Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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昙花一现,虽短暂,可她毕竟绽放过;鸟儿在天空中没有留下痕迹,可他毕竟飞翔过;烟花,虽然终究烟消无踪,可它毕竟绚烂过……我们虽不认识您,但您给我们带来的太多太多。
“大漠,烽烟,马兰。平沙莽莽黄入天,英雄埋名五十年。剑河风急云片阔,将军金甲夜不脱。战士自有战士的告别,你永远不会倒下1林俊德,您虽然走了,但我们永远怀念您。
林俊德是最令我感动的一个人。他1952年入伍,参加了我国全部核试验的任务。但在2016年5月4日,林俊德被确诊为“胆管癌晚期”。为了不影响工作,他拒绝手术和化疗,5月26日,因病情突然恶化,他被送进重症监护室。醒来后,他强烈要求转回普通病房,他说:“我是搞核试验的,一不怕苦,二不怕死,现在最需要的是时间。”
林俊德住院期间,整理移交了一生积累的全部科研试验技术资料;多次打电话到实验室指导科研工作。5月31日上午,已极度虚弱的林俊德,先后9次向家人和医护人员提出要下床工作。于是,病房中便出现了震撼人心的一幕:病危的林俊德,在众人的搀抬下,向数步之外的办公桌,开始了一生最艰难也是最后的冲锋……5小时后,心电仪上波动的生命曲线,从屏幕上永远地消失了。这位军人,完成了生命中最后的冲锋,但是他还没有完成他的遗愿……
他带给我们的,我想,是忠于职责。现在的社会上官员贪污、以公徇私的现象很普遍。他是一个普通人,但他却默默无闻的坚守在自己的岗位上直至生命最后一刻。他是真正的战士,他为的是国家、是人民的利益,他用50年默默坚守信念,让我们永远记住他,记住他那可贵的精神*—有的人活着,他已经死了;有的人死了,他还活着。看过《感动中国》之后,我的内心仿佛受到了神圣的洗礼,社会上有形形色色的普通人,正是因为有了这些有道德、有品质的'中国人,才是我们中国更加强大起来。作为一个普通人,只要献出微不足道的小力量,就能感动中国。用心去看世界,浮沉过后,去发现细节的感动!每一年的感动中国十大人物,都触动了我们心灵深处那一柔软的地方。让我们一起传递正能量!
我记得电影《致青春》有这样一句经典语录:“只要学不死,就往死里学。”这种题材的电影又进一步的深化了“万般皆下品,惟有读书高”在人们内心的程度。而外国又是什么样的教育方式呢?很显然,中国与外国的教育方式截然不同。中国在教育上强调的是做人,而外国是做事。所以外国的孩子们比中国孩子的独立能力强,而中国孩子学习的文化知识,文化素养要比外国孩子多的多。大家有可能会有这样的疑问——怎样改变这种教育偏激的现象?其实目前想要改变的话显然是不可能的。我来给大家总结一下原因。第一,贫富差距太大。就像那些有钱人的孩子,他们每天都生活在温暖中,如果没有合适的教育,他们大多会一直生活在安逸中,他们更不会明白独立的意义。穷困人家的孩子则背负着巨大的责任,他们只能通过学习来“逆天改命”。这样,他们学习的目的是为了就业,所以他们对所要学习的科学文化知识摆着应付的态度。我们国家的教育是为了什么,实行科教兴国的战略又是为了什么?当然是为了选拔有用的人才,为中华民族的复兴做贡献。但只注重理论知识,不注重实践,所以应试教育被恶化了,人们也违背了中国教育的初心。第二,普遍的攀比心理。我们经常能够听到这样的对话——孩子的妈妈说:“怎么考试考了这么点分,你看看人家XXX”。孩子的压力太大,只能硬着头皮去学习。
我认为这种教育方式不能大力支持也不能抵制。政府和相关教育部门应该加大课外辅导的调查力度,有效的抑制教育过激的现象。相关媒体也应该大力宣传提高学生综合能力的重要性。国家也应继续实行精准扶贫政策,解决贫富差距的现象。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
2017年度感动中国人物播出了,如果不是在姥姥家看了会电视,我还不知道今天就演感动中国。
平凡的人做出了不平凡的事,正如主持人白岩松所说的那样,"灾难和感动往往在一起",今年的感动中国人物有相当多的一部分人是和灾难联系在一起的,《感动中国人物》观后感马天昊。看到那么多逝去的生命,看到他们的感人事迹,我是非常敬畏的。
回顾2010年度的感动人物:"科学泰斗"钱伟长、"信义兄弟"孙水林、孙东林、"玉树铁汉"才哇、"雷锋传人"郭明义、"舟曲之子"王伟、"草原曼巴"王万青、"英雄翁婿"王茂华、谭良才、"三栖尖兵"何祥美、"最美"洗脚妹刘丽、"警界保尔"孙炎明他们有哪位不让我们感动?还有海地地震中遇难的八位维和英烈和铁道部K165次列车乘务组以及中国志愿者群体都令我们感动,观后感《《感动中国人物》观后感马天昊》。
"雷锋传人"郭明义,正如颁奖词所说的"他总看别人,还需要什么;他总问自己,还能多做些什么。他舍出的每一枚硬币,每一滴血都滚烫火热。他越平凡,越发不凡,越简单,越彰显简单的伟大。"一样,他20年献血6万毫升,2002年,成为鞍山市第一批捐献造血干细胞志愿者,2006年,郭明义成为鞍山市第一批遗体和眼角膜自愿捐献者。1994年以来,他为希望工程、身边工友和灾区群众捐款12万元,先后资助了180多名特困生,而自己的家中却几乎一贫如洗。
"信义兄弟"孙水林、孙东林,"新年不欠旧年账,今生不欠来生债",弟弟孙东林为了完成哥哥的遗愿,在大年三十前一天,来不及安慰年迈的父母,将工钱送到了农民工的手中。因为哥哥离世后,账单多已不在,孙东林让民工们凭着良心领工钱,大家说多少钱,就给多少钱。钱不够,孙东林就贴上了自己的6.6万元和母亲的1万元。就这样,在新年来临之前,60多名民工都如愿领到工钱,孙东林如释重负。
也许我们不能做出像他们一样惊天动地的事业,但我们一定要做出对社会有贡献的事,不能危害社会!
我们大家在学英语的同时。好像忘记了我们的母语。我们这中华民族五千年的悠久历史,老祖宗传下来的文化,魅力好像还抵不过一个“洋鬼子”说的“鬼话”是的,英语的确是国际通用语言。可是这就是我们要冷落我们伟大的母语的'原因吗?这原因是在不值一提。中文,是世界上能最清楚表达事物的语言,只改变语调,就能变换语义。中国的语言文字叫“汉字”,而英美的语言文字叫“单词”。
这就明显能体现出汉语的意思准确、精练。我本人是回族,但我并不讨厌“汉”语、“汉”话。相反,我却十分崇敬华夏文化,因为我是中国人。
但看现在世态,我们好像不该在打着中华民族的旗子,说我们是龙的传人了。外语肆意横行,把我们老祖宗留给我们的东西,推进了印度洋深处,实在可怕。我最后竭力大喊一句:“我们是中国人!!!”
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