初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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Today, as people live a better life, they chase for more enjoyment.
We can see from the news that when the holiday comes, there are so many people gather in the scenery site. People like to travel today, they can take a plane, take the bus or even take a bike. On my opinion, the best way to travel is by train.
First, it is very cheap. Compare with other ways, such as plane and bus, train is less expensive, people can save a lot of money.
Besides, taking the train is much safer.
People don’t have to worry about crush, which is more happen in the plane or bus. Second, we can enjoy the scenery in the train.
Though the train is very slow, we can have a good sight of the beautiful scenery, when we go to Tibet, we can see different colors and different mountains during the trip. Taking the train is the best way to travel.
今天,随着人们过上更好的生活,人们追求的娱乐。我们可以从新闻上看到当节假日来临的时候,很多人聚集在景点。现在,人们喜欢旅游,他们可以坐飞机,坐巴士甚至骑单车。在我看来,最好的旅游方式是坐火车。第一,这很便宜。和其他方式,如飞机和巴士,坐火车便宜很多,人们可以省下很多钱。而且,做坐火车也更加安全。人们不用担心坠毁,这地发生在飞机和巴士上。第二,我们可以在火车上欣赏风景。虽然火车很慢,我们可以好好看看美丽的风景,当我们去西藏的时候,可以在旅途中看到不同的颜色和不同的大山。坐火车是最好的旅游方式。
星期三,学校组织六年级全体师生去盐城参加生命践旅。
我们首先参观的是盐城科技馆。俯视整个建筑,其造型犹如一把可以打开科技迷宫的钥匙。让我们了解了许多科学知识。
工作人员首先为我们表演了名为“气球 style ”的实验。他们先从柠檬上切下一片柠檬皮,把从柠檬皮里挤出的柠檬汁滴在气球表面上,只听“砰”的一声,气球爆炸了!大家十分惊讶。工作人员不仅没有碰到气球,还能使气球爆炸?惊讶之余,工作人员为我们揭开了秘密:原来气球是用橡胶做成的,而柠檬汁中的柠檬酸与橡胶发生化学反应,使气球表面的橡胶迅速腐蚀掉,使气球的表面形成了一个小洞,里面的气体迅速外泄,使气球爆炸。我不禁感叹,真是“活到老,学到老”呀!
随后,我们分组参观了二楼和三楼的四个展厅。给我印象最深的是“科学与发现”中的“奇幻世界”。“奇幻世界”是由无数面镜子组成的,从入口进入,你仿佛真的进入了一个奇幻世界,四周都是镜子,里面有无数的“我”。令你我分不清东西南北,我只好靠着镜子前行。咦,那个好像是出口,我飞奔过去,“砰”的一声,我的头撞到了墙壁上,真疼!我不得不小心的摸索着,终于,我找到了出口,“逃”出了这个是非之地。
其次,我们去了第二个景点海盐博物馆。海盐博物馆记载了盐城产盐的历史,使我们领悟劳动人民“煮海为盐”的历史文明。用盐做成的雕像栩栩如生,再次展现了伟人的风姿。
我们的最后一站是森林公园。公园里有风车,凉亭,九曲桥等等。公园里的各种花竞相开放,争奇斗艳。垂杨柳吐出翡翠似的嫩芽,展示了春天的勃勃生机。小河里的水碧波荡漾,鱼儿在水中自由的玩耍。驯马场里有几匹品种不同的骏马,如果不是时间的关系,我一定要骑马过一次瘾,感觉骑马的乐趣。最后,我们全班同学在公园前合影留念。
这次的盐城一日游,使我受益匪浅,终生难忘!
