五年级英语书信作文陕旅版【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
五年级英语书信作文陕旅版【二】
亲爱的佳佳：
你好！
好久不见，不知道你最近是胖了还是瘦了。我最近特别想你到我的家乡做客。
我的家乡在泰州，它是一座美丽迷人的城市。他的风景比画还要美丽。她的姿态比少女还要动人。我最喜欢的景色，便是桃园。清晨东边刚露出淡淡的阳光，桃树就像活泼的少女一样，桃树已经长出了绿枝桠，上面的露珠蓬蓬勃勃，在我心里闪耀。桃树上有的花才开了小半，似乎再过一会儿，他就要完完全全的盛开了。有的才是花骨朵，含苞待放，饱胀得马上就要破裂似的。湖面波光粼粼，清澈见底，宛如一面巨大的镜子，葱绿色的树木，犹如一圈镶边。对了佳佳，你动心了没？这才是我们泰州美景的一部分呢！
对了，嘉嘉，你别以为我家乡只风景优美呀！我们家乡的美食更是数不胜数，美味极致呢。在那么多的美食中，我只对臭豆腐情有独钟。先把臭豆腐倒入锅中，锅里咕嘟咕嘟直冒泡，把，臭豆腐炸金黄后，沾上调料，你会感到，一阵奇臭无比的味道向你飘来！一把臭豆腐咬一口，啊，一股香的妙不可言的味道，进入你的味蕾，与你闻的味道截然不同。
那我的介绍，不知你有没有心动？欢迎到我们家乡来做客，我和家乡都会张开双臂迎接你。
祝你生活愉快，越长越胖。
你的好朋友朱一祎
20xx年XX月X日
五年级英语书信作文陕旅版【三】
敬爱的老师
您好！
刚要下笔，千语万言便涌上心头，让我不知从何说起。不可否认的是，对您的感激之情汹涌澎湃。谢谢您帮助我们建立了图书角，指引我们认识了书的可贵，知识的美好，更感谢的是因为其中的一本书而改变了我。
思绪飘荡，轻轻地停留在那个刻骨铭心的一天。一场测试后，我带着期盼与焦虑，接过发下来的试卷，可映入眼帘的却又是那一大堆触目惊心的红叉，我心里“轰”的一下像失控的电梯直接往下降。怎会这样？不是说有付出努力便有收获吗？我忍着泪水冲出课室，只想找一个没人的地方躲起来。偏僻的操场的北角花园是个好地方，那棵默默挺立的老樟树是我最好的听众吧。我大声倾诉着心中的郁闷和迷茫，泪水横飞。出乎意料的是，老师您一直在我身后，刚才我的所说所讲都被您听见了。您用那温厚的双手按着我的肩膀，眼里的漩涡好深好深。就在我不知所措时，您变魔术似的递出一本书——《假如给我三天光明》。您微微的笑开了，像春天里这个北角花园里绽开的杜鹃花。“相信自己！”您说的这句话如一缕冬日的暖阳，射进我的本是冰冷的心窝，也拨开了了我眼睛里的迷雾。在您的鼓励下，我拿着这本在图书角里新添上的书《假如给我三天光明》在北角花园里那棵老樟树下，我作为班上的第一个读者，轻轻地翻动着。
《假如给我三天光明》这本书讲述了又盲又聋的海伦·凯勒坎坷的一生，和她的心路历程。她一生只有十九个月光明与声音，生活中的重重打击，不但没有击垮她，反而使她愈发坚强，越挫越勇，以优等的成绩完成了哈佛大学四年的学习，成为人类历史上第一位获得文学学士的盲聋人。我仿佛又听见您对我说的那句话——“相信自己！”海伦说过“苦难是成功的一块垫脚石”，残疾人的她梦想中的光明的三天是如此的充实美好，作为身体健康的我人生的路才刚刚开始，遇挫折就逃避就泄气，很不应该。这是令我震撼的一本书，也是第一本告诉我人生哲理的书。这本书让我学会了坚强，让我微笑地面对学习中的困难，也让我明白老师您的用心良苦。内心的泛起的涟漪，轻轻愈合，戛然而止。替而代之的，是向前的勇气。无论怎样，我真心的谢谢您。
现在那本书我把它放在班上的图书角里，我热情的向同学们推荐它，希望的人去发现感受它。不知道细心的您有没有发觉在那本书的封面的右上角画有一个光芒四射的太阳，那是我用彩笔画的，我觉得这本书是每个人的成长中的太阳。
操场还在，杜鹃花还在，老樟树还在，那本书还在，而我的迷茫，我的郁闷却已经随风飘散了，谢谢您，让我找回了这可贵的坚强。
祝身体健康工作顺利!
