中国科学院武汉植物园位于清波粼粼的东湖之畔,园内植物品种繁多,景色优美,吸引着四面八方的游客前来参观。当我看到第一眼看到它时,就被它那如诗如画的美给深深震撼了!
一进大门,首先印入眼帘的便是一片大大的草坪,上面有鲜花布置成的图案,满目都是百花斗艳、万木争荣的景象,美得无法用言语来形容,空气中到处都弥漫着甜甜的花香。
紧接着,我们来到了荷花睡莲品种展示区,占地面积约16370平方米,收集和栽培的荷花品种有600余种,其中包括孙文莲、中日友谊莲、太空莲等多个荷花珍品。而种植的世界各地睡莲珍品也有100多个。时值盛夏,清新淡雅的荷花和“花中睡美人”睡莲早已竞相绽放,恰逢睡莲盛放之时,红的、黄的、紫的、粉的……和一旁“出淤泥而不染”的荷花相映成趣,美不胜收,我行走于建在荷塘中间的木质小桥上,在花海中穿行,朵朵沁人心脾……
我们还参观了园内温室培养的各种热带雨林植物,品种新颖,令人目不暇接,流连驻足。植物园里环境优美,空气清新,拥有景观温室、科普楼、花径广场、水云涧、水森林之窗、三峡消涨带群落景观等精品景点,让我仿佛徜徉于多彩斑斓的花朵海洋,感受着天然氧吧的独特魅力。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
每每天天,这趟城乡之间的公交车便成了钱先生笔下的.“沙丁鱼罐头”,我们从校门口上车,就“近水楼台先得月”,最差的也能在后排抢到一个座位,免遭颠簸之苦,还能观察车内百态。
坐在我前面的是一位带小孩的妇女,不厌其烦地回答孩子一个又一个天真的问题;过道里站着两位时髦的青年,一位戴着耳机随着节奏晃动,另一位则神情专注地玩着手机游戏,不时向周围扫描;过道前面站着几位打工返乡的男子,一上车就彼此问候,热火朝天地讨论着今年的收人;其余的就是和我一样的中学生,不仅人数众多,而且声音最大,此起彼伏地高谈阔论,俨然自己就是车里的主宰。
车行至凹凸不平的乡间公路,颠簸起来,乘客们随着车身前俯后仰、左摇右摆,吵闹声也戛然而止。突然,戴耳机的青年在同伴的掩护下,迅速将手伸向一位民工的裤兜……打工者的同行都看见了,但一个个若无其事地将头扭向窗外;车厢内的不少学生也看见了,个个却张皇失措;平时一个个热血沸腾、见义勇为的男子汉顿时成了“小绵羊”;司机呢,也自然不愿得罪这些人,默不作声地后视镜压下去·····一时,车厢里忽然静得出奇。
我的心“扑通扑通”猛跳不止,要不要提醒那位民工一声?见义勇为是我们每个人的责任啊!可是,我的耳边又响起妈妈的叮嘱:“不关自己的事千万不要多嘴!否则,会引火烧身!”老师也反复告诫我们,要保护自己,万一他们找我报复……
“喜羊羊,懒羊羊……”几声极不协调的歌声打破车内的寂静。戴耳机的青年一惊,“扑通”一声,钱掉在地上,戴耳机青年的脸红一阵白一阵,却把目光转向车外,众人哄堂大笑,我的脸也一阵红一阵白。老师说,见义勇为也可以讲究方法,我怎么没有想到呢?
昨天晚上兴奋过度,直接导致我今天早上的起床的进度,所以我才9点钟起床。
今天早上10点,我们准时从铜陵出发,前往武汉。开车开到下午一点多我们才找到服务区。吃饱喝足了我们就继续出发,下午6点才到武汉,本来应该5点就到的,可是我们在汉阳犯了糊涂。下了白沙洲大桥,我们左转右转,就是找不到去汉口怎么走。我们问了好多人,就连加油站的阿姨都不放过,可有什么用,我们还是不会走。最后我们在一家汽修厂里找了一位阿姨带我们走才找到了宾馆。当然钱是必不可少的。
晚上是我最高兴的时候。早就听说武汉的小吃多,果然是名不虚传,大街上到处是小吃。最终我们在一家叫小张烤鱼的店坐了下来,只吃了一条鱼,我们几个就吃饱了,要照这样发展,回家我们不要长好几斤呀!不管了,好不容易才来一次武汉,不多吃点我们来干什么呀!吃饱了自然要恍一恍。小张烤鱼的旁边就是汉正街,不如就去恍一恍吧!我们买了一些衣服就回去了。
赶了一天的路我们都累了,这一觉真舒服。晚安!
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
国庆期间,妈妈、阿姨带着我和弟弟一起去武汉游玩。
一大早,爸爸把我们送到了鹤壁高铁站,我们急忙检票上车了,大约三个小时到了武汉,我们先找好了酒店,把行李放好,准备出发游玩。
我们游了很多地方,有黄鹤楼、户部巷、长江大桥、武汉大学、湖北省博物馆、东湖等等。最让我喜欢的是黄鹤楼和户部巷。
我们先到了远近闻名的黄鹤楼。黄鹤楼坐落在武昌蛇山顶上。远远就能看到一座五层古式建筑耸立在上顶上,金碧辉煌、非常壮观。楼檐上翘,像黄鹤展翅。楼顶圆柱,像黄鹤昂着头,似乎要飞向云霄。数前两只黄鹤分立在龟蛇之上。正面高悬的匾额上写着“楚天极目”四个苍劲的大字。
黄鹤楼里面陈列着许多有关黄鹤楼的诗词书画作品。每件艺术珍品都向我们讲诉着黄鹤楼悠久的历史。晚上去了户部巷美食街,这里人山人海,都来品尝美食。这里的美食各种各样,叫人馋得直流口水。我们选了热干面和几样特色小吃,真是美味极了!我们吃得饱饱的,才依依不舍地离开了。
去武汉真好玩,那里真是个吃喝玩乐的好地方。
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