行文分段不宜太长，段落短小，层次分明，条理清楚，文思脉络显而易见。长段大段，组织不当，便有内容庞杂，冗长累赘，思绪紊乱之嫌。写时尤须力戒“三大段”，防止中间一段连篇累牍，又胖又长，如猪之肥腹，有失雅观。
4.结尾短，范文《议论文点评短语》。抒情怀、凸旨意，不枝枝蔓蔓，不拖泥带水，不画蛇添足，干净利落，戛然而止，余韵悠然。
5.篇幅短。大家知道，中考阅卷正值炎热天气，阅卷工作量大，且有规定的时间，既紧张又辛苦，“鸿篇巨制”显然是不合适宜、不受欢迎的。短小精悍才是选择的上策。当然，通常中考大多都有字数限制，一般在600字左右，写时自然必须按要求去做，但是如果不加控制，过度增字加长，一发而不可收，以致成了“老太婆的裹脚布——又臭又长”，势必让人反感。
6.议论短。议论有画龙点睛之功效。或述感怀或表见解，或评或论，析事剖理，闪金铄玉，当精粹简练，要言不烦，切莫又多又滥。
英语作文介绍名人的短语【二】
I have a great mother. She cares much about me in my life and study.
In the morning, she gets up early to make breakfast for me. When I was little, she prepared my schoolbag. But now, she tells me to do it by myself. Because she thinks I have been old enough to do it. Besides, she always checks my homework. When I finish my homework, she checks it and points out the mistakes. She is very careful and helps me a lot.
I love my mother.
英语作文介绍名人的短语【三】
My favorite sports star------ Sun Yang
Born on December 1, 1991 in Zhejiang Province, Sun Yang is very tall and the height is 1.99 meters. He was from a sports family.
He won the China's first gold medal in men's swimming game. He worked a miracle. Sun Yang is not only gifted but also diligent. He keeps training and has tenacious willpower; these are worth learning by other people. Sun Yang is a new frontrunner at the sports worlds.
Sun Yang is very popular with the young. He is adorable, charming, childlike and cool. He is kind and has the vigor of youth, and he is a little shy. But Sun Yang is easy-going, always with a smile on his face when he faces our. He sings well and sounds beautiful. To my surprise, he likes dolls very much.
Sun Yang sets us a good example, and Sun Yang has set a new world record of swimming, of which the whole country’s people are proud
英语作文介绍名人的短语【四】
Beijing time, in the early morning of August 5th, Sun Yang defend title successfully with the score of 14 points 41 seconds 15 in 2013 swimming world championships men's 1500 meter freestyle finals. This is the third gold medal in this tournament for Sun Yang as well as the fifth goal of China’s swimming, which is slower 10 second 13 than the result of the London Olympic Games when Sun Yang achieves the champion. Sun Yang uses the score of his fifth goal in his career life to tie with the medal record that Luo Xuejuan keeps in the Chinese swimmer World Championship. He also becomes the person after Hackett in the 2005 Montreal World Championships and a single tournament winning the gold medal of “the king of long distance " in men’s 400, 800 and 1500 meter freestyle.
北京时间8月5日凌晨，2013年游泳世锦赛男子1500米自由泳决赛，孙杨以14分41秒15的成绩赢得金牌成功卫冕，这是孙杨本届赛事第三枚金牌，也是中国泳军收获的第五金，这一成绩比伦敦奥运会夺冠时慢了10秒13。 孙杨也以生涯五枚金牌的成绩，追平罗雪娟保持的中国游泳选手世锦赛夺金纪录，并且成为继哈克特在2005年蒙特利尔世锦赛后，又一位单届赛事包揽男子400、800和1500米自由泳金牌的“中长距离之王”!
英语作文介绍名人的短语【五】
My favourite swimmer is Sun Yang.He swims very fast.He took part in the last Olympic Games.He is my hero.
He is 21 years oid.He is very tall.He is 198cm tall.He is cute.I love him.
He is good at swingming very much, He has had all-round success in his study olypic games.
