1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
don't be afraid of change, you may lose out on something good, but you might gain something even better. —— leslie esdaile 不要害怕改变,尽管你可能会因此失去一些好的东西,但你也可能会得到一些更好的东西。
穷背景男孩和有钱家女孩无法相爱,在告别前他拜托她最后一件事,陪在他身边一盒烟时间,她答应了.于是他一边抽烟,一边回忆和她相爱的时光.后来他成了香烟厂老板,做出有过滤嘴的香烟,香烟的名字叫“marlboro”.man always remember love because of romance over.(男人只因浪漫而牢记爱情
【名牌的读音】好吧,看了之后我承认,我连ipod都读错了……你会读不?
one thorn of experience is worth a whole wilderness of warning. 一次痛彻心扉的经历,抵得上千百次的告诫。
最酷的口语──只含一个单词的英文句子。我们也可以把英语讲到酷。
straight ahead of him, nobody can go very far. 如果你要去的远方没有你的梦,没有你爱的人,那么,就算一直往前,也走不了多远。
where there is great love, there are always miracles.哪里有真爱存在,哪里就有奇迹。
【创意】一个相亲网站的公交广告,将文案分成两部分印在两辆公交车上,“find your perfect match”(找到和你最般配的另一半),比如和你最般配的另一辆公交车。
we say we love flowers, yet we pluck them. we say we love trees, yet we cut them down. and people still wonder why some are afraid when told they are loved.----- 我们说我们爱花朵,但是我们要采。说爱树木,但是我们要砍,我想这就是为什么那么多人在听到别人说爱自己的时候充满了恐惧。
关于爱 】 love at the first sight 一见钟情 cute meet 浪漫的邂逅 the chemical feeling 触电 first love/puppy love 初恋 truelove 真爱 courtship 求爱 propose 求婚 promise/pledge 誓言 a doomed couple 天生一对 all shall be well ,jack shall have jill
家庭(family)意味着:爸(father)和(and)妈(mother),我 (i) 爱 (love 你 (you !爱(love)=倾听(listen) 感恩(obligate) 尊重(valued) 宽恕(excues)
a person who knows how to laugh at himself will never ceased to be amused.一个知道如何嘲笑自己的人,会永远生活在快乐里
这个应该不是人类的课本。。
woman's biggest pride is not her face, but her how conspicuous the men have many painful her.—— 女人最大的骄傲不是她的长相有多出众,而是她的男人有多疼她。
adults are always asking little kids what they want to be when they grow up because they're looking for ideas. -----大人们总是会问孩子你们长大了要做什么,那其实是大人们自己想要答案。
life is really simple, but we insist on making it complicated.----生活一直都很简单,但是我们也一直都忍不住要把它变得很复杂。
下午茶 “如果你简单,这个世界就对你简单”。简单生活才能幸福生活,人要自足常乐,宽容大度,什么事情都不能想繁杂,心灵的负荷重了,就会怨天忧人。要定期的\'对记忆进行一次删除,把不愉快的人和事从记忆中摈弃 if you simply, the world is simple for you. "simple life can be a happy life
you`re waiting for a train. a train that will take you far away. you can`t be sure where it will take you. but it doesn`t matter. because we`ll be together你在等一班火车,火车会带你到很远的地方,你并不确定火车会带你到何方,不过这不重要,因为 ,我们会永远在一起《盗梦空间》
[心]love is when you take away the feeling, the passion, the romance, and you find out you still care for that person. ------ 爱情是:当感觉、热情和浪漫统统拿掉之後,你仍然珍惜对方。
many things because distant and beautiful, many things because of beautiful and distant. not because of distant and give up, just because going up and distant. 许多事因为遥远而美丽,许多事因为美丽而遥远,不是因为遥远而放弃,只是因为放弃而遥远。
love is like an hourglass, with the heart filling up as the brain empties.-----爱情就像沙漏,心满了,脑子就空了。
[太阳]three things in life when gone never come back: time, opportunity, and words. 人生有三样东西不可挽回:时间,机遇,以及说出去的话。
【实用烹饪词汇】1fry 油炸 2roast 烘烤(肉类 3bake 烘焙(面食类) 4grill 用(烤架)烤 5stew 焖 6simmer 炖 7steam 蒸 8knead 揉面 9mash 捣碎 10boil 煮熟 11mince/chop 绞碎 12dice 切小块 13shred 切丝 14 whip 搅拌 15grate 磨碎 16)toss 拌 17)drain 捞 18)shell 剥皮
success is getting what you want; happiness is wanting what you get.--- 成功意味着你得到你想要的,幸福则是你享受你得到的。
# if there is no cure for the pain,no shelter from the rain,you should not have fallen into love or gone into the cloud at first.no hope,no pain. --------如果没有治愈伤痛的办法,没有可以躲雨的屋檐,那么在最初就应该避免沉浸在爱中,避免走进这场大雨。心不动,则不痛。
happiness is a warm person looking for life; and i'm still waiting for you, but you have forgotten had been here; love so short, forgetting is so long. ------ 幸福,就是找一个温暖的人过一辈子;而我还在原地等你,你却已经忘记曾来过这里;爱那么短,遗忘那么长。
【各种的love】deep:深深的爱;chaste:贞洁的爱;devoted:专一的爱; loyal:忠诚的爱;tender:温柔的爱;sincere:真挚的爱;fervent:热烈的爱;burning:炽热的爱;intense:强烈的爱;wild:狂热的爱;at first sight:一见钟情;story:爱情故事;triangle:三角恋爱;affair:风流韵事。转发爱情好运!
