您好!
外婆您长得究竟什么样子的?是瘦瘦的,还是胖胖的.?您能告诉我天堂是什么样子的吗?是美丽的城堡,还是平淡无奇的样子的呢?外婆天上有些什么,除了月亮、太阳、星星、白云就什么也没有了吗?是天堂好还是人间好?等等一些问题我都想知道它的答案。
外婆我这是第一次给您写信也不知道说什么好,先给您说说外公吧!
外公呀,现在身体还是不好时常得病,自己照顾不好自己,这不姨妈又回老家照顾他老人家:并且外公还是象以往一样天天抱着他那心爱地酒壶喝呀喝,他还天天拿着年年岁岁跟着他的烟杆;他的脾气也象以往一样倔。我记得有一次姨妈好心的扶着他,他却说:“我又没老死,再说我又不是没有脚,还让你来扶我!”姨妈听了很生气,就不扶他了。
再来说说我吧,我现在很有进步,比如有10篇,我都有6、7篇是good(good是好的意思)1、2篇是good+(good+是最好的意思)另外的1、2篇是优+(优+是中等偏上的意思)不过我会继续努力的!我写的错别字也渐渐减少了,以前我只写5个字,就有3、4个是错的。而现在如果有5个字,我错的字数只有2个以下,有时还不错呢!
请您安息吧,家里的一切都非常好,经济发展的很迅速,我家都买了一台电脑呢。
祝您过得幸福、快乐!!!
雪儿敬上
6月7日
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
是啊!别看只是普普通通的一张纸片,里面寄托着多少我们对老师的崇敬和情意呀!这是千金换不来的师生之情,古人云:“千里送鹅毛,礼轻情义重”。师生之情是什么都不能换的。
正因为如此,当吴老师收到这一份轻之鸿毛的礼物时,从她那充满笑容的脸上,我们看出了她是如此的满足,我心想:这样都能满足?那我们岂不是太对不起老师了?老师为我们付出那么多,日以夜继地为我们备课改作业,废寝忘食地为我们操心操劳,为我们成长的旅途上呕心沥血,洒满辛劳的汗水,而我们还没有学有所成,甚至我们还时不时淘气搞破坏……今天,我们只是在一张纸上写下了一些长词短句,她就那么容易满足了,看来我们要有所觉悟了。
曾经有一位老师带着四个学生过马路,途中遇到一辆发了疯的汽车狂冲过来,这位老师为了保护自已的学生,迅速地用身体挡住学生并用尽所有的力气把学生推出去,而自已却不幸倒在了滚滚的车轮底下。悲剧发生了,这位老师用实际行动又一次证明了老师的.伟大和无私。
我以后一定要更加努力地学习,不辜负老师对我的培养和期望,用优异的成绩报答老师的恩情。老师,谢谢您!一张白纸上诉说不完我们对您的感谢之情,也无法表达我们对您的敬意之心。但愿那张小小的纸片,能带着我的小小心愿:愿您一切的疲惫与不快都化为云烟随着清风而逝;愿您内心的静谧与惬意伴着我的祝福悄然而至。愿所有的幸福都陪伴着您,仰首是春,俯首是秋;愿所有的欢乐都追随着您,月圆是诗,月缺是画!
秋的美是理智的——它不像春那么妩媚,夏那么袒露,冬那么含蓄。
秋的美是成熟的——它不像春那么羞涩,夏那么火热,冬那么内向。
秋,收获的季节,金黄的季节,朴素的季节。当树叶日渐稀疏,秋林便显出了它的秀美。那是一份不需要任何点缀的洒脱。拥抱秋的落叶,不仅是那经霜的绯红,更是那临风的飘逸。
硕果累累的园林,更为金秋增添了丰收的喜悦。那圆润可爱的红苹果,水汪汪的紫葡萄,香味四溢的黄酥梨,那正在收获的金色稻田……它们正用姹紫嫣红妆扮大地,用成熟和丰收的浓墨描绘沉甸甸的秋天!
拥抱秋,秋使薄如蝉翼的秋雾凉衫,来到人间。她趁大地还来不及叠起天使馈赠的雾衣,就挥动神笔,将赤、橙、黄、绿、青、蓝、紫融为一体,一往情深地挥洒在万物之上。雾退云消,初升的朝阳惊奇地发现:哦!迎接它的,竟是一派赫然金黄!
拥抱秋,秋使天空蓦地高远了。瞧,朝阳已不再是鲜红,而是耀目的金色。万物已不再遵循本身吸收或放射色光的规律,无一例外地放出金黄色彩。鸟绒似的秋夜,十五的月亮犹如一只盛满黄金的玉盘。那熠熠发光的小星星,大概就是从圆盘中撒落的点点碎玉!
拥抱秋,秋使那满眼的叶子越发显得引人注目。那无数的叶,载满了冬的孕育,春的萌发,夏的茁壮,凭着强烈的追求,达到生命的沸点。好一片成熟的金黄!深的、浅的、浓的、淡的,都曾以不同的姿态迎接阳光,而今又以不同层次的金黄染遍大地。
拥抱秋,秋使我情不自禁地伫立窗前,倾听那由远而近秋雨“沙沙”的脚步声。听啊!它伴着秋风,时而如骏马奔腾而来,时而如波涛悄然而去。它是一支曲子,它的音符在田野上跳跃,在果园里回荡,在高速公路上奔驰……阵阵秋雨,是秋的雄壮的交响乐,它激越的旋律,领我翱翔在秋的怀抱,使我领略到秋韵的雄浑、壮丽。
拥抱秋,秋使我充满激情……
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
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