一个小小的声音在诉说着命运的不公,一次次的暴雨击打着理想的翅膀,为了理想,只能说;‘折断翅膀,才能更完美的飞翔。——题记
为甚麽小小的豆芽能顶起千斤巨石!为什么有伟大成就的人总是经历不平凡的磨难?为什么雏鹰要折断翅膀,推下山崖?这一切的一切只能说明——逆境出人才!
爱因斯坦读中学的成绩并不好,考了两次大学才考上,学习也不出众,毕业后相当一段时间找不到工作,后来在瑞士伯尔尼专利局当了七年的职员。就是在这七年里,爱因斯坦在艰苦的条件下顽强的学习工作着,利用业余时间勾画出了相对论的基础。发明家爱迪生家境贫苦,只上了三个月的学,在班上成绩很差。但是他努力自学,对于自己不懂得问题,总是以无比坚强的意志和毅力刻苦钻研由于他一天工作几个小时,比一般人工作时间长的多,相当于延长了生命在他97岁的时候,却声称自己125岁了。
‘故天将降大任于是人也,必先苦其心志,劳其筋骨,饿其体肤,空乏其身,行弗乱其所为。所以,动心忍性,增益其所不能。’不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹!上帝为你关闭了一扇门,一定会为你打开一扇窗户。虽身处逆境,但是我们只要努力,只要拼搏,绝望就会变成希望。苦,可以折磨人,也可以段炼人;蜜可以养人,也可以害人。要记住吃苦是一种资本,逆境是一种锻炼。为了理想;我们拖着折断的翅膀;努力飞,努力飞;飞过命运的手掌心;去寻找那个美丽的梦!朋友们,舞起你的翅膀,去挑战命运吧!
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
我们大家见过燕子吧,一身黑发光的羽毛,一对俊稍轻快的翅膀剪刀似的尾巴。活泼可爱燕子有一张有尖有长的嘴,他还有一双澄澄的脚,有巧有力,紧紧抓住电线,在上面自在地唱歌,跳舞。是大自然的好帮手,他在空中飞来飞去,用那小小的尖嘴捕捉害虫让庄家长的更好母亲说小燕子还能预报天气那,快要下雨时,燕子就会低低的飞行,好像在说快要下雨了要做好准备。
我知道了,燕子是我们的朋友我们一定要保护好他们。
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