Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
离开故乡的日子,总想起故乡的云。
都说故乡的美,是一道道数不完、看不尽的风景,点缀在青山绿水间……
都说故乡的美,是一首首吟不断、咏不歇的诗篇,蕴藏在清风明月里……
归来吧,归来哟,费翔深情的歌声,唱出游子的心声。是的,当人们敞开情怀,放飞对故乡的思念时,最令自己神往的是那故乡的云。故乡的云,留在人们美好的回忆和美妙的联想里,留在游子的床前,留在文人***客的笔下,也留在情人的爱河间……
我心依旧。恋云依旧。
侨乡的人们总爱在晴天仰卧草地上,凝视着天空的云。云一团团,一簇簇,一卷卷,一匹匹,如龙,如凤,如虎,如花,形状交错,变化万千。人们所欣赏的不只是云的舒展自如、变幻莫测,还有云的壮观气势。人们就是这样将故乡的云,融入对故乡的爱之中。
冬去春来,四季交替。故乡的彩云、白云、朝云、暮云……都展示着非凡的天工,把人领进一幅幅美妙绝伦的`立体图画中。春晨,山顶上空的一排排白云,被冉冉升起的朝阳镶上了五彩缤纷的光边,侨乡笼罩在红彤彤的霞光中,更显锦绣华丽。夏午,云层如突兀的千山万岭,似呼啸的千军万马,金光耀眼的云,把侨乡的大地和天宇焊在了一起。秋日,天高气爽,万里碧空忽然飘来的那丝云彩,像是仙女掸拂的一方香巾,将蓝天轻拭得亮丽如洗,金灿灿的阳光拥抱着侨乡,侨乡是那样钟灵毓秀。冬时,披着温暖阳光的云彩,捎来了大地又将逢春的消息……如此种种,让人享受,引人向上,催人奋进,令人叫绝。
当人们远离故乡,故乡的云已不仅仅是一种温情的回忆,而是一种蓬勃向上的生命力。见到天上的云,人们心里常把它看做是从故乡飘来的那一朵,禁不住望了又望,去寻觅梦的开始。人们又把流动的云当做是向故乡飘去的信笺,目送它随风而去,带去对故乡无尽的眷念。
故乡的云啊,无论在何时何地想起你,总觉得你是一块故乡的胎记,风吹不散,雨洗不掉,岁月也改变不了。
故乡的云,飘在人们思乡的梦中。
吊水楼瀑布,又称镜泊湖瀑布,它位于黑龙江省宁安县西南,从牡丹江市向南经古城宁安,再向西行抵达东京城后,从这里一直行驶30公里,便可抵镜泊湖的北湖头了。
镜泊湖是历经五次火山爆发,由熔岩阻塞河流形成的高山堰塞湖,是世界上少有的高山湖泊。以天然无饰的独特风姿和峻奇神秘的景观而闻名于世,是国家风景区和避暑胜地。奇特的“地下森林”是镜泊湖风景区的又一奇景。位于镜泊湖西北约50公里,坐落在张广才岭海拔一千米的深山区。据考察,这里因火山喷发后停止,火山口岩浆冷却收缩,顶部自然下陷、塌落而形成大小不等,其形如盆、如井、如簸箕10个火山口。经过千万年沧桑变化,大自然重新给它披上绿装,成为世界有名的火山口原始森林,森林面积达6。7万公顷,生长着红松、紫椴、黄菠萝、黄鳞松、落叶松等珍贵树种。这座绿色的天然宝库,为中外地质、地理、历史、生物等学者提供了丰富宝贵的科研资料。
镜泊湖是一个充满诗情画意的湖,民间有红罗女等许多优美动人的传说。它东有老爷岭,西靠张广才岭,镜泊湖就像一面明镜,镶嵌在两座山岭之间。湖面延绵百余里,又称为百里长湖,两崖峰峦迭湖,林木葱茏,湖面明静碧绿,湖岸港湾众多。兼具湖光山色之美的镜泊湖,素有珍珠门、道士山、大孤山、小孤山等八景。
吊水楼瀑布,是来到镜泊湖旅游的必游景点。它实际上是同坠入一潭的两个瀑布,其高约20~25米,宽达42米左右。由于吊水楼瀑布是我国纬度的瀑布,所以,四季中以冬夏之景,风韵尤殊。每当夏季洪水到来之时,镜泊湖水从四面八方漫来聚集在潭口,然后蓦然跌下,像无数白马奔腾,若银河倒悬坠落,其轰声如雷,数里之外便可听到;其势之礴,近观令人胆战心惊。
那溅激起来的团团水雾,漫天飘洒,游人站立在观瀑亭上,可欣赏到水雾烟云之中霓虹隐现,甚为奇观。那两条翻腾滚跃的瀑布,宛若两条出海入潭之蛟龙,喷云吐雾,把镜泊湖弄得更具神奇色彩了。
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