您的学生：xxx
20xx年x月x日
五年级英语书信作文陕旅版【四】
亲爱的爸爸、妈妈：
你们好!
感谢你们，把我带到这个世界上，把我带到这个温馨的小家庭。它不算大，不算富有，但它温馨、简朴、有尊严，不可撼动!我爱这个家，也爱你们。我多次发誓，长大以后要好好孝敬你们、感恩你们，让你们少操点心。无论做什么事，我尽量让自己做的更完美，来感恩回报你们。
尽管这样想，但在生活中还是时常惹你们生气。偶尔还会跟你们赌气，有时面对你们的批评，甚至还稍稍有点恨你们。现在想想，真是不应该啊!特别是前几天发生的一件事，让我更是觉得自己怎么能恨父母呢，这种念头彻底打消了。
那是值得庆祝的一个晚上，我们一大家人坐在一起吃饭。吃到一半的时候，姥爷说要讲几句话，我们大家都鼓掌欢迎。看得出，姥爷心情很好。他首先感谢姨夫、姨妈，感谢他们作为家里的老大，为我们这个大家庭无私奉献，为弟弟妹妹做出了榜样，并且无怨无悔，我们这个大家庭今天的幸福生活与他们的付出是分不开的。我们都听得很认真，并且都非常赞同姥爷的观点。然后姥爷又恭喜舅舅一家买上了新车，祝贺妈妈学出了驾驶证。接连的几件好事，让大家都很高兴。大人们都忍不住多喝了几杯。姥爷更是破天荒喝上了酒。
就在这时，舅妈问有一个菜是不是还没上，服务员看了一下菜单说是。舅妈没听见，又问了一遍，舅舅有些不耐烦说：人家不是说了吗。“是吗?”舅妈小声嘀咕，“我不是没听见吗!”两人小小的争执，我们都没怎么在意。也许这在别人家更算不上什么问题。可在我们这个大家庭不行。姥爷当时非常恼火，大声斥责舅舅。还说舅舅有一次对姥姥说话不够客气，说舅舅这样就是不孝顺，对人就是不礼貌，要重新学学《弟子规》，说得舅舅抬不起头来。
其实在我看来妈妈你们姐弟几个对姥姥、姥爷已经很孝顺了，可是姥爷依然还是那样严格要求你们，而你们姐弟几个却从没有怨恨姥姥、姥爷的批评，而是自己的不对。
爸爸、妈妈，也许你已经忘了那晚的事情，这在你们看来也许是一件不起眼的小事。可是却给我留下了深刻的印象。让我想到了自己，想到了平时对你们的态度，真是有些惭愧。尽管在你们看来我是个好孩子，可我有时却做不到你们对待长辈那样感恩、孝顺。
百孝顺为先。对父母“孝”，首先要做到“顺”。爸爸妈妈，是你们把我带到这个温暖的家，让我吸收这个家的最优良的“养分”——孝德。今后，我一定要做的更好，做好这个家庭的一份子，做一个有“孝德”的人。爸爸妈妈，感谢你们，感谢你们让我懂得怎样做人，如何尽孝!如果有来生，我还是喜欢来到这个家，喜欢做你们的女儿!爸爸妈妈，我会感恩你们的。
此致
敬礼
五年级英语书信作文陕旅版【五】
敬爱的`刘老师：
您好!
