今天,我要去的游乐园是一个我作梦也想去的游乐园,它给我的第一感觉是空气十分的新鲜,第二感觉是刺激!
当我来到游乐园的门口,放眼望去,首先映入眼帘的是一个小湖,小湖里的湖水碧绿碧绿的`,湖面上还不时荡起层层波波。小湖上有几座桥,有醉桥、晃桥、立网桥、钢丝桥。桥上有不少人,还不时传来欢声笑语。湖岸上长着一棵棵高大的树木,它们都长着一层层嫩绿的叶子,一阵微风吹来时,柳枝会随风飘荡,好像在向我点头微笑。还有那樱花树开出了一朵朵可爱的樱花,它们有的是紫色的、有的是粉白色的,还有的是粉红色的,一朵朵、一簇簇、一棵棵、一片片,远看仿佛是一片片彩霞。地上呢,冒出了一棵棵绿油油的小草,开出了一朵朵小小的野花。那些野花有各种各样的,有大有小的,颜色也十分的鲜艳。那些草和花铺在大地上就好像铺上一层青绿色的锦毯。
当我进入里面时,我就感到一种前所未有的兴奋感。因为我看水滑道,它是利用水力推动的一种游乐设备,从几层高楼的水滑道起点直接俯冲至下面的池中。我迫不及待的上了水滑道,躺在急速的水流中,自高而下穿越用不锈钢制造的全密封管道。当时,我感觉到我旋转如飞、飞速前进,一切由不得我犹豫和考虑,这种"惊心动魄"的经历好像可以让我立即将学习上的压力、疲倦和烦恼都抛在九霄云外!
玩好水滑道之后,我接着往前走。我看到了高空弹跳又称“蹦极跳”。它最初风靡于欧美等国,后由某公司创始人Cortney Smith先生引入亚洲,并迅速成为亚洲最流行的健康户外运动之一。它有多种玩法:绑腰--踏出弹跳的第一步。绑背--想尝试电梯断线后的坠落吗? 绑脚--可体验奥运跳水选手俯冲的快感。自由式--可碰水、前滚翻、后滚翻、单人跳、双人跳等等。我选择了自由式,跳的那时,高空弹跳不但让我完全感受自由落体的快感,更使我享受反弹失重的乐趣。因此,我除了增加本身的勇气外,还挑战自我的能力,克服恐惧,征服地心引力!
除了这两种以外,我还玩了豪华波浪游艺式飞行塔类转椅型游乐项目。它有着豪华的外面装饰,有趣的运动形式,我和游客们乘坐在垂挂的吊椅上,随转盘的转动和徐徐升起,仿佛翱翔于天空……
夕阳西下,余辉洒满大地,我和家人们依依不舍的离开了这使快乐的天堂——游乐园!
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
此刻,不上学,不被沉重的书包压垮在地,不被困难和陷阱并围的知识包裹,同学们乘上通往“极乐”的车。快,快,快把书包暂时都扔到角落,背上装有食物的旅包,向梦寐以求的观音山游乐园出发!
晴晴的天,蓝蓝的云,到站后的我胆战心惊。一声声的尖叫,既让我害怕,又让我跃跃欲试的高级游戏——波浪大翻滚。经过三波的同学,终于到我了。不知怎么的,脚不听使唤了,斗啊斗。我想放弃,却又不舍得走。忐忑不安的我下定决心,想:还好有买保险啊!走就走!我上去后,不关是脚,全身都要垮了,命悬一线的时刻,企不另我丢魂落魄?安全带,OK!“铃——”本像上课铃的声音,却比往常要来得恐怖。升高,我闭上眼,不时好奇地往下看,很快就后悔了,可接二连三地看,真是个死性不改的家伙。下面的水喷着,时不时在我向下翻滚的时候,使劲得喷,吓得哦鬼哭狼嚎。我开始扯的着喉咙大喊,几乎发出了有史以来最高的分贝。上上下下,呜呜啊啊,机器无情地控制住了我们的声音,没办法啊,大家都是“明知山有虎,偏向虎山行!”终于,刺激的第一轮过去了,当我下去时,手早出汗了,脸烧得通红。接下来的一班,像宇航员归来采访时似得冲上来问我们:“好玩吗?恐怖吗?刺激吗?”毋庸置疑,当然!虽回答不同,但意思却相同。
种种刺激,种种兴奋,种种紧张,尽在观音山·梦幻海岸主题乐园。放飞心灵,接受自由,放下苦恼,来这只为三个字“玩,玩,玩!”
暑假的一天,天空晴朗,我和妈妈来到游乐园。
游乐园里热闹非凡,有的在玩激流勇进,有的在玩疯狂老鼠,有的在勇探“十八层地狱”,有的在玩青蛙跳、碰碰车。我在那里转了很久,最后选定了一个目标“海盗船”,我和妈妈一点也不犹豫,立刻坐了上去,海盗船慢慢摇了起来,之后海盗船越摇越快,当海盗船摇得飞快时,我的心怦怦直跳,好像人要从里面落下来,我和妈妈大叫起来说:“快停下来,快停下来啊!”三分钟过去了,船最后停了下来,可我的心还在怦怦直跳,海盗船真恐怖。
过了一会,我又看见了一个好玩的游戏,激流勇进。我立刻冲上去。车子慢慢开动起来,到了一个大坡,它慢慢开了上去,到了一个最高点,一下子冲了下去,太恐怖了,车子到了一个山洞,到处都是恐怖的叫声,又到了一的最高点,一下子冲了下去,很快地开到了终点,游戏结束了。作文
游乐园真好玩,我依依不舍得离开了游乐园。
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
天,爸爸妈妈带我和表妹去杭州乐园,杭州乐园又称儿童乐园。
我们费了九牛二虎之力才找到了儿童乐园,那里的游戏项目可真多,有水上乐园、蹦床、过山车、海盗船……。
最刺激的要算水上乐园了。在那里,一个个充满气的空气球漂浮在水面上,我和表妹一起钻了进去,在空气球里爬来爬去,只要往上爬空气球就会转起来,如果使劲的往上爬,那就会更加刺激,它会随着你的动力一起连转好几圈,水花就会隔着一层透明塑料皮往你脸上直奔来,水波一圈圈的大起来,又慢慢的消失了,再看看表妹吓得一直哭个不停,你瞧我们俩都成落汤鸡了。
当然刺激的还在后头呢,现在我上了海盗船,就要成为一名海盗了。我用手握紧栏杆,生怕摔跤,海盗船越荡越高,越荡越刺激,这往上一荡就像荡上天空一样刺激,往下一荡就像飞下地狱一样低。我还看见有些人闭着眼睛发出一阵阵尖叫声,我也下意识地把眼睛闭紧了。
这么刺激的儿童乐园真好玩,儿童乐园——儿童游玩的地方,你将永远留在我的童年里。
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