don't go for looks; they can deceive. don't go for wealth; even that fades away. go for someone who makes your heart smile. 别倾心于容貌,因为它具有欺骗性;也别倾心于财富,因为它终究也会消散,倾心于那个能带给你真心笑容的人吧!
and not talk to suit together derived; and not for, can together; and not able to together will be together forever; and not always together will be happy. 并不是聊得来,就适合在一起;并不是适合,就能够在一起;并不是能够在一起就会永远在一起;也并不是永远在一起了就会幸福的。
every man is afraid of something. that's how you know he's in love with you; when he is afraid of losing you.----- 每个人都会害怕些什么,所以如果你发现一个男人很怕失去你,那是因为爱上你了。
it is a terrible thing to see and have no vision. - helen keller 只有视力没有视野很可怕、
to love is to risk not being loved in return. to hope is to risk pain. to try is to risk failure. but risk must be taken, cause the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing. 爱也许没有回报,希望会带来伤痛,尝试可能会失败,但我们必须去承担风险,因为人生最大的风险在于没有风险可承担.
when the rain is blowing in your face, and the whole world is on your case, i could offer you a warm embrace, to make you feel my love. 每当雨打风吹,世人都在挑三说四的时候,我能给你的是一个温暖的怀抱,让你感受到我的爱。
i will be strong enough to make you feel bad。
我会坚强到让你们心疼。
[心]trust should be like the feeling of an one year old baby when you throw him in the air, he laughs.because he knows you will catch him. that's trust. ————信任就如同一个一岁小孩的感觉,当你将他扔向天空的时候他会笑,因为他知道你会接住他。这就是信任。
又见中国式标语。。。超级碰碰车。
active long will be very tired, care about for a long time will crash! 主动久了会很累,在乎久了会崩溃!
being happy doesn't mean that everything is perfect. it means that you've decided to look beyond the imperfections......开心不表示凡事都完美,那是说明你已经不再只看缺陷了
世上所有的事都有迹可寻,并能遵照此规律更好完成它,惟独爱情不是,在爱情中寻找规律,只能让爱变得庸俗不堪。
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it is not easy to meet each other in such a big world. 世界这么大,能遇见,不容易
if i could have anyone in the world, it would still be you.---纵然世间任我挑,我的选择仍是你。
if you love somebody, let them go. if they return, they were always yours. if they don't, they never were. 如果你真的爱上谁了,就放他走,如果他回来了,他永远是你的,如果没回来,他就从来未属于过你。
【经典双语】英语必懂简写:lol=laugh out loud哈哈 asl=age,sex,location年龄性别哪的 bbs=be back soon/brb=be right back马上回来 thx=thanks ur=your g2g=got to go得走了 ttyl=talk to you later等会聊 bbl=be back later等会回来 cya=cu=see you回见 ft=faint我晕 you rock你牛b
【微笑,2011】use your smile to change the world. don't let the world change your smile. 用你的笑容去改变这个世界,别让这个世界改变了你的笑容。
some people dream of success while others wake up and work hard at it. 有些人还在继续梦想成功时,另一些人却已经醒来努力为之奋斗了。
i know that life is not a fairy tale, and i’m not asking for a happy ending. all i’m asking is a real imperfect love story about you and me. 我知道,生活不是童话,所以我不求童话般的完美结局,只希望能拥有一个不完美但却真实的爱情故事。故事的主角,只有——你和我。
your life only lasts for a few decades, so be sure that you don't leave any regrets. laugh or cry as you like, and it‘s meaningless to oppress yourself——人生短短几十年,不要给自己留下了什么遗憾,想笑就笑,想哭就哭,该爱的时候就去爱,无谓压抑自己。
if you think you can win, you can win. faith is necessary to victory. 如果你觉得你会赢,那你就会赢,信念是取得胜利的必需品。
– william hazlitt
please remember: when the pain of holding on is greater than the pain of letting go, it's time to let go. 记住:当坚持之苦大过放弃之痛,就是该放手的时候了。
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