女儿刚出生就患有脑瘫,个月大时又被诊断患有癫痫。岁老来得女的赵长萱,这位来自哈尔滨的伟大父亲,年如一日,用他最深沉、最厚重的爱,为女儿撑起了一片天空,创造了一个又一个生命奇迹。当《让世界充满爱》的动人旋律在耳畔轻轻流淌,从“唯朵至珍”,到唯爱至真,“朵朵爸爸”感动万千网民,也向我们诠释了这样一个道理:父爱如山,静默无声,不求回报;父爱似海,深沉宽广,足以包容一生。
任何事物都是相互联系的。事物间的关系主要有依存关系(如学与问、主次关系(如奉献与索取、取舍关系(如自卑与自强和条件关系(如继承与创新等。辨明这些关系,有利于立意构思。如:
美国阿拉斯加州涅利斯自然保护区内,曾发生过引狼逐鹿的.故事。原先人们为了保护鹿而把当地的狼消灭了,于是,鹿没有了天敌,终日无忧无虑地饱食于林中。十几年后,鹿群由四百只发展到四万只。然而鹿的体态愚笨,失去了昔日的灵秀,植物也因鹿的迅速繁殖和践踏而凋零了。鹿由于缺乏充分的食物以及安逸少动所带来的体质衰弱而大批死亡。于是人们再次把狼请进来,鹿又奋力奔跑了,保护区恢复了昔日的勃勃生机。
从材料中看,鹿和狼的关系,鹿和周围环境的关系,是相互依存的关系。只有狼和鹿共处,相克相生,才能保证它们不失本性,维持自然界的生态平衡。据此可立意为:生态平衡是自然界的规律,人类亦如此,自然规律不可违。从鹿和周围自然生活环境的关系看,鹿没有了狼这样的天敌,生活太安逸、舒适,于是体态愚笨;后来又有了狼的介入,鹿因躲避狼的捕食而奋力奔跑,终于又恢复了生机。可见生于忧患,死于安乐。
总之,根据材料写作文,审题立意,不能偏离材料自行确定立意,而要全面仔细地阅读材料,从材料出发选择立意的角度。上面的几种方法不是孤立运用,而是相互联系、综合使用的。每则材料都可从多个角度分析立意,然后再选择构思作文。
Study the two pictures above carefully and write an essay entitled “On the Relationship between Environment and Economy” In the essay, you should (1 describe the pictures and interpret their meaning (2 give your opinion with some proof (3 give your conclusion.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points
[参考范文]On the Relationship between Environment and Economy
The two pictures above are both about the relationship between the environment and the economic development. In the first picture, GDP is on the rise while the environment is drastically polluted. In the second picture, economic efficiency progresses with environmental protection. It’s easy to get the conclusion that development according to the second picture is more reasonable than that in the first one.
In the early development of socialism, our country didn’t pay much attention to the issue of environmental protection and savored the bitterness. Now, the government has taken many measures and is implementing the strategy of “sustainable development”. One aspect of the strategy is to develop the economy and take measures to protect the environment at the same time. In this way, we can develop our country in a sustainable manner and our offspring can have enough resources to develop society. If we don’t put much emphasis on the environment issue and excavate the natural resources blindly, our country will become a barren land sooner or later.
In a word, sustainable development is a reasonable strategy which should be implemented for a long time. The nature is providing us with plentiful resources generously, but it may punish us severely if we don’t care her.
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