排比句式的作文开头成长

排比句式的作文开头成长

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排比句式的作文开头成长

排比句式的作文开头成长【一】

冬去春来,百花盛开,不知不觉已到了春游的好时机。我建议到橡皮坝去游玩,因为那的空气新鲜,对身体有好处。

从河堤走,可以到“紫薇园”休息,“紫薇园”的花草树木都很美。你瞧!小草弟弟正陪着春风姐姐和花朵妹妹跳舞呢!跳的多么开心,它的姿势是那么优美呀!

接下来就沿着小路一直走,到了“母猪圈”的时候再休息一下。大家一听“母猪圈”,一定以为是喂母猪的地方吧!我会说:“不!”因为这是为了纪念神猪的。爸爸对我说过,有一次发洪水,有许多人都被冲走了,就在这个最危机的时刻,突然有一只神猪出现在水的中央,把洪水全部都喝干了,刚喝干洪水就消失了。所以把这个地方叫做“母猪圈”,来纪念那只神猪。

再往前走一千米左右,有一片空地,又可以休息了。那里有两棵梧桐树,大家可以观察一下的叶子,就像是一把把的小扇子。你看!那边有大片大片的油菜花,就像是金子一样,散发出一股股沁人心脾的清香,上面的蝴蝶翩翩起舞,美极了!

同学们,这里还有许多好玩的.呢!到底是什么那么好玩?你来了自然就会知道!

排比句式的作文开头成长【二】

1.So far as I know, such a phenomenon comes up as a result of the following facts. To begin with, ... And more than that, ... Last but not the least,...

2.So far as I know, some factors that contribute to the above tendency may be summarized as below. First of all, ... What’s more, ... The last one is ...

3.Some people favor... as..., and they argue that.. It seems to be so at the first sight, however, on reflection, we are convinced that it is just another coin with two sides. Firstly, ... is, of course, valid as far as it goes, and we can benefit from this point... However, we must be fully aware of its potential danger, taking into account the risk resulting from...

4.As far as I know, the above tendency may inevitably give rise to some effects as follows.

5Considering the social atmosphere today, it is not a time to... It is high time to... The fact that... is what should be emphasized. Those who object to this idea forget a universal truth that... As I remember... In addition... An instance that accompanies this reason is that... On the other hand, ... Finally...

6.There are several significant reasons as follows. Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly,...

7.It would be possible to think that ..., but it would be more foolish to claim that..., and it would be more foolish to believe that...

8.We all know that... plays an important role in... However, many people believe that... depends on two aspects of... The first is... The second is... A further argument is...

9.In many cases, however, there is something beyond our expectation: yet we can compare and contrast all the relevant factors and find a way out /in/ between.

10.There are, I think, at least two possible ways to cope with it. The first way to tackle it is to appeal to the authorities to take drastic measures to (do... The other policy that is worth adopting

is to work out new regulations to (do ... Only in this way can we succeed in dealing with the problem in the near future.

排比句式的作文开头成长【三】

一个春天的早上,老师组织我们去西湖公园春游。

一走进西湖大门,我就看见道两旁都种着树,树身上披着绿色的衣装。树丛中有许多花,有红的、白的、紫的、黄的,各种花争奇斗艳,漂亮极了!

西湖好大,一眼望不到边。湖水很深,湖水清澈,被风一吹,就像老爷爷脸上的皱纹。湖中央有个美丽的小岛,岛的四周种了许多柳树,柳叶下垂随风飘动,像妈妈的长头发。湖面上还漂着几只小船。

吃完点心喝完水,老师又带我们来到西湖广场。只看见广场十分宽阔,广场是用方石板铺成的。广场中央还有一个鲜花盛开的花圃。

我们开始放风筝了,在天空中的风筝有的像老鹰、有的像蝴蝶,有的还甩着长长的尾巴,有的奇形怪状,怎么看也叫不出名子来,很精彩!

