这种开头常常直接或间接抒发某种感情,或赞美,或悲痛,或激动,或欢乐……在抒情过程中,也常常综合运用多种修辞手法。
例:盼望着,盼望着,东风来了,春天的脚步近了。(朱自清《春》)
开头运用反复、拟人的手法表达了作者盼望春天的强烈感情。
例:一年四季,春的姹紫嫣红,夏的绿满枝头,秋的丰盈充实,冬的银装素裹,都宛如一幅幅画卷,但我更钟情于秋天。(《秋天》)
这样的开头既写出四季特点,又巧妙抒发了作者对秋天的情有独钟。
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
即在文章的第一段开篇点题,或点明题目,或点及中心,不拖泥带水,不转弯抹角,而是简洁明快、单刀直人,但要注意字数不宜过多。
例:孩子们会长大的!(刘异韬《宛若孩童》)
例:我与父亲不相见已二年余,我最不能忘记的是他的背影。(朱自清《背影》)
例:深秋的风如同一只温柔的手,拂过辽远的平原,泛起温润的波浪。夜,褪去她华丽的披风,展开宽大的梦一般诡秘的黑色轻轻网向大地。(章蕾《好的故事、老的画》)
例:淡蓝如水的天空飘逸着古色古香的气息,点点行人,如淙淙细流,风携着盈袖的暗香,将这一切裹入似画非画的长卷之中。(吴梦婷《青花瓷》)
这样的开头不仅生动形象,而且能增强文章的气势。
Every girl dreams and Li Xie is no exception. She has read dozens of books on how to be a ballerina and Swam.
每一个女孩都有梦想,李协也不例外。她读了很多书,都是关于如何成为一个芭蕾舞演员的
Lake is her favorite. She hopes one day her dream will come true. She has taken ballet lessons and all her teachers confirm she is a good student.
她最喜欢的是天鹅湖。她希望有一天能梦想成真。她参加了芭蕾舞培训班,所有老师都认为她很优秀。
One day she saw an advertisement that a famous ballerina troupe will be performing in her hometown.
一天,有一则广告说一个著名的芭蕾舞团要在她的家乡演出
Her thoughts ran wild, "I must meet up with the leader of the troupe and show him my skills, " she murmured to herself.
她看到后顿时思绪纷杂,自言自语道:¨我必须要见见团长,展示一下我的`才艺。¨
She dressed herself in her ballerina costume and managed to evade the guards and hid in the dressing room.
她穿上芭蕾服,尽量避开门卫躲进了化妆室。
To her luck the leader entered and she timidly knocked at the door.
很幸运,团长进来了,她胆怯地敲了敲门。
She bravely approached him and handed him a bunch of red roses and in her excitement the thorns pricked her hand but she did not make much ado about the pain.
她鼓足勇气走近他,送上一束红玫瑰。激动之余,玫瑰的刺戳到了她的手,但她根本没有在意。
The leader observed her action as she told him her dream. "Alright, you dance and I will give you my verdict."
在她给团才讲自己的梦想时,团长注意到了她的举止。“好吧,你先跳,我再说我的意见。"
But half way through the dance he stopped her and said, "I'm sorry you're not good enough!"
但是她只跳了一半,团长就让她停下来,说道: ¨我很抱歉你跳得还不。
On hearing this Li Xie ran as fast as her legs could carry her and was ashamed. She gave up her dream.
听到这话,李协非常羞愧,拼命地跑开了。从此,她放弃了梦想。
Many years later, she heard that the same ballet troupe was performing in her town again.
多年以后,她听说原来那个芭蕾舞团又一次来到她家乡演出。
Bitter memories of the leader's harsh words came flooding back to her.
团长尖刻的话语涌上心头,这是一次痛苦的记忆。
This time she was determined to find out Why the leader had told her she was not good enough when all her teachers thought otherwise.
这次她决定向团长问个究竟,为什么别的老师都认为她跳得很好,而他却不这样认为。
This was his reply, "I tell this to every student." She angrily shot back, "You've ruined my life!一 Then she got a further shock, "
团长回答道:u我对每个学生都这样说。¨她生气地反驳说:“可是你毁了我的一生!”团长的回话让她更震惊了:
I remember your gift of roses and how the thorns had pricked your fingers but you carried on bravery.
“我记得你送的玫瑰,刺戤到了你的手指,而你却勇敢地继续表演。
If you only had treated bal}et like that and did not give up so easily; therefore, you still deserve my verdict! "
如果你能以那种精神对待芭蕾舞,就不会轻易放弃了。因此,我的意见对你仍然受用。
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