好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
一个不足10平方米的`房间,却成了我生活中的乐园,它伴着我笑,伴着我哭,伴着我成长。因此,我为它取了个非常华美的名字——天堂乐园。
我喜欢我的天堂乐园,在这个乐园里,我自由自在,无所顾忌。我喜欢在我的乐园里,把音乐开到最大档,尽情舞蹈;我喜欢在我的乐园里,安静地看书、思考、做作业;我喜欢在我的乐园里,玩着幼稚的过家家,为布娃娃打针,哄她睡觉;我喜欢在我的乐园里,看鸟儿划过天际然后消失不见
现在,让我来介绍一下天堂乐园吧!跨进天堂乐园的大门,你一定会被眼前的景象惊住。为什么呢?嘻嘻,因为墙上贴满了各式各样的动漫图片。有漂亮美丽的人型电脑,小叽;有活泼可爱,爱打抱不平的木之本樱;有帅气冷酷的日向枣;有做事不经大脑的佐仓蜜柑;有坚持奋斗的偶像希良梨;有冷热搭配的SHIPS组合怎么样,难道这些还不能证明我是一名的的确确的动漫迷吗?动漫天地介绍完了,也该来看看我的智慧图书馆了吧!这里面的书我敢打保票,每一本都会让你爱不释手,原因就是智慧图书馆里五花八门的书都有。喜欢探索的,《十万个为什么》为你解答;喜欢破案的,请跟《冒险小虎队》走,或去和《福尔摩斯》研究研究;喜欢小说的,那就要慢慢看咯!我看还是先从《爱的教育》开始吧,能好好陶冶一下我们的情操哦!还不止这些呢,童话、你要什么有什么。再转头看看我的小窝吧!我一年里起码有一大半的时间是和它一起度过的呢。再来瞧瞧窝的健身房,哎~~只有跑步机,毽子和绳子,呵呵,暂时我的健身房还只能放下这三样东西。最后望向我的书桌吧,不好意思,已经被它可爱的主人弄得乱七八糟的了,但鹤立鸡群的台灯还是能看得一清二楚的。
如何呢?这样的美妙天地,天堂乐园这个名字不是当之无愧吗?
一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.
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