人教版中考英语作文分类【一】
当秋风赶走夏日的酷暑，绵阳市人民公园用彩笔描绘出色彩斑斓的秋天。不信，你看———
走进人民公园道路两旁，树上的绿叶随着阵阵秋风纷纷扬扬的飘落下来，一片片树叶变黄了，铺满大地，给大地换上了新装，这成了人民公园一道亮丽的风景。小草也渐渐枯萎，与落叶交织在一片。看，人民公园的秋天是黄色的。
接着，我往前一看，那不是喷泉吗？这喷泉时而高，时而底，忽而左，忽而右。形状也千奇百怪。有时像一朵盛开的花朵，有时像仙女在空中翩翩起舞，还有时像火箭，喷得很高，变得很细，好像要冲破天空。白花花的水滴溅在人们身上，大家都被这赏心悦目的美景感到心情舒畅。看，人民公园的秋天是白色的。
沿着小路走，会来到人工湖。人工湖的水碧绿碧绿的，十分平静，看上去明丽如镜。水里的鱼儿一条条活泼可爱，在湖水中欢快地游来游去，这给湖水添加了不少生气。看，人民公园的秋天是绿色的。
在人民公园深处，许多绿树换上了红妆。这其中最美的还是红枫。他虽没有梅花那样傲立雪中，也没有松树那样英资挺拔。可他们有自己的风采，远远望去她们犹如一个个美丽的少女，脱去绿色沙衣，换上红裙。真是“霜叶红于二月花”呀！看，人民公园的秋天是红色的。
黄色、白色、绿色、红色它们组成起来宛如雨后的彩虹，绚丽多彩。
我爱这人民公园的秋色，更爱这美丽的人民公园。
人教版中考英语作文分类【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
