一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
听雨,我真陶醉如果你固执地认为,夏天听雨太嘈杂,秋天听雨太凄凉,冬天听雨太难得,那么你就在春天听雨吧,窗户一定要打开的,电灯一定要熄灭的。春天听雨,无可挑剔。“随风潜入夜,润物细无声”。
当无名的烦恼袭来,当世间的一切都归于沉寂之后,当几声犬吠划破宁静时,听,仔细听……这雨飘洒着从天而降,飘到树杈上,落到屋顶上,顺着房檐,滴到地面,最后融入泥土……听,仔细听……这雨缠绵着,被晚风吹得轻舞飞扬,形成一首和谐的乐章,是一首极富有节奏感的乐章,时而舒缓,时而急剧……听,仔细听……你是否觉得你已与大自然融为一体?这雨,轻唱着,挖空你的心思,道出你的惆怅,注释你的疑惑,弥漫你的想像,使你觉得自己仿佛已经变做一滴雨,一棵树,一根草,一束花,一把土……这雨,使得时间似乎凝固,只有墙上的钟告诉你生命在延续。
听着,听着,我似乎也在一个弯曲的延伸向远方的`小巷,也逢着一位结着丁香般愁怨的姑娘,一位梦一般,风一般,云一般飘去了的姑娘。这雨,净化着我的心灵,使我在自己的世界中找到一方净土,一片慰藉。我成长中的遗憾会在这柔和的歌声中变得美丽吗?雨水真清纯,清纯得如同我的泪,在我的泪中,我看不清自己。太多心思,太多痴言,太多情愫,太多惆怅,太多太多的思绪,只能在这细雨纷飞的日子里将它们逐一放飞。撕调最后的日历,于是过去变成回忆,我仔细地寻找,我永久地等待,期待着一个全新的自己,留给雨夜,一个新的足迹……听雨,听春天的雨,不能言传,只可意会……
有朋友说这个世界无论古今中外本质都是功利的。作为一介草民始终对权贵有着太多的崇拜和趋炎附势,尤其是在权利金钱至上的国家,这一规律更是昭然若揭。人性使然还是英雄主义情结不得而知,但自古有成者为王败者为寇之说,凡夫俗子不会去纠结于纷繁复杂的过程,更热衷于看到结果的好坏,于是王自然受到无比的追捧,而对失败的寇最多报以额腕痛惜或对其报以霸王别姬式的唏嘘!
从另外一个角度看问题的本质,即所谓英雄不论出处但却有一些共性值得深思。英雄是有出处的,也许是来自名门贵族,或许就是一介草根,他们最终成为别人心目中的英雄是因为他们的高风亮节、舍弃个人私欲而为了更高的'理想而不懈奋斗,这些人之所以成为英雄,是因为他们的心中正义感喷薄欲出,达到了一种嫉恶如仇、具有非常人能及的境界,最终舍生取义、赴汤蹈火而在所不辞!
当今社会很有那么一些毫无原则只讲结果的人,这些人是极具功利的人,他们的理想也就是升官发财,停留在吃喝玩乐之享受上,可以对任何社会污垢置之于脑后,对权贵的猖獗熟视无睹,对民众的疾苦置若罔闻,高高在上行使所谓的“权力游戏”,甚至昧着良心去做贪腐害人之事也司空见惯,这些拿着高官厚禄的福利而行苟且之事的人绝对是英雄的反面!
在我眼里,英雄就是充满正义,不奴颜卑骨,敢于说真话又具有强烈使命感的一群人,无论他们地位如何,但都具有明辨是非,不畏权势的人格,这些人才是是民族的骄傲,他们才是民族振兴的希望!
非谓语动词系列训练(二)
一:在句子意思不变的情况下用分词或不定式改写下列句子:
1.Whenhesawfromthetopofthemountain,heviewedabeautifulcity.
-----___________fromthetopofthemountain,heviewedabeautifulcity.(用分词
2.Whenitwasseenfromtheofthemountain,thecitylookslikeagarden.(用分词------_____________fromtheofthemountain,thecitylookslikeagarden.city.(用分词
3.Whenhewasaskedwhyhewentthere,hesaidhewassenttheretobetrainedforaspaceflight.
-------When________whyhewentthere,hesaidhewassenttheretobetrainedforaspaceflight.(用分词
4.DoyouknowtheboywhoknowsJapanese?
-----Doyouknowtheboy___________Japanese?(用分词
5.DoyouknowtheboywhoiscalledTom.
----Doyouknowtheboy________Tom.-(用分词
6.Thisisthemanwhoorganizedtheactivity.
