四级英语很快就要到来了,英语是占据重要的部分,快来看看下面的范文及写作指导吧。
下面请看一篇漫画式命题的作文预测题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should express your views on the impact of air pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【参考模板范文】
The Impact of Air Pollution
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. In the cartoon we can see the air pollution is so serious that the earth can't bear it.
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people's living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great amount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people's life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lung cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
英语漫画作文写作指导
第一、读图审题
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
第二、谋篇布局
在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意,是手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。
第三、论证方法
漫画作文的'第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩,写深、写透。在写这一段时,考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理,避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。
1.条分缕析
在写作第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换 literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
2.举例论证
如果漫画所传达的是抽象的人生哲理,那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体的事例,尽量避免空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二道题目而言,考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起,最后缔造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝国的例子,用以证明只有从小事做起,才能成就大事。请看下面的范文。
Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin, a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.
3.类比论证
如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如,对于本次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本的技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。
Simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn't afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people's clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn't put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can't provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
最近闲来无事,又看了一遍这部经典的动画影片《年月的神话》,英文译名是onlyyesterday。前次看,现已是两年前了,现在现已28岁的我,越来越能从中找到共识了。
27岁的女孩妙子,一个住在东京的一般上班族,面对被催婚的压力,因从小一向神往着村庄的日子,也为了暂时逃避现实,所以向公司请了10天假,到乡间姐夫家协助采摘红花,影片从这儿打开。
在开往乡间的夜班火车上,藏在回忆深处的幼年妙子,在摇晃的车厢中从成年妙子的梦里苏醒过来。
那个神往去暑假乡间休假,终究被奶奶骗去了海滨浴场一日游的妙子;
那个与校园棒球手广田之间具有青涩模糊的初恋的妙子;
