月,甘肃舟曲特大泥石流灾害当天,身处灾区的岁男孩王凯“习惯性”地用手机拍下黑暗中一盏微弱的烛火,并配以文字上传微博。这条微博使王凯成为全国图文“报道”灾情的第一人,成为连接外界和灾区的桥梁。而后,他奔波于灾区并通过手机在微博上记录见闻,被冠以“微博男生”、“一个人的通讯社”等称号。灾难使这个“后”男生学会坚强和担当,在虚拟与现实的“灾难战场”,“后”不仅显得可爱,更令人感到可亲可敬。
“追星”如今已成为一种时尚,成为年轻人的标志。其实“追星”并不是一种好现象,但如果适当的,选择好的“星”做为自己学习的榜样,这也不失为一件好事。但许多人却以夸张、疯狂的态度“追星”,不仅没有好处而且对社会也无益。
那些“明星”和我们一样,也是人,不是神。有些人疯狂到为了得到他们的东西,不惜一切代价。记得电视上报道过,有四个女生太喜欢自己的偶像,但却怕对他不够忠诚、热心,并决定要将那偶像永远留在她们“心中”,便活生生地吞掉了那偶像的照片。那样有什么用?这样就在“心中”了吗?到头来还不是一个个的被推进手术室!那照片有用吗?这样疯狂地崇拜有意义吗?有的甚至为了偶像而要轻生自己。这种做法实在太恐怖了,扰乱了社会秩序,增加了家人的负担。这样子追星到头来还不是一场空。
正因为那些Fans的太过热情,使那些原本和我们一样是工作者的“星”渐渐忘却了自己真正的价值。但有一件事情让我难以忘却。
一次,一个电影明星来到汽车检修站,一位女工接待了他,可那位女工却对他的到来没有任何惊讶和兴奋,这便引起了这位影星的注意,其实那位女工很喜欢他,也爱看他的电影但她却没有像别人那样疯狂、热情。她说:“您有您的成就,我有我的工作,您来修车就是我的顾客,我会热情的招待您,如果您不是明星了,再来修车,我还是一样热情的`招待您。”最后她说了一句发人深省的话:“人与人之间不应该是这样吗?”是啊!这就是明星的价值,真正的价值。他们就和我们一样,为什么我们要放弃掉自己所有的,去盲目的崇拜呢?
可是既然社会上有了“追星”这一现象,所以我们也可以适当的“追星”,选择品德好,有益于我们自己的人作为自己的榜样。其实“追星”有好有坏,但好与坏就在于我们自己的选择了。
像“追星”这一现象的流行,我们需要独立思考,了解它们所具有的意义所包含的价值,避免盲目效仿追随。
“后”的韩婷,辽宁大连人,是个月大宝宝的妈妈。她看到同样是个月大的小王涵被严重烫伤,心疼地流下眼泪。她在网络上组织成立“王涵爱心妈妈群”,呼唤大家对王涵的关心;她在现实中忙前忙后,用实际行动照顾这个受伤的孩子。在她的感召下,社会各界为小王涵捐治疗款万元,孩子的伤势得到治疗。她是网友熟知的“韩小宝”,她是后的“爱心妈妈”。
盲女林妍和导盲犬Sherry
高挑时尚的岁盲女林妍,岁因视力矫正手术失败而失明,坚强的她通过努力被评为沈阳十佳残疾人创业标兵。年父亲因病离世,她和母亲万分悲痛,心理和生活一直处在抑郁中。直到今年月,经过两年的申请而获得的'中国首批导盲犬之一——Sherry来到她身边。Sherry是只训练有素的导盲犬,和它走在路上,林妍重新找回了健全人的感觉。对林妍来说,Sherry不是一只狗,而是伴侣,是亲人。她深信Sherry是她前世走失的家人,今世回来要重新相伴一生。
亲爱的妈妈:
你好!
又到了年末,让我思绪万千,这么多年未曾见面,不知你可安好?你有没有想过我和弟弟?有没有过回家的念头?是或否,答案在你的心里。
自我记事起,记忆里便没有过你的影子,哪怕只是一点点。你为什么出去打工六、七年,直到现在也不给家里打个电话?隐约中只有刚出门时那么几个电话。
小时候的我们,虽然日子过得清苦,但是一家人多么幸福啊!家庭和睦,团团圆圆。我们也明白若不是经济紧张,你们也不会出去打工,可是你为什么不回来看看我和弟弟,爸爸无论在哪务工,春节时都回来呀!