春天, 万物复苏,小河水哗哗地顺流而下; 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱; 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋,大地换上了绿色的新衣; 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽; 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童, 抽出嫩黄色的新芽;。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐, 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶, 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天,太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色,枝条也向四周扩展了许多,变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时, 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸,好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天,凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色,在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来, 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟,我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹,甭提有多高兴了。
冬天,刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过,古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华,仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者,正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月, 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习,成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
望着窗外面的空旷大地,稀疏的暖黄灯透出方格块的窗户,伴随着宁静无声的夜,光芒通宵。
没了小时闪闪的萤火虫光、没了小时彻夜奏鸣的虫儿和青蛙、没了小时星空灿烂的璀璨。留下的,只是一个空壳的天空和那片土地。
风呼啸着掠过寒瑟的天空下,悲凉空寂,淡淡却又沉重。
有许多时候,像这些近乎于悲剧的画面呈现在眼帘的那一霎那,深深的感伤都会将思絮带入悲伤。那伤痛逆袭的痛,像锥心的利箭深深扎入,再拔出来,是一种如莲花般绚丽的血,但不是滚烫的,是冷的,寒瑟的冷凝在夜里,腐蚀曾经。
天暮像悲伤一样,笼罩在这片离殇的大地上,黑的静止。遮掩了所有的星星,只留下孤星寂寞闪烁。
渐渐地,灯光少了,昵语也渐渐稀了,夜近深了。关掉可有可无的所剩光线,让黑把自己包裹,然后寂寞地流泪,等待……泪也干了……
紧缩在一旁静静发抖,开始有了一丝倦意,好想埋头一睡,再也不用爬起来。
一直等待,等待哪怕一颗流星划过,然后可以许下愿望,即使知道,流星是不会聆听自己的话的,但仍然等待着,想给天空一次机会,更是给自己一个希冀理由。
曾经嘲笑过女孩向星星许愿的举动,而今却不断重复着那,一遍又一遍。直到后来,月也隐了,星也稀了,风瑟瑟埋葬了璀璨。
不知从什么时候,爱上了挚笔,爱上了文字所给我带来的那一种体质,一直觉得,用文字包裹感伤,用音乐冲淡悲伤。是多么适合自己。
思念着过去,却等待着未来。来不及与过去挥手,却缠在过往的缚丝中,一点也不能挣扎。慢慢的,这样也成了一种习惯,一种生活方式。
遥望着远处最后一点暖黄灯光摧熄。一片彻骨的寒冷卷来孤独,忘记了开灯,忘记了拥衾,忘记了感觉……
无奈的任黑暗吞噬,任寂寞静止,忘记了独坐的源由,忘记了遗忘落泪的勇气,忘记了遗忘等候的悲伤,静静的,寒彻夜眠。
天空静静的,偶现的淡蓝划过,寒瑟的风静止如水。像置身于景域中,天空依旧悲凉,像悲伤的音符,在心中编织着孤单背景。
也许悲伤主题还会接下来,也许背景还是一幅寒瑟的天空静景。
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