Yesterday was Father's Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn't remember it until in the morning.It was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I
got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.
What a wonderful surprise!
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination on International Business English Writing you gave last Friday. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.
I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.Please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.
I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make-up examination. I will come to your office during your office hour on Monday to discuss this possibility with you. Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerelyyours,
Wang Hua
1.看一遍申请人的个人材料或,这样你的推荐信才能和申请相吻合,而不会在内容上有所冲突或重复。
2.让申请人给你提供更多的材料,如简历等。
3.描述你把该申请人和其他申请人对比的先决条件。
我已从教20年,过去五年来,我指导过大约450名学生的独立研究项目。
五年来,我每年夏天带10名实习生,同时还以大银行集团(Big BankCorp.培训老师的身份带200多名大学生。
4.探讨你对申请人的了解程度。
我认识Doe先生是因为我每周的两次课他都上,而事实上只要求上一次。
史密斯小姐在大六会计事务所(Big Six Accounting Firm升职前两年一直直接向我报告。
5.选你所观察到的申请人的一、两个优点。
珍妮有绝佳的写作和与人交往技巧。Doe先生的特点是坚韧不拔、有分析头脑、善于与人沟通。
6.在描述这些优点的时候,举具体事例来支持你的观点,事例要尽量具体、详细。
他是我所教过的学生中唯一一名把听我所有的课当成一种不懈而最终成功掌握金融理论的努力的学生。班上只有10%的学生得了A,他是其中之一。珍妮有这样好的写作技巧,我毫不犹豫就让她写了一份报告,这份报告是我们政治行动委员会(PAC一项重要政策声明的基础。有了珍妮这20多页关于中东政治的分析,国会议员XXX用这份声明去游说,以图吸纳更多的资金。
7.力求把这名学生的能力量化,或把他和其他申请人相对比。
他是班上10%的好学生之一。在我所知的她的同龄人中,她的'分析能力是最好的。
8.避免一般化和陈词滥调。
9.有一些很温和的批评。
就我所知,他唯一的缺点是他与世无争的性格,这种性格使得他有时隐匿了年轻人的活力和广博的兴趣。
偶尔地,她的坚韧和坚持会变成固执,但通常她都性格很好,头脑也很冷静。
10.谈谈申请人在他/她所选领域里的前景
我竭力向贵商业学校推荐Doe先生,这名成熟的学生会成为一名优秀的商人。
史密斯小姐有优异的领导、写作等才能,她会成为一名出色的战略咨询人员,会成为她所服务的商业机构的骄傲。
Dear professor Jackson:
I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination you gave on Moby-Dick last Wednesday. I feel badly about it and want you to know what happened.
On my way to class that day,I had a flat tire,and I had to go with the mechanic when he repaired it. It took me more than one hour to get it done. A copy of the bill is enclosed.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make up examination. I will #e to your office during your office hour on Monday to discuss this possibility with you. Once again,I''m sorry fro any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
Alice
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