改写括号中的内容,使其句式整齐,韵律和谐。
醒来眼里布满了泪水;(大病之后我疲乏,依依不舍的离别,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实,)都到心上来了。
分析:这是一道典型的语言运用试题,在近年中考语文试卷中经常出现。这类句式修改,一般要求句式整齐,语意连贯,可调整个别词语和句子顺序,但不得改变句子愿意。
句式整齐,语意连贯,其实就是修改为整句。整句是什么呢?整句就是把结构相同或者相似的一组句子整齐地排列在一起。整句形式整齐,音律和谐,气势贯通,能够把内容表达得鲜明集中,有利于突出作者的思想感情。
本题的实质是将原句修改为排比句(排比句就是整句的一种),但在题目中并没有明确指出,意在降低试题难度,只要句式基本整齐,意思和原句差不多都能得分。
查看本题中要修改的部分,我们很容易发现,出现了“大病之后”、“旅行途中”、“到家后”三个时间状语,只要第二个短语“依依不舍的离别”可以修改为时间状语修饰,句式基本上就整齐了。“依依不舍的离别”就是离别的时候依依不舍呀,“离别时”不就是一个时间状语吗?
看看,这样修改后就变成了“大病之后我疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的\'辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
是否还需要进一步修改呢?同学们在修改中也要试着读一读,看看还有不有别扭的地方。我们很快就可以发现,第一个短语和后三个是不同的。我们只需要把第一个短语也修改成的字短语修改的偏正短语就行了。
“大病之后的疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
这已经非常不错了,当然,你还可以进一步美化。
“大病后的疲乏,离别时的不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
前三句字格式、字数完全相同了,最后一句是不能改为“到家后的事实”的,也不能改为“到家后的恐怖事实”,因为去掉“可能”,就改变原句的原意了。
1.If all those factors are contemplated, the advantages of... carry more weight than those of... From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...
2.No doubt that we can’t control the problem... unless there is an immediate action... The chance is very good that...
3.From what I have mentioned above, we can see clearly that violence on TV has (a great influence on young adults’ behavior. Therefore, one can naturally reach this conclusion that...
4.In conclusion, .../In short, .../All in all, .../By and large .../To summarize...
5.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of... Only in this way can... in the future.
6.Taking into account all these factors offered above, we may carefully reach the conclusion that...
7.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...
8.This fact provides strong reason for thinking that..., thus... is actually preferable to ... rather than the reverse.
9.Judging from all given evidences, we can safely come to the decision that...
10.With the two opposite opinions discussed above, it is clear that neither of them is reasonable. As for ...I think, the latter... .If, on the other hand, the former...
1.Nowadays, a heated debate/discussion about... is under way in China. Some people believe that... whereas others argue that...
2.In recent years/In the past few years, there has been a growing (widespread/general realization( awareness/feeling towards that...
3.Nowadays people in a significant/increasing number are beginning (getting/coming to realize/believe that..
4.Although everyone believes that..., I doubt/wonder whether the argument bears much analysis.
5.This is a very conventional issue, but we can approach it from a new angle/a new point of view.
6.This problem is a much-debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily lives. People may prefer one to another, although some have no opinion about it. But if I am concerned, I can only disagree with the title statement and the reasons are given below.
7.There is a general discussion today on the issue of... Those who criticize... argue that... They believe that... but people who advocate...claim that… They hold the opinion that…
8.In a modern society, people have the freedom to choose... or... Although they normally coexist peacefully, they deserve some close examination. If the third criteria were taken into account, by comparison, people would prefer...
9.When we talk about..., we usually mean that..., or even that... The true... is not..., but that...
10.Contrary to widely held ideas, I believe that...
1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2.俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,
它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
3.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______.
5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7.已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
8.在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用。它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well
9.人类正面临着一个严重的问题…,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ( which is becoming more and more serious.
10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出…。很显然…,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that while. Obviously,but why?
11.如今,人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...
Nowadays,it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...
12.如同硬币的正反面,...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。
Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...
13.近来,...的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。”
Currently, the issue of ...has been brought to public attention
14.随着...的快速增长,...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。
Along with the rapid growth of ...,...has become increasingly important in our daily
15.由汽车(或xx)引起的空气和噪音污染对我们的健康造成了危害。”
Air pollution and noise pollution caused by automobiles do harm to our health.
敬爱的老师:
您好,时间过得真快,转眼间教师节匆匆来到。在这个特别的日子里,情不自禁地我想到了您。内心深处,隐约有一股感激的火。感谢您,六年来对我无微不至的关怀。您的关怀似阳光雨露无处不在,让我倍感温暖。
细细品味,才明白您的爱原来像一杯龙井,当我困乏之际,只消几口,我便神清气爽;您的爱似一根拐杖,当我快到下的时候,是他支起了我;您的爱如一场春雨,滴滴入地,点点入心,滋润我干枯的心田……六年级,不知不觉中我成了一个冷漠的人。不愿帮助他人,也不希求别人的帮助。大有“我不负人,也莫让世人负我”之势。然而,正是您的关怀改变了我。
记忆似水一般滴在宣纸上,在纸上缓缓散去……
窗外的雨在不停地下着,我无奈地低下了头——没带伞。
放学了,我一个人背着书包等雨停下。身边的同学一个个离去,到最后只剩下我一人。“轰隆”。一声闷雷在空中炸开,雨丝毫没有停下的意思反而越下越大。原认为悦耳的雨声此时也变得嘈杂,让人赏心悦目的雨景,此刻也变得狰狞。“咕……”.我的肚子不争气地叫了起来。于是我决定冒雨回家。刚开始是以雄赳赳的气势进行的,任雨水无情地砸在我身上。突然,脚下一滑,我重重地摔在了地上。泪水如泉涌,我挣扎着起来,可脚确乎有千斤重。突然,雨停了。抬头一看,您慈祥的脸庞映入眼帘,温柔的目光有疼惜更有慈爱,它融化了我心中的冰山。您将我扶起来,急切地问:“怎么样,没事吧?”“没事”。“那就好,那就好。”一股暖流顿时从我心底升腾,涌进我心窝,溢满我身体。“走,我送你回家。”我依偎在她身边,在雨中走着。伞上是冰冷的雨水,伞下则是温暖的微笑。雨依然下着,但您却在我心中撑起了一把伞。
祝
事事顺心,保重身体
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Nowadays, advertisements can be found everywhere in big cities. They shout at us from the television screen and radio loudspeakers, wave to us from every page of the newspaper, signal to us from the roadside billboards all day and flash messages to us in colored lights all night.
Faced with a flood of advertisement, some people wonder whether it is necessary to have such huge sums spent on advertising. They often cite in illustration of it the attractive, but false and deceptive advertisements to which many consumers fall victim. Why don't we stop advertising and use the money to reduce the price of goods? It sounds like a good idea, but they fail to notice the contribution advertising makes to our society. Because the production of a better product to compete for customers' money is the goal of advertisers, customers are thus given a chance to compare their products and get the best and cheapest one. Besides, as the advertisement can provide people with a lot of immediate and detailed information as to the availability of a certain product, or a service or a job, it makes life much more convenient. And another thing we mustn't forget: the fact that we pay so little for our daily newspapers and TV programs is due entirely to the money spent by advertisers.
Advertising performs such a useful service to our society that we can't imagine what would happen if there were no advertisements. (198 words
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