写议论类作文

写议论类作文

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写议论类作文

写议论类作文【一】

假期,爸爸妈妈和我去郊外游玩,郊外的景色可真是美不胜收呀。

蔚蓝色的天空一碧如洗,如同被清水洗过的蓝宝石一样那么湛蓝、透亮。不时飘来朵朵白云,它们在悠闲的散着步,这些云朵一会儿像小白兔,一会儿像小绵羊,一会儿像棉花糖……真是千姿百态、变化多端啊!一群小鸟在“叽叽喳喳”地叫着,像是在大合唱,又像是在赞美这风景优美的地方。

树林里一棵棵树木如大伞般高耸入云、郁郁葱葱,茂盛的树叶密密麻麻、青翠欲滴,强劲有力的树枝铺散开来、正向我们展示着它的生机勃勃呢!

树林边一朵朵娇艳的花儿竞相开放。花儿有红的、白的、粉的、紫的……百花齐放、五颜六色、争奇斗艳,好看极了!路旁绿油油的小草铆足了精神,正在微风中伴舞,好像在为花儿的选美比赛呐喊助威呢!

弯弯曲曲的小路指引着我们去探访寻觅,空气中不时飘来的桂花香味真的沁人心脾,让我们忍不住地深深吸上几口,妈妈说我们就命名这条路为“香路”好不好?我们一起拍手赞成。

这里的小河清澈见底,不时还有几条小鱼快活地游着,它们有时转圈圈有时停下来,摇着尾巴、吐着泡泡,也显得异常高兴。

我们都被郊外的景色深深的陶醉了。这儿就像一幅亮丽的油彩画,而大伙儿都是其中的一份子,我们沉迷在这美景中,流连忘返。多么希望爸爸妈妈多带我出来走走,看看大自然的美景。

写议论类作文【二】

我爱我的校园,爱她那美丽的外表和华丽的一幢。

走进校园大门,首先映入眼帘的是一个双层圆形的大花坛。画坛的正中央有一个长方形石台,上面是三个用大理石雕刻的少先队员雕像。花坛里种满了各种花。春天的时候,花坛里的各种花长出了茁壮的花苗,为校园带来了一丝春意,随着时间的流逝,花苗也一天天长高,长大。

很快夏神来到人间,花坛里的花竞相开放,争艳斗丽。你看那美人蕉像一个个美丽的少女亭亭玉立在花坛中央。五彩缤纷的月季花在风中跳舞,阵阵花香沁人心脾。

看完争奇斗艳的花坛,我们在去一睹教学楼的风采吧!

一座三层教学楼耸立在学校中央,白色瓷砖在阳光下闪闪发光,和教学楼紧紧相连的是多功能教室,那是一个形状奇异的六角八面体。我们的教室在二楼,教室里宽敞明亮,我们在这里学习,就像一群小蜜蜂,在科学的花朵里采撷知识的花粉。

“叮铃铃……”下课铃响了,同学们如同彩蝶般飞向教学楼后面的操场,操场上顿时沸腾起来。我们的操场非常大,夏天的时候绿草如茵仿佛给操场铺上了毛绒地毯,秋天地上落满了黄叶,踩上去软软得格外舒服。

这就是我们美丽的校园,同时也是我们的乐园。我爱你校园,爱你的一草一木,爱你的一砖一瓦,爱你的所有,爱你的全部。将来无论我走到哪里,你都是我魂牵梦绕的地方。

写议论类作文【三】

一天深夜,我起来小便时,突然窗外传来隐隐约约的谈话声,我连忙打开窗户瞧一瞧,看一看,呀!原来是枣树、柿树和棕树在谈话。听到枣树对柿树说:“我的本领大,我新鲜水果可以吃营养好,晒干以后变成红枣就是补品”。柿树不服的说:“我的本领比你还大,我的新鲜果子也能吃晒干以后就是柿饼,还可以榨柿油我的本领比你大。”

棕树爷爷听了不耐烦的说:“你们别吵了,每一个人都有优点和缺点,要发扬优点,减少缺点,来年要多结果实为人们再立新功。

写议论类作文【四】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;

2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);

3.你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people 

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:

1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3)传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

写议论类作文【五】

从前有一只兔子他的非常烦恼自己的红色的眼睛,如果能治好他的红色的眼睛,他愿意为此付出任何代价。

有一天晚上,夜静悄悄的,月亮笼罩着大地,兔子出来活动了。他独自走在街道上,闷闷不乐的走着走着。当他来到一颗大树下时见到一只猫头鹰,猫头鹰见老鼠闷闷不乐的样子就问道:“老弟为了什么事不高兴啊?”兔子低声回答说:“我的眼睛是红的……”说着哭了起来,猫头鹰见兔子哭了,就连忙安慰说:“兔老弟别哭,别哭,在这个世界各种动物都有各自的缺点呀,他们也没有自怨自艾啊!比如说蜜蜂他虽然没有近视眼,但他的生命却非常的短暂;乌龟寿命很长,但他经常无法翻身;狗虽然没什么大的缺点,却永远只能替他人看门。”听完这些话兔子停止了哭泣,他对猫头鹰点点头,心情也变好了。不再为自己的红色的眼睛而闷闷不乐了。

我们自然界的每个生物都有一点缺点,但我们不要为了这些不高兴,应该乐观去面对。

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