中学生获奖作文社会类【一】
青海湖
我们从西宁机场一下飞机就直接驱车赶往青海湖，因天色已晚，所以决定明早再去游青海湖。
天刚刚蒙蒙亮，我和妈妈就早早的起了床。我们刚走出房间，就看见对面有一只小鹿，真可爱！于是我赶紧拿出相机，“咔嚓”一声，就把小鹿照进了相机。“瞧，日出！”姐姐打叫起来，顺着她手指的方向，我顿眼望去，哇，好美的日出啊！太阳好像一个娃娃，一睡醒，就不停地踢着被子，很久很久。。。。。才露出一个圆圆的脸，害羞地张望着大地，湖面上波光粼粼，像仙女撒下的一把碎金，整个水面金光闪烁。只见青海湖里的小鱼，有的在和伙伴捉迷藏，有的在休息，还有的在追逐、嬉戏。接着，我们还去了二郎剑，这里最好玩的'是骑牦牛，骑在牛背上，摸着他柔软的皮毛，真舒服！
现在我们马上赶往下一个景点——
张掖
沿途有许许多多美丽的风景：祁连大草原，牛羊成群，像一颗颗黑白相间的珍珠镶嵌在碧绿的地毯上。茶卡盐湖，坐上小火车，眺望两岸的风景，碧水蓝天，胜似人间天堂。门源油菜花，芳草绿野，仿佛世外桃源。瓜州，瓜果飘香，果肥汁甜。酒泉，卫星发射基地，处处有航天。。。。
终于达到了今天的目的地——张掖。张掖是世界著名的丹霞地貌之一，你们知道丹霞是怎么形成的吗？丹霞是由红色砂砾岩经长期风化剥离和流水年久侵蚀所形成的孤立山峰和陡峭的奇岩怪石。张掖的丹霞地貌分布广阔，蔚为壮观，造型奇特，色彩艳丽，这里层级错落交替，岩壁陡峭，气势磅礴，形态丰富，煞是好看。其中以色彩斑斓而称奇的有七彩峡、七彩湖、刀山、火海，无一不是奇妙景观，令人不得不赞叹大自然的鬼斧神工。
中学生获奖作文社会类【二】
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1．学生给老师打分已很普遍；
2．人们对其持不同态度（肯定或否定的态度）；
3．你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然，此任务是写一篇议论文，主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论，开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况，从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活，但有一定的语言难度，也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作，也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下，也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙，写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时，也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思，学会换位思考，这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确，赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师，就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样，不仅对学生、学校有利，而且对老师本人也有利。这样，老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己，看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可，这将是对自己的一次鼓励，为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高，老师就应进行反思，调控教学方法和教学态度。这样，教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据，内容充实，贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用，是短文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式，给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下：
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ；Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象，然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响，最后提出解决问题的办法，或者得出结论，或者提出个人看法，或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张，论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多，但最常用的是因果分析法。即：分析事实与论点的因果关系，指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点，从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中，议论文的比重占得越来越多，议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型，但文体实际是议论文，而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是：
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间，上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文，列举吸烟的危害，并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来，越来越多的中学生出国学习，出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。
1）良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。
2）拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。
3）传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇：媒介，中间人：mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad．First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods．Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展，道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解，谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
中学生获奖作文社会类【三】
趁着早晨风清气爽，我们沿着湖漫步、观赏美丽的景色。下午，我们乘汽艇欣赏长寿湖的风光。“呜--”汽艇开动了，艇边就溅起层层浪花。浪花雪白雪白的，在水面上欢快地跳跃。湖面积很大，我们游了一圈就下船了。
下船后，我、爸爸和弟弟一起坐在湖边脱了鞋袜，挽起裤脚在浅水上嬉戏，任水浪拍打我们的脚丫。
远看湖面，湖水蓝蓝的、真清静啊！静得让人看不出它的.流动。轻风一吹，层层细浪。犹如起了皱的裙幅，均匀地铺在湖面上。浪花吹起白云的倩影，明极了，亮极了。这云、这水、这浪和柔柔的微风，使人心旷神怡，好一派优美的景致。
直到下午4点，我们才依依不舍地告别这美丽的长寿湖。
中学生获奖作文社会类【四】
我有一个严肃又厉害的爸爸。他平时喜欢穿着宽松又柔软的汗衫及衬衫，他的职业是光荣又危险的人民警察。在陶堰派出所里，爸爸与同事们相处融洽，待人友好，真诚善良。爸爸十分机警，工作认真勇敢。爸爸还很聪明，小学、初中数上学次次100分。
工作时的爸爸十分勇敢。有一次，爸爸和同们一起去外地追捕一名嫌疑犯。那家伙见情形不妙，拨脚就跑，仗着地形熟悉和警察玩起了躲猫猫，爸爸坚持不懈、紧追不舍，终于把他追上了，经过一番博斗，将这个狡猾的家伙制服，捉拿归案，案子也获得了突破性的进展，获得领导和同事的表扬。＃此前在首页部分显示＃
生活中，爸爸十分善良。有一次我们上街去买东西，路上遇到一个要饭的人，爸爸说给他点钱吧。我劝爸爸不要了，因为很可能是个骗子。爸爸说不管他是真的遇到困难还是假的来行骗，他都很可怜，碰到了，就帮助一把吧。
在家里，爸爸十分友好，跟我像哥们一样地谈论电脑游戏，一起玩魔方，一起打球。爸爸有很强的好胜心，老是和我比魔方谁转得快，但自从我学会了四阶、五阶以后，我们之间的差距也就越来越大了，爸爸常是我的手下败将。我和爸爸很亲密，但他对我要求也很严格。如果我做错了什么事情，爸爸也会发脾气，指出我的错误和缺点，但当我认错的时候，他又会原谅我。
这就是我的爸爸，我最尊敬、最热爱的人。
中学生获奖作文社会类【五】
我的妈妈一米六八高，乌黑油亮的头发衬托着她美丽的脸庞，再加上那双炯炯有神的大眼睛，就是人人称赞的女神。可是，真相处一段时间，你会发现她可像一条变色龙。
我听话时，她就像一条温顺的小狗，温柔可爱；我不听话时，她就像一头发怒的狮子，咬牙切齿，暴跳如雷，搞得我日夜不得安宁。看她的脸，就如同看天气预报，阴晴未定。
有一次，我和妈妈在饭桌上吃饭。为了尽快吃完不看她那阴晴未定的'脸，我用勺子舀一勺饭，用嘴轻轻地吹，想让饭凉的快一些。但是，今日这勺子里的饭却像长了眼睛似的，直向妈妈的连衣裙上扑去，那连衣裙可是花了妈妈半个月的工资呀。“惨了惨了！这一顿打可是免不了。”我忐忑不安地在心里说。果然不出我所料，只见狮子妈妈火冒三丈，厉声说道：“你眼睛长哪了？怎么这么不小心？”我心惊胆颤地说：“妈妈，对不起，我不是故意的。”妈妈突然又温柔似水地说：“宝贝，烫着你没？下次注意点，洒衣服上是小事，烫伤了可就麻烦了。”
看看，这就是我的变色龙妈妈，因为她的变色，我的小心脏可强壮了，嘿嘿，我爱我的变色龙妈妈。
