邀请外教修改作文的求助事项【一】
尊敬的领导： 你好!
我是XX市XX街XX社区居民XX，借住父母家。我父亲由于脊椎折断、并患有糖尿病，退休的薪金还不够吃药药费的开销，糖尿病已到严重时期，不能进食，四肢浮肿，随时都有危险。母亲患有严重的心脏病，加之年岁以高不能操劳。同时家庭收入仅靠老父亲的微薄退休金来维持全家生活。 现在生活举步维艰。
我本人由于长期失业，没有固定的经济来源。一直靠政府的低保补助维持生活，我的妻子也没有工作，只能在照顾父母的空余时间打打零工贴补家用。今年春节我又添了一个女儿，但遗憾的是没有母乳吃，只能靠昂贵的奶粉供养，这一切在我的生活中都无疑是雪上加霜。这真是“屋漏偏遭连夜雨,船迟又遇打头风”。在万般无奈的情况下，希望政府伸出援助友爱之手拉我们全家一把，特恳请困难补助以度过目前的艰难时日。我深信政府会给我们解决实际困难，解决我们的生活危机，向我们伸出援助之手!我们全家期待着您的佳音.
此致 敬礼!
申请人：
XX年XX月XX日
邀请外教修改作文的求助事项【二】
Dear Mr.Huang,
We have never seen for one year, I miss you very much.It is say that you did an operation in September.How are you now? I hope that you have recovered.
Thank you for your enlightening in the important time of my life.I won't forget your edification. Iam in the XX University now.It locate in the beautiful city Hangzhou. I invite you to have a journey to Hangzhou next summer if you have time then.My major is English,but I always feel shamed to speak and show in English in the class.I would change the actuality gradually.Now I like sports very much especially basketball.You would see a healthy and stronge David next time.The life in the university is colorful.I like it.And I shall study hard.
The new year is on the way, I pray the God to bless you to be happy and healthy in the coming year.And give my best regards to your families. Happy New Year!
Yours faithfully, David
28th Dec
邀请外教修改作文的求助事项【三】
Dear Mr Pan:
It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter.
It's my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.
You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didn't mean you are old, you're young at heart. Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. You've got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent teaching.
I've got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, I'd like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?
Happy new year.
With every good wish.
Yours sincerely
Dali Wang
XXXX.X.X
邀请外教修改作文的求助事项【四】
当英语老师告诉我们下一节英语课是外国老师教我们英语，而且是两个星期才有一次。真难得呀，两个星期才有一次啊！可想想又让人觉得兴奋！！
“铃、铃、铃。”上课了，外教老师刚进门，原本热闹非凡的教室立即变得鸦雀无声。外教老师很风趣，老师和我们先互相做自我介绍。轮到邵耀萱说了，她说：“I am Shao Yao Xuan。”老师故意把她的名字说成了“Shao 、Shao 、Shao ”他那语调特别搞笑。顿时，同学们哈哈大笑起来。
到我了，我说：“I am Tina。”这时，老师张开双臂，我也跟着张开双臂。显然我误解了他的意思。他忽然把我抱了起来，并在我的右脸上猛亲了一下，我被刚才的`情景吓了一跳，原来老师刚才的举动是对我的友好。他把我轻轻地放下来，并给我一块糖，我连忙对老师说“Thank You”。外教老师还和我们做了许多有趣的游戏，可惜的是我们听不懂老师讲的话，为了让我们长大后能够走出国门，学到更多的知识，我们一定要好好学习英语。
我喜欢这位幽墨风趣的外教老师！
邀请外教修改作文的求助事项【五】
我家养了一只小狗，名叫花花。它长着一身黑白相间的皮毛，两只耳朵尖尖的，小尾巴向上翘，四肢粗壮有力。
花花见到我，小尾巴摆个不停，光想让我给它好吃的。花花最高兴的时候，是家里来客人，特别是客人住下吃饭时，它会扒你的背，让你给它好吃的。
可家里一来生人，它立刻就翻脸。就算是有人从门外走过，它也叫个不停。
花花吃饱了，就去它的小窝里甜甜蜜蜜地睡上一觉。
这就是我家的花花，一只活泼可爱的小狗。
邀请外教修改作文的求助事项【六】
在外教家门口，我敲门。本来想到是外教来开门，没想到是一个陌生女子出来开门，我问：“你是谁呀？”“我是外教的朋友。”我便大概知道了这位陌生女子的身份。
一位同学来了，也开门见山问她：“你是谁？”“我是外教的朋友。”一样的回答。我们初步确定那女子是外教的女朋友。
我们想法一致，就又去问她：“你是外教的女朋友吧？”“不是，不是。”女子连忙表示反对。“难道你不是女的吗？”她一言不发了。
难道外教要娶一位
难道真是这样吗？
邀请外教修改作文的求助事项【七】
尊敬的社会各界人士：
你们好，我是王启标，现年26岁，广西百色隆林县克长乡和平村，在万般无奈的情况下，我只好向社会求助。
本人自8岁起就有癫痫病至今，因无钱医治，只能呆在家中静养。2010年5月病情突然加重，高烧39至40度近十天不退，无奈之下，向亲戚朋友借钱，到百色第二人民医院就诊，经医院检查确诊有如下病症：1. 结构性脑膜炎;2.蛛网膜囊肿;3.续发性癫痫。在第二人民医院治疗一星期，高烧仍然不退，后转到右江附属医院治疗，因无力支付，未根治也只能于6月29日出院，医疗费用总支出9700元。出院后，疾病仍不时发作，而去广州治疗需要近2万元。
本人家庭困难，因病不能出门打工，且一直需要服药静养。父亲于2007年因病重去世，母亲系隆林水泥厂下岗职工，为了照顾我，也只能在家靠打短工度日，家中收入微薄。去广州治疗需要近2万元，对于一个有正常收入的家庭来说，这个数目不大，可是对于生活本来已经很拮据，且收入微薄的农村家庭来说，这个数字难以承受。经联系广西红十字会，我所患疾病并无求助，万般无奈之下，只好到网上寻求帮助，希望各位网友、社会各界的好心人士能给予帮助，帮助我渡过这个难关，本人将感激不尽。
求助人基本信息：
王启标，男，1987年9月19日，家住广西百色隆林县克长乡和平村和平屯九队。
联系电话：150 7739 3570。
如果有哪位好心人想要捐款，下面是银行帐号，谢谢。
户名：王启标
开户行：广西百色隆林县克长乡农村信用社
账号：6576 1101 0102 938 017
求助人：王启标
2013-8-13