老师，一个普通的字眼，却带给我们无限的爱。他们就像我们的第二代父母。给了我们爱的教育。
一年级。刚来到站东小学时，我就认识了一位和蔼的班主任——刘老师。刘老师就似一位慈母，从来不过度的批评我们，而是有耐心的淳淳教导我们。那时我还不会认字，那时我还不会写字，那时我还不会叫一声“老师好”。是您用那纯朴的语言、用那辛勤的汗水、用那多年的心血教会了我许多许多。
这五年来，小学生活几乎都是由老师陪伴着我们的，还记得三年级的一次，让我最难忘怀。一天中午，您叫我们自己看书，而您批改作业，随时都会叫我们上去，而我不管不顾，因为头天晚上睡得晚，精神特别不好，所以一下就埋头大睡。过了一会儿，您叫到我了，正睡得香的我怎么能听见，同学们都一连叫了我几声，我理都不理。最后您发火了，一下拍桌子，一下站了起来，教室里顿时鸦雀无声，我这时才醒了，揉了一下眼睛，还不知发生了什么事，只见同学们一个个都看着我，您也看着我。同桌在旁边把事情的经过全告诉了我，我心里害怕极了，心想：您肯定对我特别失望，同学们也肯定瞧不起我了，我还怎么有脸呆下去，哎！怎么办啊。
您把我叫到了教室外，但您并没有刚才那么火冒山丈了，而是用温和的语气对我讲：“晚上一定要早点睡，第二天上课才有精神，不要赶上上课时睡觉。”我顿时傻眼了，没想到您一点火都没发，而且还这么有耐心的教导我。每次犯错误时，您都会找到好的解决方案，虽然有些同学很恨老师，恨老师作业布置多了，恨老师经常骂我们，而这些都不叫恨，而叫“爱”，因为恨老师，才会爱老师。
五年了，是你这样不厌其烦的教育我们，是你在我们失败伤心难过时还温和的教导我们，也是你在我们开心玩耍时还会露出一丝微笑。快毕业了，可是我永远不会忘记教了我们五年的刘老师！
您的学生：xxx
20xx年x月x日
五年级英语书信作文陕旅版【六】
王老师：
您好！
我觉得这学期我长大了很多。
老师，您像蜜蜂，勤劳而无私；您像妈妈，美丽而善良；您像一本书，不仅教给我们很多知识，而且还教给我们做人的道理。悠悠师恩，没齿难忘！老师我有许多话想对您说！
老师！您为了我们付出了许多。在每一次的比赛中，您会细心地教导我们不要慌，要相信自己！老师！明天是元旦节，您为了让我们欢庆新年的到来，您又和同学们精心得把我们的教室打扮得漂漂亮亮！我们还在教室里玩了好多好多的游戏。您还在班级里唱了一首歌，我们都情不自禁地拍起手来。您唱的歌很好听，但是我在您唱歌的时候听出了您的声音里带着沙哑。老师！我知道，您虽然每天脸上挂着甜蜜的微笑，但心里却很苦恼，因为我们在这一次的体育节中表现得不是非常出色。但是我想：只要我们齐心协力，就一定可以有所进步，请您相信我们。
老师！我知道自己在班级里不是最出色，最大胆的，但我会一直严格要求自己，为您和班级做一些力所能及的事！
敬祝
新年快乐！万事如意！
您的学生：XX
五年级英语书信作文陕旅版【七】
亲爱的陈老师：
您好！新年即将来到，我们又要长大一岁了。感谢您这几年来对我的辛勤教育和悉心栽培，使我从一个不懂事的小孩子变成了一个知书达理、聪明能***班干部。在您的帮助下，我写出了一篇篇生动的作品；在您的鼓励下，我学起了古筝并顺利地考出2级；在您的推荐下，我当上了小记者，发表了许多篇文章；在您温和的批评中，婉转的'提醒中，我明白了自己的缺点与不足……我所有的成绩与进步，都您的谆谆教导是密不分的。
陈老师，您生动的讲课，平时的教导，使我明白了许多道理：学习上我们体会到了“一份耕耘，一份收获”的乐趣，生活上我们懂得了团结协作的重要性，与同学相处中我们感觉到了真诚与爱心的价值……
在新的一年里，我要继续努力。我现在做得还不够好，但我相信自己能做得更好！我要多读好书，多写好作；参加各类比赛，努力争取更多的第一，为班级争取更多的荣誉！陈老师，请相信我。我一定能做得更好，也会努力把班级带得更好！敬祝新年快乐、万事如意！
您的学生：王佳茜
20xx年1月23日
