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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
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第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
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第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
我的家乡在十堰。我们这里风景如画、青山环抱、高楼林立。十堰因车而建,因车而兴,她既是“东风车”的故乡,也是一座灵山秀水环抱、四季景色誘人的`山城、旅游城、生态园林城。
武当山是著名的道教圣地,也是有名的旅游圣地。武当山位于湖北省十堰市西北部,站在山脚,仰望山顶,直耸云天,弯弯曲曲的道路,就像一条长龙把山围住似的。山上的大树一棵接着一棵,绿油油的。在金顶上俯视大地,那眼前是一片茫茫云海。山旁围绕着浓雾,就像在仙人的大殿中似的,整个人都在仙境中。
十堰是闻名全国的汽车城,具有“中国第一,世界第三”美称的东风汽车公司就建在这里,十堰也是中国规模最大的汽车工业基地之一。十堰是东风汽车的摇篮,是东风汽车的发源地。
四方山是十堰著名的生态园林城,在湖北省十堰市的正南边,市区中它是最高的山,山顶耸立着我们东风集团公司的引以为骄傲的电视塔,它不光以此扬名,更因为它四季的美景如画,已成为我们十堰人郊游的好去处。
我永远爱我的家乡——十堰市,我为我生长在这个城市而骄傲!
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
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The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
我的家乡它虽没有长城那么雄伟,没有大草原优美,但是它在我的心里是那么雄伟,那么优美。它就是我的家乡——十堰。
武当山
十堰最著名的就是道教圣地武当山了!武当山高峰林立,海拔1612米。是著名的山岳风景旅游胜地。胜景有箭镞林立的72峰、绝壁深悬的36岩、激湍飞流的24涧、云腾雾蒸的11洞、玄妙奇特的10石9台等。主峰天柱峰,海拔1612米,被誉为“一柱擎天”,四周群峰向主峰倾斜,形成“万山来朝”的奇观。武当山的药用植物丰富,在《本草纲目》记载的1800多种中草药中,武当山就有400多种。据1985年药用植物普查结果,已知全山有药材617种,因此,武当山有“天然药库”之称。
武当山古建筑群规模宏大,气势雄伟。据统计,唐至清代共建庙宇500多处,庙房20000余间,明代达到鼎盛,历代皇帝都把武当山道场作为皇室家庙来修建。明永乐年间,大建武当,史有“北建故宫,南建武当”之说,共建成9宫、9观、36庵堂、72岩庙、39桥、12亭等33座道教建筑群,面积达160万平方米。 现在武当武山古建筑群主要包括太和宫、南岩宫、紫霄宫、遇真宫四座宫殿,玉虚宫、五龙宫两座宫殿遗址,以及各类庵堂祠庙等共200余处。建筑面积达5万平方米,占地总面积达100余万平方米,规模极其庞大。被列入的主要文化遗产包括:太和宫、紫霄宫、南岩宫、复真观、“治世玄岳”牌坊等。
丹江水库
举世瞩目的南水北调中线工程已经动工,中线渠首的知名度越来越高。不久,一条人间天河将把"渠首"景区和京津大地连接在一起。渠首景区濒临水势泱泱的丹江口水库,规模宏大的南水北调中线渠首工程和陶岔、宋岗两大电灌工程等现代水利工程构成了一幅气吞山河、波澜壮阔的画卷。景区内有河南省最大的小辣椒生产基地,建有全国最大的辣椒交易市场香花辣椒城,独具特色的九重世界辣椒观光园,大手笔建成了世界植物大观园渠首万亩生态园。渠首岸边有美丽的汤山、禹山和杏山。汤山之上的成汤寺、云迹寺古迹斑驳;禹山之巅的夏王宫香火不断;秦楚大战、宋金大战的古战场依稀可闻金戈铁马之声;杏山上楚长城、练马场和藏兵洞让人顿生探奇思古之悠情?历代达官墨客,诸如寇准、范仲淹、韩愈、欧阳修等曾驻足于此,留下了千古绝唱。