Thisistheman________________theactivity.(用分词
7.Hefollowedhisstudentsandcamein.
------Hecamein,____________hisstudents(用分词
8.Hecameinandwasfollowedbyhisstudents
-----Hecamein,____________byhisstudents(用分词
9.Thewomanwhowasdressedinablueskirtdeliveredaspeechtous.
----Thewoman_____________inablueskirtdeliveredaspeechtous.(用分词
10.Becauseheisaphysicist,hecouldwellexplainedhowtodotheresearch.
----_______aphysicist,hecouldwellexplainedhowtodotheresearch.(用分词
11.Hewasbornonthe18thofJanuary,1979inTaiwan,andhewasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood.
-----____________onthe18thofJanuary,1979inTaiwan,andhewasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood.(用分词
12.Theflowershisfriendgavehimwilldieunlessitiswateredeveryday.
---Theflowershisfriendgavehimwilldieunless____________everyday.(用分词
13.Whenwewerewalkingdogs,wecameacrossafamousprofessor.
------When____________dogs,wecameacrossafamousprofessor.(用分词
14.Hedonatedover10billiondollarsinorderthathecouldsponsoreducation,culture,sports,andpublicwelfareintheearth-strickenarea.
-----Hedonatedover10billiondollars_____________education,culture,sports,andpublicwelfareintheearth-strickenarea.(用不定式
15Afterhehadfinishedhishomework,heplayedthepiano.
-----____________hishomework,heplayedthepiano.
16.Afterthebridgehadbeencompleted,itwentthroughahardtimebecauseofthebadweather.
----______________________,itwentthroughahardtimebecauseofthebadweather.
17ItissaidthatBellinventedthetelephone.
18.Bellissaid__________thetelephone.(用不定式
19.Idon’tdecidewhatIshoulddo.
Idon’tdecidewhat__________(用不定式
20.Ithappenedthathehadbeeninvited
----Hehappened_____________
21.Hewassoyoungthathecouldnotgotoschool.Hewastooyoung__________toschool.
22.Whenthetestwasfinished,webeganourholiday.
-----Thetest__________,webeganourholiday.(用独立主格结构
23.Astimegoesby,hebecomsawareofit.
Withtime________by,hebecomesawareofthesignificantofit.
24.Themoon,whichtravelsroundtheearthonceeverymonth,isanaturalsatelliteoftheearth.
----Themoon,___________roundtheearthonceeverymonth,isanaturalsatelliteoftheearth.
25.Thoughhehadbeentoldseveraltimes,hedidn’tunderstandme.
-----_______severaltimes,hedidn’tunderstandme.
26.Aftertheproblemwassolved,hetookarest.
----Withtheproblem____________,hetookarest.
27.Iftimepermits,wewill
28.Helaythere,hishandclenched,hiseyeslookingstraightup.
---Helaythere,hishand_______,hiseyeslookingstraightup
29.IoncereadabookcalledMan,WomanandChild,whichenabledmetounderstandtheloveinafamily.
------IoncereadabookcalledMan,WomanandChild,______________metounderstandtheloveinafamily.(用分词
30.Therearemanyplacesofinterest,amongwhichistheYunjimountain,whosesceneryisverybeautiful,whichattractslotsoftouristsfromdifferentplaceseveryyear.
------Therearemanyplacesofinterest,amongwhichistheYunjimountain,whosesceneryisverybeautiful,____________lotsoftouristsfromdifferentplaceseveryyear.(用分词
二:非谓语动词完成句子练习
therewasnodoctoravailable.(only
,playingcardsathomeortakingawalkinthepark?(spend
.(think
包括三名儿童).(child
5.根据他的话判断),hedidwellinhisexam.(judge
theTangDynasty.(date
7.Thisisanarticle(由五部分组成)fiveparts.(consist
fiveparts.(make
assoonaspossible.(solve
boredalotoffanstodeath.(concern
,lcannotobjecttoyourmarriage.(concern
子)atschool?(keep)
(躲在木箱里)behindthedoor.(hide
,wehadtowalkhomelastnight.(be.
