英语作文写游记的好的短语【一】
One Sunday my mother (Mother had (made me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country. She bade me take good care of him.
While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently. We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling at us and heard the birds sing (singing their sweet songs on the trees. The scenery was indeed very pretty (beautiful.
When we felt tired, we returned home. We saw Mother (our mother wait (waiting for us at the door.
乡村游记
有一个星期日，我母亲叫我带小弟弟去乡村游历。她吩咐我要好好照料他。
当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着，并听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的'歌曲，风景实十分美丽。
当我们感觉到疲倦的时候，我们就回家了。我们看见母样正在门口等候我们。
英语作文写游记的好的短语【二】
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英语作文写游记的好的短语【三】
2.文句短。长句表意丰富，含蓄蕴藉，行文舒缓，给人严谨缜密之感。然而，无深厚的文字功底，加之时的思想紧张，句子一长，极易顾此失彼，造成病句。短句构建快捷，简洁明了，凝练生动，写之顺畅，读之清楚。因此，应力求多用短句，少用长句，长短结合，参差错落。
3.段落短。行文分段不宜太长，段落短小，层次分明，条理清楚，文思脉络显而易见。长段大段，组织不当，便有内容庞杂，冗长累赘，思绪紊乱之嫌。写时尤须力戒“三大段”，防止中间一段连篇累牍，又胖又长，如猪之肥腹，有失雅观。
4.结尾短，范文《议论文点评短语》。抒情怀、凸旨意，不枝枝蔓蔓，不拖泥带水，不画蛇添足，干净利落，戛然而止，余韵悠然。
5.篇幅短。大家知道，中考阅卷正值炎热天气，阅卷工作量大，且有规定的时间，既紧张又辛苦，“鸿篇巨制”显然是不合适宜、不受欢迎的。短小精悍才是选择的上策。当然，通常中考大多都有字数限制，一般在600字左右，写时自然必须按要求去做，但是如果不加控制，过度增字加长，一发而不可收，以致成了“老太婆的裹脚布——又臭又长”，势必让人反感。
6.议论短。议论有画龙点睛之功效。或述感怀或表见解，或评或论，析事剖理，闪金铄玉，当精粹简练，要言不烦，切莫又多又滥。
英语作文写游记的好的短语【四】
有一个星期日，我母亲叫我带小弟弟去乡村游历。她吩咐我要好好照料他。
当我们沿着道路行走的'时候，太阳灿烂地照耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着，并听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲，风景实十分美丽。
当我们感觉到疲倦的时候，我们就回家了。我们看见母样正在门口等候我们。
英语作文写游记的好的短语【五】
Perhaps autumn is the most pleasant season of the year. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. It is the best time for going on a trip.
Last Sunday we went to the countryside. There was golden wheat all over the fields/The fields were covered with golden wheat. Large and colourful apples and pears were hanging on the trees. We could see some peasants were busy getting in the crops in the fields, and others were picking fruits under the trees. All the baskets were full of lovely fruits. It was also the fruit of the peasants' labour. “ No pains, no gains. ” What a magnificent/beautiful picture(it was! It seemed as if we were wandering in a splendid/wonderful world.
I love autumn. I love the harvest time.
英语作文写游记的好的短语【六】
Summer is coming up, it was getting hot, and the mountain under the tree back and forth to get busy, several obscure bugs out, dad took his camera took some unknown bugs, actually photographed a lizard messed upand dropped the run out of the ride, commonly known as "lizard", this is the first time I saw it in the wild!Standing on the peak, and it was around, look at the past of the city also has a very special feeling, xinanjiang squiggles goes the distance, both sides of the feijia River like a rainbow across the hengjiang, Hui camel stands quietly, watching the eyes back and forth, busy people. !
Today, mountaineering really let me bang, not only see the beautiful scenery of mountains, and also appreciate the beauty of the mountain city.
英语作文写游记的好的短语【七】
Summer vacation on that day, our whole family to get up early followed set out to travel, filled with our laughter all the way.
Came to the tiger mountain, I saw the mountains at the foot of the mountain have a rest, the salesman saw we'll meet up selling their goods to us, we didn't buy it back in the car, the car from the bottom to the top of the hill, hill road edge is very thin, mountain road is rugged, I looked at the cliffs and thought, because I was the first time to drift, don't know what kind of drift.
Got to the top of the mountain, a few yawn, everyone tired to lazy underground car, is the entrance of a pile of air craft, large and small filled with the door. Staff repeatedly asked everyone: "wear life jacket wear a good helmet to right door to wait in line."
Put on the clothes after we will go to the line, to me, I and my mother sat with a boat atmosphere. On the big boat when staff told us how handrails... Just with a curious mood along the landscape to the distance. This water can be bad to "walk", along the way encounter a lot of risks, vortex, boat, landslides, everything, when all boats were in small caves are fixed, while I was watching the scenery is being cold water on it. Originally all in a water fight! I also not to be outdone, also play the water wars, everyone no matter know all splashed to on to each other, the cave echoed with our laughter...
Suddenly, in front of a boat out of the shortcut. Slowly, the crowd to evacuate, our boat slip out, I also coming ashore from the boat down to the water to go swimming.
On shore, I also don't forget to read the war. Think of my happy journey, he couldn't help laughing. This is my summer vacation journey of happiness, you think fun?
