在我国的东北方,雄鸡头的部分,也就是我美丽富饶的家乡——黑龙江。
黑龙江是个美丽的地方,它既有数不胜数的名胜古迹,又有许多的风景区,旅游区与林区,现在就让我带你去看看吧!在宁安就有为沙俄立下功劳的大石桥:马俊纪念馆:和清朝许多建筑遗址。这里的风景区、游游区、林区、就更不用说了,大小兴安岭、五大连池、太阳岛、镜泊湖、玄武湖、兴凯湖、亚布力、牡丹峰滑雪场等等,这些景区无人不知,无人不晓。大小兴安岭的树木丰富,五大连池的波光水色,“山上平湖水上山,北国风光胜江南”的镜泊湖更让你留连忘返!
这儿不光美丽,而且很富饶!
黑龙江是个富饶的地方,这儿的特产比比皆是,瓜果蔬菜不胜枚举,响水村的响水大米在中国大有名气,兰岗的西瓜别提有多甜了!佳木斯盛产的大马哈鱼,佳节礼品必不可少。对了!还有咱东北三宝——人参、鹿茸、乌拉草,这三宝可是赫赫有名。咱这木耳与蘑菇更是成千上万。
黑龙江这个美丽富饶的地方,它在雄鸡头的地方就代表着:它要带领着其它城市,其它民族人民一起去搏击万里长空,去迎接旭日东升,跃出东海为人类的新世纪做出贡献!
我爱我的家乡——黑龙江!
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
在这里我们用黑土地孕育生命与奇迹,制造了北大仓的神话。
在这里我们用龙江水传递发展的速度,谱写了经济增长传奇。
在这里我们用严寒雪塑造人民的精神,创造热情好客的百姓。
黑龙江位于中国的最北方,春夏秋冬都有着她独特的色彩,四季分明,鸟语花香,在这儿,你感受自然带给你的乐趣,你可以在春天踏在这即将消融的雪上品一品什么叫“阳春三月”,在享受山山水水,氤氤氲氲的过程中又不得不惋惜夏天的短促,在金秋时节的收获季节你将看到遍地的金黄和劳动人民满脸慈祥而温馨的笑容,正执黑龙江的冬天时也许南方还是温暖的“夏天”可这里已是皑皑白雪,银装素裹了。一定要亲身体味这多姿多彩的黑龙江后,你才知道这有多美。
这虽没有大江大河,山川五岳。但我们可以看到大兴安岭,东北平原,松花江……可以看到索菲亚大教堂,中央大街,太阳岛……看到冰雕展,冬运会……依然可以吸引祖国各地的游客到这来参观游览。东北人一定豪爽的接待每位客人的到来。
在南方人的眼里黑龙江是落后的偏远地区,那种观念已是落后的观念。在南方人的眼中黑龙江没有夏天,我想你可以乘坐京哈铁路来享受一下这的火热。黑龙江大地一望无边,这里没有泥石流,没有海啸,没有山体滑坡,只有微弱的地震和干旱。人们在这片安详的土地上世世代代的生活,没有战乱的纷争和灾难的践踏,平安的经历人生百态。
大碗喝酒,大块吃肉,这里的民风名俗是大气而豪爽的。我们的农民用汗水浇灌黑土地,我们这而有“铁人的精神”。你可以吃到热乎乎的大饼子,香喷喷的小鸡炖蘑菇,还有特色东北红肠。当你听到“冰糖葫芦”这首歌时,你一定想吃黑龙江的冰糖葫芦了,此时在看着黑龙江的“大秧歌”,那种感觉一定很满足,很有味道。如果你冬天在在松花江岸旁看到有好多人在刺骨的江水里游泳,你一定不要惊奇,这就是有名的“冬泳”,你不得不佩服龙江人这份勇敢和坚强。
历史的底蕴在这里慢慢的散发出来,清统一后加强对“龙兴之地”的管辖,抗战时又是北方的保护伞,建国后又在黑龙江实行“振兴东北老工业基地”。一步一步的发展。一步一步的进步,我们在用速度告知全国,用实际见证实力,黑龙江是一块宝地,是一只奋起的雄鹰,它与祖国的经济发展同步,共同引领经济热潮。
美丽的黑龙江,富饶的土地,勤劳的人民,古朴醇厚的性格,一个省份都会有不同的代表物,黑龙江如名字一样,如一条龙,在前进的过程中披荆斩棘,勇往直前。让我们为那黑土地播种希望种子,让她在物质和精神的培育下茁壮成长,成为龙江成长过程中不可缺少的力量,龙江的发展需要全国人民的支持和鼓励。让我们共同看着美丽的黑龙江茁壮成长。
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