本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
在马其顿和希腊东部的色萨利之间矗立着一座高山。大雾弥漫的山顶直插云霄。山顶上,众神们的家园沐浴在阳光之中。宙斯作为山神和人类之父主宰着那里的一切。总的说来,宙斯并不是一个独裁统治者。但毫无疑问,凡事山神们都要听从他的命令。宙斯将男女山神12人组成一个委员会,宙斯本人则坐第一把交椅,是众神与人类的\'太上皇,也是雷电的操纵者。他旁边是他那傲慢且嫉妒的皇后赫拉。波塞冬是大海的统治者。哈得斯是主宰阴间的冥王,他在委员会中没有席位。阿波罗是太阳神、音乐和诗神。他的孪生姐妹阿耳特弥斯是月亮和狩猎女神。雅典娜是智慧女神和家居艺术品的守护女神。赫提斯是家室之神,象征着家庭中的生命与幸福。气势汹汹的阿瑞斯是战神。媚人的阿芙罗狄蒂是爱与美神。火神赫菲斯托斯是宙斯雷电的创造者。以翅代步的信使海尔墨斯掌管商业与发明事务。谷物与丰收女神得墨特尔负责管理农业,她是文明之母。
以上所提到的主要天神们都假装成凡人的样子,他们的美丽与魅力无可匹敌。因常受到凡人情感与愿望的感染,他们不时地勃然大怒,妒嫉别人。他们卷入与人类世界无休止的争斗中。在奥林波斯,他们之间也充满了阴谋与权力之争。在凡人的世界里,他们经历了敌对与挫折。他们珍惜人间的爱与友善。这群长生不老的天神们的外表与行为完全符合人间的方式。这就是奥林波斯山神们的本来面目。
当六月的清风从最辽阔的地方吹来,所有的激情都被黄河的涛声激荡,十年寒窗,浇灌蓓蕾,在高考中绽放艳丽色彩。由此,人们执着于高考,仿佛只有高考才能成功。但我不禁发问:难道成功只能依托于高考么?难道只有高考才能使梦想成真么?来自心底的声音告诉我:高考之外,还有更多成才路。
在高考的战场上打赢一场漂亮的战役是幸运的,但没有从高考中脱颖而出的人也不会有遗憾,因为他们会欣赏到别样的风景,会活得更加卓尔不群。1930年国立青岛大学招生,文学院院长闻一多亲自出题,一位考生的答卷让他再三拍案叫绝,尽管这位考生数学零分,还是被青岛大学文学院破格录取。他就是著名诗人臧克家。
雪莲能绽放在冰峰之巅,香飘万里;梅花能俏丽在寒冬腊月,与雪共舞。高考之外,亦能散发自己的万丈光芒。作家韩寒少年时期就已经发表过多篇文章,期末考试时却包揽下所有功课的不及格。后来,他自我解嘲说:“七门功课红灯,照亮我的前程。”于是,这位扬言要用稿费来养活自己的少年,毅然退学放弃高考,专注于写作,从此,一个个美丽的故事便在他的笔下如绚烂画卷般铺展开来,而他,也真的实现了当初的诺言,在现代文坛上留下了自己的\'名字。在千军万马过独木桥的时候,在百万大学生矗立桥头无人识的时候,韩寒用实际行动证明:高考之外,也能成才。
人生的每一个岔路口,最能发挥自己优势的选择才是最正确的选择,而这个选择,于千千万万的普通人,是高考,于学生卢彦杰,却是做一个最好的自己。当所有的高三学子废寝忘食地沉浸在备战高考的紧张学习中时,同为高三学生的卢彦杰却为自己的最新发明举办了新闻发布会,得到了多方赞赏,并因此获得了高校自主招生的资格。无独有偶,学生赵柏闻也是因为科研方面的成就而被华大录取,现在的他在世界最大的基因组研究中心挑起了大梁,书写着一段新的传奇。
不是一切古树都将被狂风暴雨折断,不是一切种子都要植根于肥沃的土壤,不是一切鲜花都只绽放在人间四月天,不是一切人才都要经过高考的检验,只要生命想要怒放,每条路都是无限精彩。唐伯虎潜心学画,终成知名画家;陆羽弃佛从文,终成著名学者;徐霞客游行天下,终成一代大家。人生世事,变化无常,我们可以相信命运之说,但我们不能认命。高考落榜,孟非南下淘金,却四处碰壁,他当过搬运工、送水工,也开过超市,做过保安。这样的他,对于高考的挫败,没有执迷,没有惘然,而是尽力把工作做得出色。终于在黑暗中看到满天星光,凭借自己的语言天赋与扎实的文学功底,登上了主持的巅峰。
有句话说:“生活就像一个大染缸,什么颜色都有,要想融入进去,你就得学会接受生活为你染的颜色。”我并不赞同这样的看法。生活的道路不止一条,但如果只是被动地接受世俗化的标准,那就只能在人云亦云中迷失了真实的自我,盲目地选择那些并不适合自己的道路,就只能为自己戴上沉重的枷锁。表姐今年高四,成绩平平,唯有语文极其突出,写得一手好文章,老师建议参加创新作文大赛,说不定可以上名校,姑妈却极力发对,认为那样不仅会耽误功课,而且没有高考实实在在的分数,以后也不会有出息。于是,去年高考落榜的表姐选择了继续复读。唏嘘惋叹才华陨落的同时,更多的是深深的无奈,或许,就是这样的“一元化成功” 限定了千万学子的高考之路。
梭罗说过:“从圆心可以画出多少条半径,生活的方式就有多少。”事实确是如此,不同的人有不同的人生。“仰天长笑出门去,我辈岂是蓬蒿人”是青莲居士的潇洒人生;“惟恐双溪舴艋舟,载不动许多愁”是李易安的哀愁人生;“对酒当歌,人生几何”是曹孟德的壮丽人生;“采菊东篱下,悠然见南山”是陶渊明的超脱人生;“举世皆浊我独清,众人皆醉我独醒”是屈原的清高人生;“春花秋月何时了,往事知多少”是李煜的哀怨人生;“人有悲欢离合,月有阴晴圆缺,此事古难全”是苏东坡的豁达人生……不同的人生有不同的体味,毕竟,生命的意义在于创造一个个独特的自我。