inthebroaddaylightyesterday.(rob
(满是脚印).(mark
(石油价格上涨),theeconomyofthatcountryisslowingdown.(go
18.Whenthenationalflagisbeinghoisted,allthestudentsstandatattention,.(fix
him,Idecidedtowriteagain.(hear
20.Hedoesn’tseemtomindbyothers.(make
nextweekisofgreatimportance.(hold
isveryimportant.(hold
isofgreatimportance.(hold
theThirdWorld.(belong
(致力于研究),theprofessorpaidlittleattentiontohissurroundings.(devote
inthemorning.(come
(为了确保那孩子尽快康复),fivedoctorstookturnslookingafterhimdayandnight.(ensure
,theoldmanstruggledtohisfeet.(help
,theparentsweretakentothediningroom.(show)
(.support)
.(drop)
,Iamnotfamiliarwiththiskill.(tell
(为了不被注意)byothers.(notice
三:合并下列句子
1.Theannualschoolsportsmeetingwasheldyesterday.Itpresentedamarvelousopeningceremony.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.Aftertheopeningceremony,wesatinthebaseofourclass.Wewaitedpatientlyforthebeginningoftherace.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.Someofmyclassmatesworkveryhard,andtheyhopetofulfilltheirdream.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4..MyfriendChristinetookpartinthe800-meterrace.Shehadreceivedtrainingmanytimes,soshekeptcalmbeforetherace.After400meters,thoughshelookedtired,shestilltriedherbesttorun.Wescreamedandbeatthedrumwhenwesawshepassedby.Shewonthemedal,andwewereproudofit.(把短文中的从句或并列句改成非谓语动词
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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四:语篇填空用所给动词的适当形式填空。(一)
Freudwasoneofthefirstscientists[1]_________(make)seriousresearchofthemind.Themindisthecollectionofactivities[2]_________(base)inthebrainthatinvolvehowweact,think,feelandreason.Heusedlongtalkswithpatientsandthestudyofdreams[3]___________(search)forthecausesofmentalandemotionalproblems.Healsotriedhypnosis(催眠.Hewantedtoseeif[4]________(put)patientsintoasleep-likeconditionwouldhelpease
[5]________(trouble)minds.Inmostcaseshefoundtheeffectsonlytemporary.Freudworkedhard,althoughwhathedidmightsoundeasy.Hismethodinvolved[6]________(sitwithhispatientsand[7]________(listen)tothemtalk.Hehadthem[8]________(talk)aboutwhatevertheywerethinking.Allideas,thoughtsandanythingthatenteredtheirmindhadto
[9]___________(express).Therecouldbeno[10]________(hold)backbecauseoffearorguilt.基础写作:最近,你就读的学校——广东实验中学高中部将举办开放日。你将作为学校的
学生代表向前来参观的英语老师介绍高中校区的基本情况,请准备好你的解说词,文章的开头和结尾已为你写好。(学会用非谓语动词表达)
?位置交通:位于广州市西部,荔湾区;出行便利,步行到地铁站约10分钟。?学校历史:逾120年的悠久历史;现高中校区于2004年竣工并投入使用。?校园环境:占地面积约125,000平方米;植物繁茂,绿树成荫,环境优美。?校园设施:课室宽敞明亮,配备齐全;拥有标准运动设施,
其中综合体育馆可用于举办比赛、会议和典礼。
?师生情况:目前学生约3000人,教师约200人;全体师生正在
为学校更美好的明天共同奋斗。
?【写作要求】
?只能用5个句子表达全部内容。?【评分标准】?句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
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非谓语动词练习答案
1.Seeing2.Seen(原句有误,请改成Whenitwasseenfromthetopofthemountain,thecityisbeautiful(用分词3.asked4.knowing5.called6.organizing7.following8.followed9.dressed10.Being11.Born12.watered13.walking14.tosponsor15.Havingfinished16.Havingbeencompleted1718..tohaveinvented
19.todo20.tohavebeeninvited21.togo22finished23.going24.travelling25.HavingbeentoldTold26.solved27.permitting28.clenched29.enabling30.attracting
二:非谓语动词完成句子练习
Keys:
1.onlytobetold(that2.tospendyourspare/freetime
3.thinkingabout4.includingthreechildren/threechildrenincluded
5.Judgingfrom/byhiswords/whathesaid
6.datingbackto/from(whichdatesbackto/from
7.consistingof/whichconsistsof
8.madeupof/whichismadeupof9.tosolvetheproblem
10.concerningthefootballmatch11.As/SofarasIamconcerned
12.(inkeepingfivechildren13.hiddeninawoodenbox
14.Therebeingnobus15.tohavebeenrobbed
16.Seenfromthetopof17.Seeingfromthetopof
18.Tosee19.markedwithfootprints
20.thepriceofoilgoingup21.fixedon/uponthenationalflag
22.with(bothhishandstied23.Nothavingheardfrom
24.(hisbeingmadefunof25.tobeheld
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