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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
尝试人世间的一切情感,时而欢喜,时而失落。像掠过心桥的一丝丝的低落,记忆的匣子又再一次回放那心酸的过去,但又害怕这一切会被我一一淡忘……
小雨淅淅沥沥地下着,我无力地踢着路边的小石子。脑海里回想着藏在书包里的试卷上面鲜艳的八十八分,那八十八似乎咧着大嘴在嘲笑我,路旁的花儿也仿佛在讽刺我考了一个烂分数,不过,这一切似乎是命中注定的;妈妈叫我复习,我忙着看电视;妈妈叫我摘抄以前的错题,我忙着玩电脑……想到这一切,我的眼泪又不由自主地掉了下来。远处一个雷打了下来,雨下了下来,这天气也似乎在为我打抱不平。
终于,到家了。我一到家就倒在床上嚎啕大哭起来。我把试卷拿了出来,我错了——我错的题目都是会的。有两个应用题忘了写答案,那是多么简单的应用题啊!我闭着眼睛都能算出来,还有两道填空眶而出。这时,我看到窗外的树,它虽然被风吹的东倒西歪,但还是不屈服。连树都那么坚强,我不能退缩!
我是一个乐天派,一直都是。
像是拭去的泪,不会再回来了!只是暂时的记忆,不可能再回来。风吹过的每一个角落,但是当时的心酸,还有梦。
去给予我“酸甜苦辣”的感觉,失败时,被嘲笑,被指指点点;成功时,终于到努力后的结果。辛酸而又幸福,努力,创造了两个极端:盆地与高原,地狱与天堂,低落与拔尖……找到自己的梦想,用自己的全力去努力奋斗,欣赏自己的梦想开花结果吧!
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
今天,是我们班主任老师的生日,昨天,我们已经全体捐款,为班主任老师捐齐了买蛋糕的费用。
中午,我们派出几名队员出校门去买蛋糕。半个小时过去了,蛋糕也买来了,我们把蛋糕放在讲台上。上课铃响了,我们静静地等侯着老师的到来。老师来了!她打开门,在进来的一刹那,她惊呆了。我们开始唱生日割。唱完后,老师竟然板着脸问我们谁是“领头羊”,是谁去买的蛋糕。我们都慌了,以为是犯了错,谁知后来老师话锋一转,说:“刚刚我在门口就知道你们要给我惊喜,所以很感动,很谢谢你们能够给我买蛋糕。”听完这段话,我激动地热泪盈眶。接着,老师笑着开始分蛋糕。
“啊,真好吃!”同学们边吃边说。我觉得就像在吃蜜一样,嘴里甜,心里更甜!
还有几个同学为年级的其他老师送去了蛋糕,让其他老师共同分享。
今天,我真开心,让老师过了一次最有意思的生日,看到老师高兴,我们心里更是高兴。
不知不觉一节课就这样过去了,我真是从来都没有这样高兴过!
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
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