在文章《通往广场的路不止一条》中,父亲的话让我受益匪浅;“通往广场的路不止一条,生活也是一样,假如你发现走这条路不能到达目的地的话,就走另一条试试!”窃以为,人生也是如此,天生我材必有用,高考之外亦有更多的成才路。所以,我静静地敲下这些文字,为自己,为未来,争取一个机会,因为我懂得:
与其千军万马过独木桥,不如条条道路通罗马。
Between Macedon and Thessaly of eastern Greece there stood a high mountain.Its cloudy top rushed into the very heavens.On the top of the mountain, the home of the gods was bathed in brightness. At Olympus Zeus ruled as the father of gods and men. Zeus was not a crude ruler by any standards.All the gods listened to his final words,it was true.But Zeus made them all sit on a committee of twelve members,including six gods and six goddesses. The first in the Olympian crowd sat Zeus himself. He was the overlord of gods and men and the operator of the thunderbolt .Next to him was Hera,his proud and greeneyed queen.Poseidon was ruler of the sea,And Hades,king of the lower world,had no seat in the committee.Apollo was the god of the sun,music and poetry,while his twinsister Artemis was the goddess of the moon and the chase. Athena was the goddess of wisdom and patroness of house holdarts.Hestin,the goddess of the family,represented home life and family happiness.The frightening Ares was the god of war,and the charming Aphrodite the goddess of love and beauty.The god of fire,Hephaestus,was the forger of the thunderbolts of Zeus.The wing footed messenger Hermes was the god of invention and commerce;and the goddess of grains and harvests,Demeter,looked after agriculture and stood for mother ofcivilization.
All the chief gods mentioned above took human forms of incomparable beauty and grace. Often moved by human feelings and desires,they frequently gave way to anger and jealousy.They became involved in ceaseless battles with the world of man. Among themselves at Olympus they plotted and struggled for power.In the human world they experienced competitions and difficulties.They enjoyed earthly friendships and loves.Acrowd of everlasting gods looked and acted in a perfectly human fashion that is what all gods at Olympus actually were.
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
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