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春光明媚,鸭妈妈带着小鸭子去外面散步,她们大摇大摆地走在繁华街头。小鸭子根本没注意脚下的下水道,所以一不小心就掉入了下水道。
“嘎嘎嘎……”
鸭妈妈听到了宝宝们的叫声,发现有几只鸭宝宝不见了,于是她急忙走到下水道旁大声喊叫起来,好像在说:“孩子们,你们还好吗?”
“嘎嘎嘎……”下水道里传来了小鸭微弱的声音,仿佛在说:“妈妈,妈妈,快救救我们,我们快被水冲走了。”
这下鸭妈妈急了,她绕着下水道不停地走,急得脑子里一片空白。突然,鸭妈妈对着宝宝们叫了几声——嘎嘎嘎,然后消失在人群中……
原来,鸭妈妈是去找巡警了。她找啊找啊,终于找到了巡警,于是她一边大声地向他们嘎嘎嘎叫,一边用翅膀指着远处——下水道处,还用嘴巴拽巡警的裤脚。
巡警似乎听懂了鸭妈妈的话,跟着鸭妈妈来到了下水道旁。
“哦,原来是因为鸭宝宝们掉进了下水道,所以她找我们来求救。”一个巡警笑着说。接着,他们找来一根较长的绳子,一个巡警把绳子系在自己的腰上,然后爬下下水道,把快要被水冲走的鸭宝宝们救了出来。那个巡警爬上来后,鸭妈妈一直不停的向那个巡警点头,鸭宝宝们互相看了看,也学着鸭妈妈那样,向那位巡警点头,好像在感谢巡警似的。
鸭妈妈又带着他的宝宝们大摇大摆地走在马路上,这时,所有的汽车、自行车、自动车、行人都停住了,给它们让出了道路,看着它们大摇大摆地走过去。
从这个故事中,我看到了人类与动物的和谐,看到了人类对动物的谦让,看到了人类对动物的友好。人与动物是亲密无间的朋友——人人为我,我为人人;动物为我,我为动物!
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2.参考词汇:房租Tent(n..
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
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