l like my bedroombest . ln my bedroom, there is a bed, a bedside table, two desks ,a armchair ,a bookcase and a lamp . On the bookcase there are a lots of dollsand taddy bears.Next to the bed , there is a bedside table and there is a lamp on it .Between the bedside table and the bookcase there is a deak . Opposite the bookcase there is a desk to . beside the desk there is a armchair . I love my bedroom.
This is my family.They are my mother,my father and me.My father is a teacher.He works in a school.He is of medium height and of medium build.He has shortstraight black hair.He looks young.Now he is reading
books.My mother is a reporter.She works in a TV station.She is of medium height and a little thin.She has long curly black hair.She is very beautiful.Now she is watching TV.I am a student.I am tall and thin.I have
long straight black hair.I am doing my homework,now.This is my family.
My room is small, but comfortable and clean.
Take the door, on the left is a bookcase. The above is my dad's book, and below is my "private property" in bookcase pretend I most like to watch book at ordinary times. What little sunflower, extracurricular reading, contemporary elementary, hundred thousand whys... It's full of beautiful things in eyes, dazzling. In spite of large Numbers, they still according to the height of a placed very neatly.
The right of the bookcase is a small bed. Every night, I lay there to sleep, do a dream.
To the other side of the bed is my desk. There are my keyboard on the desk, and I often read the book. Every school, it's "people" will increase, because above filled up with my school things, and my homework. Bed is a window. The sun shine into my room through the window, make the room warm and bright.
Sofa is next to the desk, the sofa has been neatly folded my clothes, and my family "" toys.
Chest and sofa is an inseparable friends, my family moved to either, they were always together. The big wardrobe, which is full of clothes when I was a kid.
My room is not big, but there is full of laughter every day.
I have a bedroom .It is not big , but it is nice .There is a bed in my bedroom . A yellow dog is on the bed .Every night,I sleep with it . Next to the bed, there is a desk.
A bear lamp is on the desk .I like the bear lamp. It‘s cute. I like to do homework under the lamp every evening. I have a new computer in my bedroom .It is my best friend . Because I study at it, play at it . There are also several beautiful pictures on the wall.
怎么?我正在空中?呵,原来,我已是一片雪花,正飘飘悠悠来自天国。雪白的衣服,雪白的帽子,雪白的鞋。我跟着小伙伴们穿过云彩,飘向大地。我听到身边呼吸的风声,看到了脚下雪白的房屋,雪白的道路。我在空中自由自在而又漫不经心地飘着。嗬!那是什么?怎么了?不好,我再下降!不一会儿,我便落在了一个华丽的房屋上。好不容易才站了起来,我看见房门上有幅对联:“雪迹如山,日出化身归云海;云成真气,在造来年积雪”。嗬,我们雪花的生命力真强,一年来过,来年还会再来!我好自豪!
正在我得意时,东边的天空隐隐露出一片微红,太阳出来了。它毫不吝惜地照在我的身上,这片纯净的天地,正笼罩在它的温暖中。渐渐地我融化了,化成了一颗颗惜别的泪滴。在耳畔孩子们的欢笑中,我结束了自己短暂的生命……
走出梦境。我疾步走到窗边。窗外那残留着一点点地雪,不只是怜悯,是惋惜,还是对昨夜好梦的留恋,我深深爱上了雪花。不顾一切地想把昨夜那美好的梦延续,我真想成为一片洁净大地的雪花……
这就是我的梦想。
点评:
写一个梦,而这个梦正是自己的梦想。构思巧,紧贴题,小作者很会让自己的情思既扣住了题目,又没受题目的约束。
文章很乱,但流畅,且不让自己的情感直白道出,一切都让具体的描述表达。于是,文章短而又含蕴,有味道;既让读者看到了“梦想”,又感受到了作者心中一派洁净的纯真。
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