我的家乡是闻名中外,风景如画的千岛湖,千岛湖以它美丽的姿态吸引了成千上万的国内外游人来这里饱览湖光山色。
千岛湖的山格外得青,格外得美。如果你走进那一座座山会听见清脆的流水声,听见那声声鸟鸣;定会看见那一棵棵耸立的参天大树,看见那小鸟站在树上戏嬉,真让人心旷神怡,仿佛进入了仙境一般。若下了雪,皑皑白雪层层叠叠地盖在大树上,好像给树木、山川披上了一件银皮大衣,风景分外弥人。
千岛湖的秀水比青山还更胜一筹,更吸引人。湖水十分清澈将一座座山都倒映了下来,形成了一幅天然的山水画。微波粼粼,湖水在荡漾着,时不时会有一条小鱼跳上水面又落下去画了一个小水晕,又时不时在天上盘旋的老鹰会划过水面抓起一条小鱼。在烈阳的照耀下湖水波光粼粼,好像千万块银片洒落下来闪闪发亮,光彩夺目。岸边有几棵红枫,火红火红的,一阵凉风拂过,枫树叶飒飒作响,湖水也渐渐地起了波涛“哗哗”,好像在演奏一首美妙的.乐曲。倒映在水中白云仿佛鱼儿在水里慢慢地游动,鸟儿在水中飞翔,马儿在水底奔驰。
千岛湖不仅风景如画,还是富饶的鱼米之乡。千岛湖的鱼类之多,有桂鱼、扁鱼、鲫鱼、鲤鱼、红尾巴等等。千岛湖的鱼肥美清香是出了名的,来这儿的游人没有一个人不来品尝这儿的鱼。
真是“人在画中游”呀!这享誉中外的千岛湖,这山青水秀的千岛湖,这风景如画的千岛湖,难道不值得你去吗?
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
也许,那是一个清晨,晓雾将歇,薄云淡淡地飘游;也许,那是一个午后,沉鳞竞跃,鱼鸟悄悄地对话;也许,那是一个傍晚,聒噪喧闹,太阳沉沉地坠落。那时,我在行走,我在途中。路边流动的交替的风景,光和影在眼前不歇地向后奔跑。
秋日的早晨尚还残存夜的阴冷,在纤云泄露出浅淡的阳光下,不免有些萧瑟。车窗外,倏忽发现,门前那棵经年的枫树,整顶树冠已不觉然间浸染上金黄的明亮和又一年将逝的黯淡。倚窗,我仄歪着头,眼角是路边大同小异的秋叶晃过,细微明暗的色差高低起伏,恍然油画上阴影的配合,言不出规律,却恰到好处地点缀。时而,区区几片被枝叶裁剪下的天空,蓝汪汪的干净,在余光里,堂而皇之地跳跃出画面。
此时,我的.心也许更安宁,这色彩的快速穿梭,容不下每一个人思考。目的地已至,下车,似乎终于如此近距而静止地观赏这金秋的油画,眼前却不尽人意,只是些枯黄欲凋零的老叶罢了。静止下去想象,是啊,也许哪一个未卜的夜晚,风涌过后,满目伤痕,回首俯瞰遍地散落的年华一夜间遥不可及,再也拾不起。生命是动态的,静止后也许就是终止,无言中等待下一场路途或是下一次生命的开启,一切茫然和彷徨是只有自己明了的。这,就是过程,就是人生无时无刻行走在路上的过程。
走吧,到另一个地方。让生命不在静止中徘徊。走吧,到另一个地方。眼前的风景需要双脚踏步的过程去改变。走吧!到另一个地方!生命,不仅仅在一个“此刻”,行走,会让它更精彩、绚烂!
走,到另一个地方。终点的静止风景势必比不上途中的流动境像。这是比追求的结果、终点,更美丽的时光的动态。
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