中文假如我是...
假如我是老师,我对待学生一定不像是对待不懂事的孩子那样,不会惩罚似的给他们留永远也做不完的作业。我会让学生们喜欢我,而不是害怕我。我不会像圣人一 样地处处说教。如果我是老师,我会和学生们成为平等的好朋友,尊重他们,理解他们。使他们以学习为乐,而不是把学习当成一种负担。
英文译文:If I were……
If I were a teacher, I would not treat my students just as some know-nothing kids. I wouldn‘t give them homework that can never be done.If I were a teacher, I would try my best to let them like me, not be afraid of me. I wouldn‘t teach them just as if I were a sage. If I were a teacher, I would make friends with my students. I would respect them and understand them. If I were a teacher, I would make study a happy thing to my students, but not a burden to them.
每个孩子心中都有一个偶像。他们追逐着明星,梦想着成为其中的一员。看看那些年轻漂亮偶像,而且还有很多粉丝的喜爱,所以我梦想成为明星。如果我是明星,首先,我可以赚很多钱。有了这些钱,我可以让我的父母过上更好的生活,回报他们的`爱。最令人兴奋的是还会拥有很多一直支持我的粉丝。我能看到我的才华,我为自己感到骄傲。但是成为明星意味着失去了陪伴家人的时间。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
If I were……
If I were a teacher, I would not treat my students just as some know-nothing kids. I wouldn\'t give them homework that can never be done.If I were a teacher, I would try my best to let them like me, not be afraid of me. I wouldn\'t teach them just as if I were a sage. If I were a teacher, I would make friends with my students. I would respect them and understand them. If I were a teacher, I would make study a happy thing to my students, but not a burden to them.
假如我是...
假如我是老师,我对待学生一定不像是对待不懂事的孩子那样,不会惩罚似的给他们留永远也做不完的作业。我会让学生们喜欢我,而不是害怕我。我不会像圣人一 样地处处说教。如果我是老师,我会和学生们成为平等的好朋友,尊重他们,理解他们。使他们以学习为乐,而不是把学习当成一种负担。
在几门学科中我最喜欢英语,我认为我未来会成为一名英语老师。一天回家后,我开始进入了当英语老师的遐想……
有一天,我去上班。进了办公室,我打开电脑,上网搜索了一些英语语法的`练习题,制作期末复习卷,批改昨天的作业本,并把练习打印出来。
到了第三节课,我带上U盘、作业本等东西去上课。这节课我要给同学们再巩固一遍M4U1的内容,然后进行随堂小测。正想着,我走进了教室。我先让课代表把作业本发下去,然后开始管教他们:“你们看看你们的本子啊!Jake、Bear、Alice,你们三个难道昨天没来么?今天B以下的在补课班留下来重做!”我在短暂的作业点评后,还是强压火气,开始心平气和地上课。我先让大家把本课所有的单词与同桌进行互背,又下发了讲义开始讲语法。梳理完后,我们开始了随堂测试。
这节课结束了。到了中午,我吃完饭,本想趴在桌子上眯一会,没想到教研组组长叫我们赶紧去开会,讨论期末考出题方案,我只好放弃休息,去开会。
放学了,累了一天的我还要批改完随堂测试卷,学校清场时,我批完了所有的卷子。我一回到家就倒在床上,身体像充满了铅一样不能动弹。
这时,提醒我上课的闹铃声响起,我从幻想回到了现实,回想起刚才的经历,我认为我们上课时要专心听讲,老师布置的作业要认真仔细地完成,不要让老师做多余的工作,增加老师的负担。
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