南水北调中线工程确定之后,湖北省丹江口市就成了名副其实的“中国水都”。 这里有南水北调中线控制性工程,汉江最大的水利枢纽,丹江口大坝。
郧县青龙山
位于十堰市和郧县县城之间的柳陂镇青龙山,面积约4平方公里,距今六千万年——八千万年左右。该化石群东距县城约12公里,南距十堰市区18公里。据中国地质大学有关课题组96年2月提交的《湖北省郧县青龙山一带白垩纪地层、恐龙蛋化石及其地质遗迹保护初步研究报告》和中国古生物学会秘书长李风麟教授等专家考察研究。
郧县青龙山恐龙蛋化石群是继河南西峡恐龙蛋化石之后的又一重大发现,海外报刊惊叹青龙山恐龙蛋化石“全球最完整、规模超西峡”。地质专家声称:“这一罕见的地质遗迹是地球漫长地质历史时期,由于各种内外动力地质作用,形成、发展并遗留下来的珍贵的、不可再生的地质自然遗产”。
郧县青龙山恐龙蛋化石以其独特之处为国内外研究恐龙生活习性、繁殖方式及当时的生态环境提供了十分珍贵的实物证据,对研究古地理、古气候、地球的演变、生物的进化,对探讨恐龙蛋化石的系统分类与演化、对探索地球上恐龙大批死亡、灭绝原因具有十分重要的科学价值。
这就是我美丽的家乡——十堰
荆楚大地,武当脚下,汉江之滨,藏着一个小小的城——十堰。
十堰是一个山间少女:绵延武当是她灵动的骨,潺湲汉水是她柔媚的眼,四季花海是她飘逸的衫。
进入十堰,扑面而来的便是层层叠叠的山,内秀而不外放。最高的武当山仅一千多米,叠翠铺排中点染着浓浓的道教灵气。绿瓦红墙随着山的线条延伸,书写“曲成万物”的思想。翠掩仙山,古殿春早,郁郁的新绿洇着,洇着,洇开了片片娇嫩的葱茏,几枝白花点缀那淡雾中的殿墙,如那少女的思绪翩飞。雾锁住了一座座山尖,也锁住了乾坤,云海翻滚动荡,偶尔撕开一条缝,漏下丝缕光华,像天与地的窥探,匆匆忙忙。座座玉虚隐在长草中,静享残败,问而不答,沧桑独语。
水是山的伴侣。蓝绿色的汉江,多么好的颜料!色彩的精灵描滴出水悠然的微律,清清浅浅,光影如歌。玲珑的潭与湖是这山间少女清幽的眼眸,雪白的急流和温婉的缓溪是她节奏不一的脉动:时而急躁地冲过嶙峋的乱石险滩,时而轻轻摆弄笑意盈盈的草叶花枝,花瓣漾起微澜,流水落花春去,天上也是人间。
桃之夭夭,灼灼其华,少女最早的裙袂便是这春桃。骨感的树枝隐在山林深处,娇羞的粉白默默点染春季,五瓣心蕊笑意盈盈,朵朵片片涂抹这四月天。寻得桃花,便是樱桃点点,草莓颗颗。绵长的雨季,一滴一滴,送走清寒,迎来晓寒轻烟杏花雨,换下杏花罗衫,便是那如梦樱花、赛雪梨花、金黄迎春……大地春回,花儿也约好了,一步步紧紧赶来,看这少女衣袂如何翩飞。
如果说山是十堰的骨,水是十堰的脉,花是十堰的裳,那么淳朴性情便是十堰的灵魂。
平平仄仄的街道,质朴而清新。你可以随意搭上一辆公交车。乘客很多,一如那些大城市。可没有拥挤,没有喧哗,有序上车,投币叮当。“师傅,我们从后门上。”“好的。”“同志,请帮我投一下硬币。”“好的。”五枚硬币从一个老者的手传递到了一个小女孩手中,带着半车人的温暖。“一、二、三、四、五”,硬币声声叮当,孩子清脆的童音稚嫩而明朗。“谢谢!”从后门上车的五个人笑声朗朗,没人说话,车厢中洋溢着心照不宣的笑声。时光定格,如此的画面日日上演,穿梭于人群中我隐在这笑声中,也笑了。
美丽?这也是美丽?是的,这也是美丽。山水、花木、性情、习俗……骨脉、衣裙、灵魂……这些都是美丽元素。十堰是一个美丽的山间少女,淳朴是她的灵魂。当这个世界走向都市,当一片片树林化作混凝土,我愿心中永远留存这片乡野,这份淳朴。
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