The Best Way of Traveling最好的旅游方式
People travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. To me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot.人们会乘坐飞机、火车、轮船、公交车去旅游。对于我来说,最好的旅游方式是暑假期间徒步旅游。
On a summer vacation I travel to refresh myself and to see the countryside. When I use my feet and walk on a grass covered path or among the hills I feel detached from the noise of the city and closer to the nature. And when I travel on foot I get more freedom. I can plan my own schedule. I can choose my own route. I can stop where I like. And I can see things and people that I might miss if I travel on a train or on a bus.暑假的时候,我通过旅游去释放自己和游览乡间。当我用双脚走在铺满小草的小径或山间时,我感觉(自己)远离城市的喧嚣,并且更亲近大自然。当我徒步旅行时我可以得到更多的自由。我可以自己选择行程。我可以自己选择路线。只要喜欢,我就可以停下来。而且我可以看到很多人和事,那些我可能乘坐火车或公车旅行而错失的。
When faster and more convenient ways for travel are becoming available, I still favor using my own feet. I get much pleasure from it. 当更快、更方便的旅游方式变成通用的,我仍然支持用自己的双脚(旅行),我从中得到了许多乐趣。
“天造地设九龙舞,鬼斧神工八峰盘”。这就是对九龙谷的写照。今天,爸爸妈妈终于可以带着我一起去九龙谷游玩了。
吃过早饭,我们便准备出发了。怎么去呢?爸爸说:“不如我们骑自行车骑到九龙谷去吧!我带陈奕晗。”开始我并不赞同,但后来我也被他们说服了。然后,我们一家人就去租车,租好了车后就上路了。
一路上,我很兴奋,话多的说不完,一直在说说说。因为我们都没去过,不知道到底有多远。经过凯龙集团后,我们就真正进入了原野,路旁有还没有完全采摘的玉米、村户人家的菜园、还有一望无际的稻田……终于我们看到了一个大坝,妈妈提议我们上去瞧瞧,好不容易爬上去,太令人失望了,大大的水库里只有一汪浅浅的潭水。水库周围的树上有几只白鹤在那里无精打采。唉,看来干旱带给我们的伤害很大呀!上坡的时候,爸爸妈妈骑不动了,就下来走。就这样走走骑骑,骑骑走走,一路艰难前行。
上了一个大坡,爸爸说,快了,还有三公里啦,加把油吧。爸爸带上我一路风驰电掣的顺坡而下,下到坡底,宽阔的柏油马路被窄窄的水泥路代替了。这时,鸡叫声此起彼伏,鸟叫声也多了起来,我似乎也闻到了九龙谷的气息,转过一个弯,我忽然听到了羊叫声,怎么只闻其声不见其影呢?终于一只羊探出了头,冲我“咩咩”的叫着,好像是欢迎我们的到来,我也学着它的样给它打招呼。1只、2只、3只,哇,好多呀!于是我赶紧拿起相机照起来。照完以后,羊的主人说:“小小艺术家,可要记得给我寄照片来哟。”
又转了一道弯,终于来到了九龙谷,开始我们以及各类的没有半点力气了,爬了一会儿,我喊不舒服,于是我们放弃了继续前行。
虽然没有爬上金顶,但我还是觉得很开心!九龙谷,下次我一定要征服你!