真倒霉,我的风筝线打死结了,只能在旁边看着别人放风筝。不过,我还是喜欢这次春游的。

排比句式的作文开头成长【四】

改写括号中的内容,使其句式整齐,韵律和谐。

醒来眼里布满了泪水;(大病之后我疲乏,依依不舍的离别,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实,)都到心上来了。

分析:这是一道典型的语言运用试题,在近年中考语文试卷中经常出现。这类句式修改,一般要求句式整齐,语意连贯,可调整个别词语和句子顺序,但不得改变句子愿意。

句式整齐,语意连贯,其实就是修改为整句。整句是什么呢?整句就是把结构相同或者相似的一组句子整齐地排列在一起。整句形式整齐,音律和谐,气势贯通,能够把内容表达得鲜明集中,有利于突出作者的思想感情。

本题的实质是将原句修改为排比句(排比句就是整句的一种),但在题目中并没有明确指出,意在降低试题难度,只要句式基本整齐,意思和原句差不多都能得分。

查看本题中要修改的部分,我们很容易发现,出现了“大病之后”、“旅行途中”、“到家后”三个时间状语,只要第二个短语“依依不舍的离别”可以修改为时间状语修饰,句式基本上就整齐了。“依依不舍的离别”就是离别的时候依依不舍呀,“离别时”不就是一个时间状语吗?

看看,这样修改后就变成了“大病之后我疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的'辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”

是否还需要进一步修改呢?同学们在修改中也要试着读一读,看看还有不有别扭的地方。我们很快就可以发现,第一个短语和后三个是不同的。我们只需要把第一个短语也修改成的字短语修改的偏正短语就行了。

“大病之后的疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”

这已经非常不错了,当然,你还可以进一步美化。

“大病后的疲乏,离别时的不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”

前三句字格式、字数完全相同了,最后一句是不能改为“到家后的事实”的,也不能改为“到家后的恐怖事实”,因为去掉“可能”,就改变原句的原意了。

排比句式的作文开头成长【五】

星期五,我去春游。在车上,同学们有的在吃自己带来的食物和饮料;有的在玩自己带来的游戏机;还有的在看自己带来的书。在去春游的一路上,同学们都有说有笑。经过1个多小时的车程,我们终于到达了目的地——小石船山谷乐园。

小石船山谷乐园在半山腰,那里绿树环绕,群山连绵起伏,让人看有一种了心醉神迷的感觉。起初,我和我的队长一起去玩碰碰车,我以熟练的手法用碰碰车把我的队长打的落花流水。玩完碰碰车之后,我和队长一起去了其他地方玩。其中,我最难忘的就是和队长一起去攀爬神仙谷了:吃完中午饭,我和队长去神仙谷玩。因为神仙姑谷建在一座小山的半山腰上的,所以我和队长一路上是攀爬上去的。等到我们游玩完送水观音等地方时,我和队长已经可得要脱水和累的和队长一路上就是攀爬上去的。等到我们游玩完送水观音等地方时,我和队长已经口渴的要脱水和累的要散架。我们赶紧下山休息和补充水分。

啊!我这次春游玩的真开心啊!

排比句式的作文开头成长【六】

1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.

2.俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,

它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.

3.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.

4.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……

Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______.

5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.

7.已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

8.在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用。它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well

9.人类正面临着一个严重的问题…,这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ( which is becoming more and more serious.

10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出…。很显然…,但是为什么呢?

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that while. Obviously,but why?

11.如今,人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...

Nowadays,it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...

12.如同硬币的正反面,...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。

Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...

13.近来,...的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。”

Currently, the issue of ...has been brought to public attention

14.随着...的快速增长,...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。

Along with the rapid growth of ...,...has become increasingly important in our daily

15.由汽车(或xx)引起的空气和噪音污染对我们的健康造成了危害。”

Air pollution and noise pollution caused by automobiles do harm to our health.

排比句式的作文开头成长【七】

1.If all those factors are contemplated, the advantages of... carry more weight than those of... From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...

2.No doubt that we can’t control the problem... unless there is an immediate action... The chance is very good that...

3.From what I have mentioned above, we can see clearly that violence on TV has (a great influence on young adults’ behavior. Therefore, one can naturally reach this conclusion that...

4.In conclusion, .../In short, .../All in all, .../By and large .../To summarize...

5.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of... Only in this way can... in the future.

6.Taking into account all these factors offered above, we may carefully reach the conclusion that...

7.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...

8.This fact provides strong reason for thinking that..., thus... is actually preferable to ... rather than the reverse.

9.Judging from all given evidences, we can safely come to the decision that...

10.With the two opposite opinions discussed above, it is clear that neither of them is reasonable. As for ...I think, the latter... .If, on the other hand, the former...

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