深圳是我最喜欢的城市。她年轻富有活力。我在这里居住了10年。我爱这座城市的海鲜和美丽的风景。夏天来的时候,我可以去海边看日出,或者去享受冰爽的海水。在周末的时候,去公园散散步。深圳是我的家。等我长大了,我要为这所城市作出贡献,让她变得更好。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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春日里的阳光格外明媚,到处生机勃勃,我们每个人的脸上洋溢着喜悦,无法掩饰心里的那份激动,因为今天,我们“阳光班”的成员在老师和妇联的带领下,要去参观太仓市博物馆和城市规划中心展览馆。
太仓市博物馆位于新区行政中心的广场东侧,刚走近博物馆,我就被它新颖的外表所吸引了,与其说它像只藤条编织成的帽子,更不如说它像个“大圆仓”。这种独具一格的建筑,更激发了我走进去一探究竟的***。
我满怀好奇和期盼走进了博物馆展厅,首先映进眼帘的是一座晶莹剔透的玻璃桥,我正准备上桥走走时,悬挂在桥上的.一块牌子引起了我的注意:“正在维修,请绕道!”郁闷,只好从桥边走过去,不经意的往桥下瞄了一眼,哇!桥下有许多惟妙惟肖的古代建筑,我在为古代就如此繁华的太仓感到惊讶时,又为自己在太仓生活而感到骄傲,我一边看,一边和同学小声议论着藏品的妙处。几百幅字画让我目不暇接,这些字,有的苍劲有力,有的圆润流畅,有的潇洒狂放……赞叹中,我在心里默默鼓掌。
接着,我们又来到了城市规划中心展览馆,一进门,我就惊奇的发现,地是玻璃的,地下是一条又一条的道路,顺着路标我很快找到了中市路,找到了陆渡中心小学。当我正陶醉其中时,导游姐姐高声喊我们去看电影,我疑惑地走进去,里面有个不大的屏幕和一些椅子。这部小电影是用动画做成的,描绘了以前太仓的历史和以后太仓的繁华景象……时间很快到了,我们依依不舍地回到了学校。
通过这次太仓半日游,我见到了太仓的历史和太仓未来的美好景象。我爱太仓,希望它以后会更加繁荣昌盛。
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