现象解释类四级作文模板（四级现象类作文模板） - 学习作文网

现象解释类四级作文模板【一】

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《东周列国志》里，看到过这样的插图：两个梳双髻的宫女，手执长柄大扇，立在对坐畅谈国事的公侯身后，这样的扇子多半是由奴仆执掌，象征性大于使用目的，它是表明强权的道具。准确地说，它是礼仪扇。

汉代的扇子，则是用竹篾编成，其形制类似于现在的大号菜刀，扇柄附于一侧而不是居中，且开始落入寻常百姓家。在古画中，常见一奴仆蹲踞扇火，大力使着一把扇子，扇子地位大跌。汉末有一些原理简单的机械扇，诸葛亮同学发明过诸葛扇，悬挂屋内，手拉使之转动生风。穿过千年时光隧道，在关于老上海的电影里，仍然可以看见理发店里有这种手拉的风扇。【A】小伙计拉着一根绳，扇子左右缓移，时间也被拉长了，太太小姐们一边做头发，一边有一搭没一搭地拉呱家常。春日迟迟，昏昏欲睡。反正闲妇们有的是时间要打发，降那一点点心火，微风徐来的排扇也够了。

魏晋南北朝的扇子是羽扇，不用说是仿生原理的朴素运用，羽扇有十羽和八羽之分，后来进化成比翼扇，即以竹木为骨架上糊以绢绸，只在末端象征性地饰以羽毛。羽扇是男人的物什，尽显名士做派的道具，羽扇名人有“羽扇纶巾”的公瑾侯及其政敌诸葛先生。真不能想象，诸葛先生要是丢了他的三件套――一羽扇、纶巾、四轮车，会不会风采全无呢？

隋唐时流行纨扇，又称团扇，早唐时盛行腰圆纨扇，中晚唐为满月式样，纨扇近于现代的绢扇，以竹木为骨，承风面大，手感轻盈，它的使用者转向深闺。“轻罗小扇扑流萤”，隋唐女子都是腴美人，如果是骨重身宽的羽扇，用来扑蝶扑流萤，动作的\'幅度太大，就失了娇羞劲儿。宋元后期开始使用的折扇，轻便，价廉，易携带，袖藏即可。市民图耐用，多用油纸扇，文艺青年大多使用素纸扇，图它可以挥毫泼墨，题诗作画。

扇子还是艺术作品中高频出现的道具。

言情小说中，扇子可煽情，比如李香君血溅桃花扇;可定情，比如西施赠扇给范蠡;可抒情，《桃花扇》就是靠一把扇子来抒情，并且贯串情节起落的;可绝情，《珍珠令》里，女主角赠男主角折扇一把，即可以示绝交，扇同“散”，和伞一样，是很不祥的赠物。

武侠小说里，儒化的博雅侠客，手持一把小扇，以显其书生性情。江南七怪里那个执扇的妙手书生，还在扇子里面藏暗器、毒针什么的。有的扇子本身就是兵器，比如玉扇真人那把。

西方艺术作品里也常看见扇子的身影。【B】电影里的名媛贵妇手捏一把小折扇，一手牵裙角，莲步轻移，旖旎而行。歌剧中的淑女用一种很有趣的面具扇，上面开了两只眼睛一样的小洞，把自己的面孔藏起来，以示畏怯。

（选自《私语书》，有删改）

这篇文章在语言上有什么特点？请任选文中一处画线句作具体分析。

现象解释类四级作文模板【二】

1、这个剧本是根据一本小说改写的。

2、接下来，根据需要完成的工作的类型，对每一项活动进行划分：构建、评估和购买、改写和扩展，等等。

3、开始写之前，你要先找到你想改写的这本书，看看它的版权是不是受限制。

4、而且，还没有人冲出来改写科学教科书。只是暂时还没有。

5、在该机制中，我改写了引入的RDF语句来添加其源。

6、假如上周日晚在布鲁塞尔召开的会议能改变那些关于欧元的规定，下次发生危机时它们就也能被改写。

7、然而，历史是由胜利者改写的，它有时也会遭到它的反对者的玷污。

8、他是"美国人格地位"组织的总裁，该组织试图改写各州的.和美国的法律和宪法，使得一个人，作为人的地位在"被创造时"就能够获得法律承认，他说。

9、而如今，很多网页都是动态的，这就意味着你看到的东西已被改写或者是被临时创建的，只为投你所好。

10、但即便是这样的同学，他们同样很欠缺有关管理需求、撰写文档和改写程序的。

11、现在唯一需要的就是人工子宫，我们将彻底改写人类的生殖史。

12、您可以把这段代码改写成您自己的应用程序。

13、如果还想使用第三种版本，（比如WML（无线标记语言）），只需再提供一个样式表并相应改写配置文件即可。

14、对于那些需要将现有对象结构改写成XML的应用程序，以及希望分离实际XML结构和代码的任何应用程序而言，它特别有用。

15、这个发现，包括大量与其他神、法老王相关的铭文，“打开了那个时代许多秘密的大门，有助于改写西奈半岛的历史。”马克苏德表示。

16、“它会彻底改写我们认为现代人类从非洲移民而来的观念，虽然远未获得证明，但杰夫等人一定会开展新的研究来验证他的理论”。

17、无论是哪种情况，商界都需要深入挖掘这场抗议运动的根源，认真思考，慎重回应，重新制定规则，而不是被动等到由他人来改写规则的那一天。

18、清单4将原来的方法改写为更加紧凑、易读的方法。

现象解释类四级作文模板【三】

Perhaps everybody will think: Why, why are the English levels of Li XinYing and Liao ShaoTing so superb ? Let me tell you: Liao ShaoTing and I have entered the continuation class , were taught by the British teacher and American teacher, However, nature of the tuition fee but also" the price is high". But this continuation class is very interesting, make the English levels of Liao ShaoTing and I very terrible. Friends, do you want to have so very superb an English levels of Liao ShaoTing and me too? Let's enter the English continuation class that the foreigner taught!

In addition, I want to talk to everybody: Liao splendid graceful Japanese with a girl who calls Cai YiFei, I have studied one point . But can not only any,it can't say not write. Have certainly entered the continuation class too! It was Japanese teachers that taught. If you want to have a try of, can enter the continuation class . Oh, I say and make nonsense and know everybody support the articles of I at so much saying another word! Hey, will not say more , so as not to take up more Web site space and has not written out any good composition . Friends, learn the languages of various countries well , have very great uses to you accurately!

现象解释类四级作文模板【四】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1．学生给老师打分已很普遍；

2．人们对其持不同态度（肯定或否定的态度）；

3．你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然，此任务是写一篇议论文，主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论，开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况，从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活，但有一定的语言难度，也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作，也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下，也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙，写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时，也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思，学会换位思考，这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确，赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师，就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样，不仅对学生、学校有利，而且对老师本人也有利。这样，老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己，看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可，这将是对自己的一次鼓励，为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高，老师就应进行反思，调控教学方法和教学态度。这样，教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据，内容充实，贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用，是短文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式，给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下：

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ；Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象，然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响，最后提出解决问题的办法，或者得出结论，或者提出个人看法，或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张，论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多，但最常用的是因果分析法。即：分析事实与论点的因果关系，指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点，从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中，议论文的比重占得越来越多，议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型，但文体实际是议论文，而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是：

1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间，上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文，列举吸烟的危害，并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来，越来越多的中学生出国学习，出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。

1）良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。

2）拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。

3）传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇：媒介，中间人：mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad．First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods．Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展，道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解，谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.