初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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在上帝赠与我们的礼物中,可以说让我们无时不刻都在爱的怀抱中长大,这个礼物是的礼物之一,大爱无言,其实很多爱我们不要细说就会由衷的体验到里面的各种滋味。平时的妈妈总是不辞劳苦的帮我们整理房间收拾衣服,让我们可以一回来就可以睡上温馨的床和穿上洗干净的衣服。
父母对自己的爱永远是无私的,我的父母就是这么爱我的,让我感动,回忆就好像开了闸的洪水,汹涌而来……
那是一个早上,雾盖住了整个世界,病中的妈妈让我穿厚点,带把雨伞,可我觉得今天不会下雨,只多穿了件衣服,并没有带伞。到了中午,斗大的雨点落了下来,我想:“今天一定要成落汤鸡了,”我正准备冲进雨中,看见一个熟悉的面孔正朝我跑来,我仔细一看,原来是病中的母亲,母亲跑到我面前,对我说:“孩子,别冻感冒了,把衣服穿上,把雨伞打上,”我说:“哦,妈妈,你怎么跑出来了,您的感冒别加重了,”妈妈说:“没事。”
爸爸对我的爱却是深沉又严厉。小时候,我有一个毛病,就是晚上睡觉被子就会掉到地上,连我自己都不知道。被子掉到底上,我就会感冒。爸爸知道以后,每天半夜起床,都要帮我盖被子。日复一日,毫无怨言。每当我犯错误的时候,父亲就会严厉的批评我。
父母对我的爱,总是激励着我,克服学习和生活的困难,克服自己的毛病,成为有用的人才,报答父母,报效祖国。
今天,我读了一本由金波大师写的.《影子人》。
这是作家金波20xx年自选的短篇童话集,收录了作家创作的六十余篇童话佳作,意境优美,感人至深。其中,许多作品被选入大陆及港台语文教科书。可见,《影子人》是多么意味深长,优雅的书。
看《影子人》吧,不会有错。
《井底之蛙》这个成语故事,里面是说一只青蛙生活在一口废井里,它自己觉得生活的自在、快乐,但我觉得那只自大的青蛙很可怜,它以为天空就是它看到的那么大,却不知道外面的世界有多精彩。读了这个故事,我懂得了人外有人,天外有天,学无止境,一往直前的道理。不能做井底之蛙,学了一点儿知识就沾沾自喜,以为自己什么都懂了。只有通过不断的努力学习,才能学到更多的知识。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
今天我向大家介绍的是《狼王梦》,这本书是著名动物小说家沈石溪写的,它主要讲了一个关于狼、关于爱、关于梦想的故事,讲述了一匹母狼可歌可泣的生活。母狼紫岚在一个暴风骤雨的晚上产下了五只小狼崽,但其中一只小狼崽,却因为母狼的疏忽,丧身在暴风雨中。紫岚给大儿子取名叫黑仔,二儿子取名叫蓝魂儿,三儿子取名叫双毛,女儿叫媚媚,由于大儿子黑仔长得极像当年紫岚喜欢的`黑桑,于是紫岚对黑仔视爱如珍,精心培养它,但是却被一只大金雕给扔下悬崖,于是紫岚只好把希望寄托在蓝魂儿、双毛身上,但他们都是在快要登上王位的时候,结束了生命。紫岚只好把希望寄托在了子孙上,但她却看见那只夺走黑仔生命的金雕在媚媚洞口盘旋,为了圆她的狼王梦,与金雕同归于尽了。
在人们的心目中,狼是邪恶的,翻看《成语字典》,什么狼子野心、狼狈为奸、狼心狗肺……全是形容狼的残暴、奸恶和凶险。
《狼王梦》这本书每一个扣人心弦的动作,让我对狼都有了更深刻的认识。不管是凶恶的母狼、还是残忍的猎豹……他们都有着至高无上的母爱。就像现实生活中一样,哪位家长不希望自己的儿女成才,所以我衷心祝愿紫岚可以圆了她的梦。
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