绍兴中考英语作文范文【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
绍兴中考英语作文范文【二】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
绍兴中考英语作文范文【三】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成\"总—分—总\"结构
绍兴中考英语作文范文【四】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
绍兴中考英语作文范文【五】
正月初五早上，我的心情十分激动，因为妈妈要带我到一直梦寐以求的绍兴东湖。
到了东湖，我和妈妈买好票，来到了陈旧的风景区大门。一入门，一幅壮丽的＂山水画〃展现在我的眼前。湖面上有许多山峰，就像从水底钻出来的一样，山峰层出不穷。山上积石累累，像墨染一般，丛丛灌木，点缀在山石二间。我和妈妈沿着一条石头砌的路走了好久，来到了一座拱桥，这座石桥古朴而典雅，我靠在石桥上，拂面而来的微风吹得人心旷神怡。妈妈说：＂我们去做乌篷船吧！〃我高兴地点了点头。来到码头，看到那条船，我有些胆怯了，那是条小船，我生怕它会在湖里翻船，一直不敢上去，妈妈鼓励我：“试试，不会有问题的。”我慢慢的踏出一只脚，船开始摇晃，我拉了一下栏杆，两只脚都上去了。船夫兴致勃勃地用脚踏着桨，我和妈妈坐在船上，有一种飘飘欲仙的感觉。听妈妈说东湖很深，东湖的山有多高，水就有多深。马上就来到了仙桃洞，洞的高度有7。8米，洞的外型像一个仙桃，所以，顾名思义，就叫仙桃洞。接着我们上了岸，准备爬山。从下向上看，我便胆战心惊，心想：这会不会掉下去？妈妈好像看出了我的心思：＂儿子，这么快你就打退堂鼓，快咱们一起上去。〃这句话使我一下子充满了信心，因为山路经常被风吹雨打，所以路面坑坑挖挖，很不好走，我还摔了几个＂狗啃泥，〃终于到达了山顶。从上向下看，一饱东湖的美丽景色，真是大饱眼福啊！
时间在我不知不觉中悄悄的溜走了，美好时光总是流失得这么快。傍晚4点，我依依不舍的告别了给我留下美好印象的东湖。
绍兴中考英语作文范文【六】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
绍兴中考英语作文范文【七】
晴空万里，蔚蓝的天空上飘动着一丝丝浮云。在这样的天气和爸爸一起去东湖游玩，真是妙不可言。
我怀着兴奋的心情下车，拉着爸爸去买票。买好票我们便步入古朴的风景区大门。一入门内，好清秀的一幅“山水画”展示在我眼前。湖面上，一座山峰破水而出，山上积石累累，像墨染一般，丛丛灌木，点缀在山石之间；山脚下，密密层层地长着一大片莲叶，让人不禁联想到，当夏天的时候，这莲叶中会托出一朵朵出水芙蓉，使人不禁想到古人杨万里的诗句“接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红”。
泛舟湖上，只见水天一色，让人有飘飘欲仙的感觉。那鹤发童颜的老船工兴致勃勃地介绍那关于“仙桃洞”的传说，更使人心驰神往。船近“仙桃洞”，我们才看清洞口呈桃形，左边有一个上联“水深三千尺不见底”，右边也有一个下联“桃树三千年一开花”。
游船又把我们带到陶公洞，传说这是东晋大诗人陶潜游踪所至之处。我们一进洞，就看见石壁上刻着几行苍劲挺拔的大字，是一首诗，我费力地读出内容，正在琢磨，船进洞啦，我这才恍然大悟，这首诗写得不错，船行至此，看如无路可走，却见船首一转，一个岩洞奇迹般地出现，可谓“山重水复疑无路，柳暗花明又一村。”
东湖名不虚传，果然风景优美，鸟语花香。不愧是绍兴的大湖之一啊！
