五年级英语小作文去哪里玩【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语小作文去哪里玩【二】
以前，爸爸经常对我说：“有一个游乐场很好玩，那里有一个巨大的过山车，等你长大了一些，我就会带你去玩。”哈哈……我终于盼到了这一天，这是在暑假中一个晴朗的星期天下午，爸爸开着车，带着妈妈和我来到了锦江乐园。
一进游乐场，我就迫不及待地拉着爸爸妈妈冲到游乐场的位置地形图处，寻找出过山车的位置，直奔而去。终于我坐到了过山车上，系好安全杆，即期待又紧张地等待着车开动。过山车开始起动了，车子慢慢地沿着轨道向上爬，我的心一下子被拎了起来，下意识地紧紧抓住扶手。然后车子很快地冲下来转了一圈又一圈，我闭着双眼，不断地尖叫起来，什么都顾不上了！听着耳边的风声与一起的玩伴们的尖叫声，我感觉到自已马上就要掉下去了……又过了一会儿，车子终于缓缓地停了下来，我抬起发软的腿，慢慢地走下了车子。这真是我长这么大以来最刺激的一次游玩。妈妈问我“怎么样，好玩吗，还敢再玩吗？”我兴奋地回答她，这真是太好玩了，下次我还要再来玩一次！“
五年级英语小作文去哪里玩【三】
上个星期天我去了嘉年华玩。
那天天气不错，阳光暖和，万里无云。爸爸妈妈带着我和妹妹一起去嘉年华游乐场， 我和妹妹高兴地蹦了起来。一进门，就看到很多玩的项目，有小火车，大龙船，旋转木马等等……都发出悦耳的`音乐，仿佛在向我们招手，要我们去和它们玩。首先，我们玩了赶鸭子，我和妹妹每人一把水枪，利用水的冲力将漂浮在水上的鸭子一个个赶进洞里。但是如果瞄不准的话，调皮的鸭子会遛出来。我和妹妹成功地赶了很多鸭子进洞。接下来，我们上了高高的龙船，龙船就象一个大秋千，把我们荡得很高很高，特别是荡上去和冲下来的时候，我很害怕会被摔下来，紧紧地抓住了把手，一串串尖叫声伴随着龙船的前后摇荡，最后一个小男孩吓得哭了起来，而我和妹妹并没有，看来我们两个还是很勇敢的。之后，我们乘了旋转木马和猴子爬树，都很好玩。我们离开的时候还有好多项目没有玩，我们依依不舍地离开了嘉年华。希望下次还能到嘉年华去玩。
五年级英语小作文去哪里玩【四】
今天，爸爸、妈妈、姐姐和我一起去游乐场玩。
一路上，我兴致勃勃。
到了游乐场，我发现虽然场外有难以计数的汽车、摩托车、电动车和自行车，但仍旧没有它开业的时候我看到的人多，这次我可以不用排队就可以尽情玩我喜欢的项目了。可是，爸爸妈妈可不会袖手旁观，他们每次最多只允许我玩两个项目。我想，他们应该是在磨炼我选择的能力，让我学会选择，在诱惑面前控制住自己。
我开始选择属于我的项目了。第一个项目叫旋转飞椅，这个项目我已玩过一次，我坐在椅子上安静地等待工作人员来帮我把安全设备戴上。与上次相比，我并没有那么紧张、慌乱了。机器启动了，渐渐地，我头顶的转盘转起来了，我也像飞了起来一样……
玩了这个旋转飞椅，爸爸也来找我了，他说要带我们去玩一个新建的项目——过山车。一开始，姐姐和妈妈就是不敢上，但最后还是硬着头皮坐了上去。车子开始走了，姐姐突然说：“啊，我后悔啦！放我下去。”妈妈也吓得说不出话来，我和爸爸也有一点紧张，但至少比两位女士强。车子缓缓升到坡顶，然后“嗖”的一声，一个侧冲，妈妈和姐姐的尖叫声震耳欲聋。还没等我回过神来，又开始一个360度的旋转，我被惊呆了，而妈妈和姐姐，如果把她们放在东海中央，她们的尖叫声绝对能把整个东海的海豚吸引过来。接着又是一个360的大旋转，这次她们的尖叫声响彻云霄，而我的头也被阻力压得抬不起来。车子突然不动了，我还没回过神来，其他人都纷纷下车了。项目已经结束，我还在回味，真想再来一次。
原来美好的东西总是在一瞬间，来不及准备，却让人久久回味。
