I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
这本书花了我300元。
I spent 300 yuan on the book.
I paid 300 yuan for the book.
The price of the book is 300 yuan.
It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.
我不懂什么英语,李明也不懂。
I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming.
I know no more English than Li Ming does.
I know as little English as Li Ming does.
一到家,我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。
On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
有一天,小王对张明说:“快给我一张草稿纸,我急着用。谢谢了!”就这样,我被张明顺手递到了小王的手中。小王接过我后就在我的身上乱涂乱画,还把我划破了呢!他不仅把我搞得破烂不堪,还把我随手扔在了地上……
晚上,环卫工人将我扫起,倒入了垃圾车里。垃圾车里又脏又臭,简直不能呼吸了。让我没想到的是,我看到了一位老朋友,铅笔哥哥。铅笔哥哥问我:“你怎么也来了?”我说:“说来话长啊!我们公司里的`一位员工叫小王,他把我拿走了。起初我以为我在办公桌上待了那么多天,终于可以为人类干点事了。可是让我没有想到的是,小王根本就在浪费我,他在我的身上乱涂乱画……算了,不说了,铅笔哥哥你又经历了怎样的事呢?”铅笔哥哥说:“我的遭遇也比你好不到哪里去。公司里的人开始对我特别的好,你也知道我们铅笔的寿命很短。慢慢地我变短了,他们也开始嫌弃我了。就被他们扔进了垃圾车里。其实你不说,我看你这遍体鳞伤的样子我就知道你受的苦不比我少……”
突然车子一阵颠簸,我被颠到了马路上。不过幸运的是,一位戴着红领巾的少先队员把我捡了起来,并把我送进了回收站里,经过人类的重新加工,我又变成了别的样子,重新为人类工作……
人类啊!你们知道吗?我们原本是一棵大树,你们知道小树长成参天的树要多少年的时间吗?至少要十几年。为了更好地为你们人类服务,我们被砍伐并经历了各种痛苦才变成了一张纸,虽然一张纸算不了什么,但是一百张、一千张、一万张呢?那可是一大片森林啊!快点行动起来吧!爱惜我们吧!
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