那个央求爸爸买来菠萝,成果等了一个星期,菠萝仍是又生又涩,终究得出了,生果之王的称谓,仍对错香蕉莫属定论的妙子;
那个仅有的一次挨爸爸的打的妙子;
那个考了25分数学试卷被家人以为智力有问题的妙子;
那个失去话剧排练的妙子;
那个不肯与转学生握手的妙子,等等等等。
这些生长旅程上的纤细的心绪与伤痛,全都浮现在27岁的妙子眼前。
能回忆起这么多的东西,可见年月是多么的奥妙。妙子说记起这么多五年级的回忆,是因为五年级的自己正在阅历了人生中的一个转机,那时候的伤痛没有散去,一向留在她的回忆深处。现在她踏上了这次采摘红花的村庄之旅,遇到了小她两岁的俊雄,那些无人倾诉的纤细心绪与生长的伤痛,被一点一点治好。遇到俊雄,应该是她人生中另一个严重的转机吧。
影片终究,十天假日完毕后的妙子终究遵照了良心,跳下了开往东京的火车,回到了这个她从心底喜爱上的村庄,做了她生命中最重要的'一个决议,与俊雄在一起,成为了一个真实的农妇。
看到终究,背景音乐响起,幼年的妙子和她的小伙伴拉着成年后的妙子飞驰下车,朝着俊雄跑去,眼泪又一次滑落。妙子的归宿,我想这是最好的组织,俊雄对天然、农业和一般人的知道,是那么让人惊喜和安心。俊雄很合适她,尽管妙子的年岁比他大,可他却让妙子觉得他才是那个协助认清自己的人,那是可以信赖和依托的感觉,那是让妙子想扎根下来的力气。
我想这部影片之所以能牵动到我,除了我真的老了以外,大约还觉得妙子特别像存在咱们身边的一般的人,终究离别城市,回到故土过那种本真日子的一般人。
想想自从结业后,来深圳一转眼现已7年了,最初的同学老友现已散落在天边,有的已有归宿,有的还在人海踽踽独行。有时候会觉得时刻彻底不够用,似乎一睁一闭间,年月又曩昔久,又如同有一个小偷,声势浩大的偷走了一部分。大约这便是生长的味道,纤细、苦涩、惆怅。
(1拟好题。题目是文章的眼睛,是文章传递显要信息的重要部分。由于它位居文章结构之首,所以文章题目的优劣也会直接影响阅卷者对文章的第一印象。议论文拟题的基本要求是:在准确的基础上力求醒目、舒畅。具体而言,可鲜明,可形象,可简洁,可别致,可整齐,不一而足。总之,以能激发阅卷者阅读兴趣或使之有耳目一新之感为最佳。
议论文的题目要求符合文体特征,要求鲜明,使人见其题而知其旨。观点鲜明的文章最受阅卷者的欢迎,因为它具有清澈感和透明感,能够传达出文章内容之大概,便于阅卷者准确而快速地把握整篇文章的基本内容。如《诚信不可抛》、《科技与人文齐飞》、《移植的记忆,创新的***手》、《坚强--我不朽的信念》等文题,均是鲜明、夺人眼目的好题目。在鲜明的基础上追求形象、生动和富有个性,则是议论文拟题的更高要求。这类文题能抓住阅卷者的视线,使之观其题便欲睹其文,效果奇佳。如文章中心是“走自己的路,让别人去说吧”,拟题为《学会在别人的唾沫中游泳》,别致中显出几分幽默,令人产生一睹为快之感。
(2亮观点,单刀直入。1988年全国高考作文题《习惯》有篇高分作文的开头这样写:“就像那溪流惯于奔腾,大海惯于咆哮一样,我习惯于沉思,习惯于遐想,习惯于把自己的感情流露在日记簿上。”
(3打比方,隐喻题旨。1987年全国高考材料作文“理论对于实践的意义”,有篇高考作文拟题为《灯塔·路标·理论》,开头写道:“在暗礁四伏的海上航行,需要灯塔指点迷津;在岔道口上,需要路标指引方向。否则就要触礁,迷路。在人生的路途中,我们需要科学理论的指导。”
(4讲故事,引入主题。1994年全国高考有篇高分作文《习惯》的开头幽默风趣:“我曾经听过一个笑话:一个小公务员曾在厕所里遇上了局长,于是,他脱口而出:‘局长,您也亲自上厕所?’一听这话,旁人当然会捧腹大笑,但一笑过后,发现有些东西值得我们深思。据说,这小职员在其他场合也总‘局长,您亲自……’、‘科长,您亲自……’,久而久之,就形成了动物性条件反射,哪怕时间、地点、环境早已改变。我说这就是习惯所致。”
(5引名句,扣住中心。这里所说的名句,包括古今中外名人名言,格言谚语,诗词歌赋等。1995年获得高分的高考作文《责任》,开头这样写道:“英国王子查尔斯曾经说过:这个世界上有许多你不得不去做的事情,这就是责任。
将你随手一放,却引来了一丝阳光。在阳关下,你显得特别耀眼,五光十色,仿佛仙子下凡一般。
路,让人走得很艰难,也让人走得很苦。但为了生计,们必须咬紧牙关走下来。
时光走得很快,路已经走了一半。
偶然一次的空闲,我停下来品茶。浓浓的茶在苦涩中慢慢的褪去后,浮起淡淡的清香,一丝甜意在心中泛起。
原来这人生就如三棱镜一般,可以将过去的点点滴滴折射出别的色彩。这样,也许是更好的吧!有时间的话就停下来欣赏一下这一面三棱镜,也许你会有不一样的收获。
在习习的凉风中,我站在星级的银河下,开始了我对你的幻想。
面对着那无边无际的旷野,面对着那数也数不清的星星,我一度以为你在那很远很远的异乡,是我这一辈子遥不可及的梦,但是在人生的望远镜里,你却尽在我的眼前,仿佛这一切都是看得见,摸得着。
你知道吗?透过那一层透明的镜片,我发现你离我越来越近,那遥不可及的触摸感的存在也越来越真实。我害怕,我担忧,我想离你更远一些,但却被一股神奇的力量拉扯着,我不断地挣扎想要脱离控制。可最终我停下来了,因为我发现那所谓的挣扎也是徒劳,这便是人生,靠近我的你便是未来。
曾经我想过我与你的距离是多么的遥远,可那一层透明的镜片却将我与你之间的距离拉近了。其实人生便如望远镜一般,它将未来的距离缩短了,看似很远其实很近,也许是明天,也许就是下一秒,这一切都可以叫“未来”。
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