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万唯中考英语常考作文【一】

1。头绪分明，脉络清楚

写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。突出中心，详略得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：

One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。用活语言，准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文：

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后：

The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。

"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

万唯中考英语常考作文【二】

天气日渐热了，空气漂浮令人窒息的热气，太阳疯狂了，到处布满了金色。我趁着空闲到家后面的山里游玩乘凉。

山上满是苍翠欲滴的绿，阳光被实实在在挡在外面；我庆幸着，终于摆脱了这恼人的炎热的阳光，悠闲地坐在绿荫环绕的一座小亭子小憩。这里，空气不再是热的，这里，不是太阳的地盘；我仿佛挣脱了夏季的束缚，打开心扉地享受这来自大自然的赐予。

不经意间注意到亭子旁边，茂密的树丛，上面除去绿，还能看见另一些颜色；近点看，是淡紫色，再近点，终于看清了，那是牵牛花，它们奄奄一息，花瓣儿已经蜷缩成一团，垂着头；它们快要死了，在太阳的照射下，脆弱美丽的花可是经不起这些阳光，我不由得心生怜惜之情。

在这绿意盎然的夏，牵牛花却要死亡，结束生命，这难道不令人悲哀。可是，几天之后，天却变了。晴朗、湛蓝的天变得黑暗了。下起雨了，雷在咆哮，雨也在***；空气里弥漫着泥土的气息。日渐地雨停了，风静止了，一切都恢复了平静。天空返晴了，太阳变得温和，散着柔和的光。

我第三去了一趟小亭子，携带一本书，依然坐在那儿。令我意想不到的是，一些新奇的颜色进入我的眼睛，仔细看，那是紫色，那是重获新生的牵牛花。它们张大嘴巴似的张开了花瓣儿，挺挺的；再往后看，绿色的草丛上布满了零零星星的紫色，我看到它们张着笑脸，在欢乐的海洋里荡漾；牵牛花儿们复活了，宣告了它们对夏季的挑战，它们不会在它的打击下，同意失败。我懂了，那些紫色的意义；即便在严酷的威压下，生命的期望依然存在。

万唯中考英语常考作文【三】

导入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势

结论：

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论オ