还记得我小时候吗?那是多么的快乐呀!爸爸和你上山干农活时总会带上我和弟弟,你们在地里干着活,我守在弟弟旁边看着你们。你们脸颊上的汗水凝成了珠,滴在了土地上,可是你们是笑着的呀,是发自内心的笑。这就是苦,但苦中有甘。
小时候的我,有点调皮,有些捣蛋,喜欢拿你的耳钉玩。有一次,一不小心,把你的塑料耳钉塞到了鼻子里,取不出来。我特别害怕,就难过得大哭,你知道后,想尽了办法帮我取出来。可是,越紧张就越出错,耳钉不仅没取出来,反倒越往鼻腔里去了。我看见你哭了,你在担心我呀!你顾不上穿好外衣,急急忙忙地找到了爸爸,抱着我往医院赶。到了医院门口,我打了个喷嚏,耳钉出来了。我看了看你,你笑了,喜极而泣,抱着我蹲在地上哭了好久。我依稀记得,那天的风,凉飕飕的,要变天了。
不知从何时起,我隐约觉得你变了,变成了我不认识的妈妈,你和奶奶吵架了,我在奶奶那儿吃饭,你硬拖我下来,带到厨房里,把饭塞到我嘴里,用筷子戳好几下,戳到我的喉咙,我痛得眼泪往外涌,而你却无动于衷。
那天爸爸去邻居家了,你见爸爸前脚走,你立马用被子蒙住我的脸,坐在我身上,我扯着喉咙大喊,直到声音喑哑,我以为我要死了,爷爷奶奶知道了,赶来把你从我身上推下去,抱走了一息尚存的我,我泪水一直在流,心也一直在痛。
如今的我回忆起往昔种种,泪水横流,可是我不恨你呀!因为你是生我养我的亲妈,你为什么不回来呢?为什么不肯打个电话回家呢?什么原由,恐怕只有你自己清楚了。
看着同学一个个父母疼爱,我只能在一旁干瞪眼了。记忆中的你,日渐模糊,不懂你为何能狠下心来离家出走抛弃我们,你可知我、弟弟和爸爸为你流过了多少辛酸的泪,哭过多少回,爸爸为你瘦了多少,你未曾知道。
盼,在我少年时代与你能够再见面一回,哪怕再见只是陌路人也无防。
你的女儿:胡楠
20xx年6月3日
岁的长春小伙卢续,一个普通的房地产公司职工,在吉林永吉巨大洪灾面前挺身而出,用他的智慧与勇敢,成功挽救了一个又一个鲜活的生命。在他的身上,让人看到源自于人内心最本质的一种温暖与力量。当“救人视频”出现在网络上,被无数网友不断“顶”起,几天内点击量达数百万次,一度成为网络上“最揪心”“最感动”的暖流。灾难面前,一个又一个卢续告诉我们:洪水无情,但人间有爱,在这些平凡人身上,到处散发着人性的光芒与温暖。
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;
2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);
3.你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。
1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。
2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。
3)传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
洛阳市突降暴雨,市内一交通要道水深及膝,积水深达厘米,交通拥堵不堪。交警戚新峰在水中指挥交通。虽然穿着雨衣,但由于涉水时间较长,他的裤子都已湿透。紧张的疏导中,一只皮鞋被水冲走了,他索性把另一只鞋也脱掉,继续淌水指挥。戚新峰雨中指挥交通、援手被困群众的视频,被网友传至大河论坛,迅速走红。网友称戚新峰为“赤脚哥”,他在平凡中创造感动,在风雨中彰显无私。
在“韩白骂战”中,“抽嘴巴”“付出血的代价”等暴力字眼出现频率极高,由此现今社会暴力倾向严重可见一斑。作为长辈,作为有社会影响的人物,成天个把打啊***啊血啊等话儿挂在嘴边,这社会的暴力倾向能不严重吗?孩子从长辈那里得到一个讯息:以拳头解决问题。从家庭暴力到校园斗殴再到社会不良青年打群架,难道其中没有值得反省的东西?
以上是我从“韩白骂战”中看到的几个与现今社会现象有关的问题。
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