“叮铃铃”闹钟一响,我马上从床上跳了起来,因为今天我要和爸爸、妈妈去旅游。
我匆匆忙忙吃了一个玉米棒,就迫不及待地催着妈妈出发了,到了车站,我们足足等了四十分钟车才来,我都急死了。上车后,导游让我们做自我介绍又带我们做游戏,我给大家讲了个笑话,把大家逗得哈哈大笑,不知不觉就到了广宁,吃了中餐,我们游玩了“竹海大观”那里的竹子很多很多,我仿佛置身竹的海洋。下午三点半我们又开始赶路,到了晚上八点我们来到广西的贺州,吃了晚饭,我和爸爸、妈妈上街逛了逛,买了许多东西。
第二天吃了早餐我们就去了“姑婆山”,我看到了“仙姑瀑”,因为昨夜下了一场雨,今天瀑布气势特别雄伟,老远就听到“哗哗”的响声,走近了,瀑布好高啊,如烟、如雾,让我想起了李白的诗句“飞流直下三千尺,疑是银河落九天。”后来我们又去了酿酒厂和茶园。吃完中饭,我们去“玉石林”观看了那儿的奇形怪状的石头。参观完“玉石林”我们又开始赶路了,大约晚上七点我们到了梧州,梧州很漂亮有小香港之称。
第三天是我最高兴的一天,早晨我迅速地吃完早餐就坐车去了“盘龙峡”,到了那儿,我们先坐游览车去山顶,再顺着溪流而下,一路上我看到许多水车,大大小小在溪流上旋转,还有许多大大小小的瀑布,非常壮观。我走了九百九十九级石级就来到了漂流的地方,那儿有“勇士漂”和“逍遥漂”。一米四以下的小孩不能玩“勇士漂”,我好遗憾,只好玩“逍遥漂”了,我穿上救生服戴上头盔就坐到皮筏上,皮筏就摇摇晃晃地出发了。刚开始时我很害怕,以为会掉到水里,我两手紧紧地抓住皮筏两边的扶手,因为山势很陡,水流很急,皮筏开始向下冲,水都涌进了皮筏里面来了,我怕船会翻,爸爸说:“没关系,不会翻的。”皮筏就这样旋转着往下冲,我的心都提到了嗓子眼,不过我感到很刺激。过了一会儿,水流平缓一些了,皮筏也不摇晃了,我也不害怕了,开始站起来玩溪流里的水,欣赏岸边的景色,大约过了二十分钟,到码头了,我们上了岸,换了衣服就坐着回家了,一路上我还在回味着那精彩的一幕。
我们学校得到了新加坡爱心人士的援建后,在新加坡林瑞森部长、范文媚博士和副主席陈丽蓉博士的鼎力支持下,展开了“世界同窗这个学习交流活动。今年是第二届了,我有幸能被选中,和我一起被选中的还有六、一班的左坤阳和五、二班的游敏。当我知道这个消息后,我既兴奋又感激,满怀着希望等待着这一天的到来。
这一天终于来了,一大早我校的郑主任把我们送到了机场。到了机场,我看见还有其它几个受援建学校和我们同龄的.小朋友。从他们的交谈中,我知道了他们个个才华横溢。其中一个还跳起了街舞,听说还上过星光大道和非常6+1。
到达新加坡的时候已经是晚上了。一出机场,我们就看见不远处有两个漂亮的大姐姐在向我们微笑、挥手。原来“世界同窗委员会还特意派人来接待我们。她们一个叫思慧姐姐,一个叫慧琴姐姐。听慧琴姐姐说新加坡主要的语言是英语、华语和淡米尔语;他们的国花是胡姬花;国旗是红白相间的,旗面除了一个白色的月亮和五白色的星星,其它都是红色,红色代表新加坡与其它国家的友谊,白色月亮代表青年人的进步和崛起,五个白色的星星代表新加坡人民追求的民主、进步、公正、和平、平等。
在新加坡学习的十几天里我们到过新加坡的许多旅游胜地。其中让我记忆犹新的是鱼尾狮公园。鱼尾狮公园位于新加坡河口,它是新加坡的标志和象征。1972年,鱼尾狮由雕刻家林新浪先生和两个孩子共同完成。鱼尾狮塑像高8、6米,重70吨。狮头鱼身坐立在水波上的鱼尾狮,其设计理念是将现实和传说合二为一:狮头代表传说中的狮城,至于塑像的鱼尾造型浮泳于层层海浪间,即代表新加坡从渔港变为商港。
新加坡数有花园城市之称,那里的路是柏油路,非常宽阔。车辆井然有序地地行驶在宽阔的马路上,穿梭于城市之间。马路中间的隔离带都种着热带雨林植物,那些奇花异草散发出阵阵清香给行人神清气爽的感觉。最让我震惊的是,无论走到哪里,都看不见地上有任何纸屑、果皮等垃圾,到处都是那样洁净。原来新加坡“花园城市之称由此得来。
新加坡能如此美丽,是新加坡人共同建设维护的成果。同学们,让我们也呼吁我们全中国的人民携起手来共同建设、维护我们的祖国,让我们的祖国也变成花园式的家园吧。
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