I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
尚湖公园位于常熟西面。那里风景优美,树木茂盛,青翠欲滴。尚湖水波光粼粼,一望无际。
早就听说尚湖公园景色美不胜收,今天我就要来瞧一瞧了!
走进公园,一条石板路伸向远方,路两旁一棵棵参天大树,拔地而起,形态各异。有枝干蜿蜒曲折,好似一只手臂在欢迎游客到来;有枝干茂密,好似一把绿伞,为游客遮风挡雨;还有风儿吹过,绿叶发出“沙沙”奇妙声音,好似在介绍尚湖公园。
我们沿着石板路往前走,来到中华牡丹园。花坛中一棵棵牡丹争奇斗艳,红、粉、黄、白……五颜六色。瞧,那一朵牡丹鲜红鲜红,花瓣层层叠叠,很是饱满,像是一个火红色小太阳。再瞧,那一朵牡丹粉白动人,要说那一朵娇艳欲滴,这一朵那就是清疏淡雅,犹如一个亭亭玉立小姑娘。看着遍地牡丹,我不禁赞叹:“阅尽大千春世界,牡丹终古是花王。”
随后,我们准备在亭子里野餐。走过一条小木桥就来到亭子里了。坐在亭子里红木长凳上,眺望远处,尚湖水清澈见底,一眼便能看见水中石子,水草。鱼儿在水中嬉戏玩耍,一群一群。这时,一条轮船从湖中驶过,原本风平浪静湖面,顿时,涌起一束束美丽浪花,发出“哗哗”水流声。
尚湖风景真是让人心旷神怡、流连忘返!
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
我们的常熟之行就这样开始了!在车上,我一直很不耐烦地问他们常熟到底有没有到了啊?一路上还一直堵车。经过持续的堵车、颠簸之后,终于到了常熟。
我走下车,“哇”地一声叫出来,这真是人山人海啊!不愧是旅游黄金周哪!常熟买衣服的地方也很多,例如:招商城啊、天虹服装城啊、精品男装啊、还有七彩儿童服装城啊……可别小看了这些地方,这些地方可害惨了我们呢,把我们绕了一大圈,我们先去了招商城,看见没有合适我的童装;就去天虹服装城,没想到天虹服装城是卖成人女装的,没想到又白跑一趟;最后才找到了七彩儿童服装城。七彩儿童服装城中,在一家名叫××的'店中我看中了一条外面有毛,但里面很薄的裤子。妈妈似乎看出了我的心思,就答应给我买这条裤子,我非常高兴……最后,在一家店中,我无意中看到了那件染着橙色的外套和用机器织出来的黄色毛衣。妈妈也觉得还不错就买了下来……
临近中午,我们都感觉肚子空空的。我就想吃牛肉粉丝汤,爸爸的眼睛很锐利,一下就看到了在不远处的路边摊上有卖吃的,就随着牛肉粉丝汤飘出的香味走到了那儿。坐在座位上,津津有味地吃了起来……
快到三点了,我们拎着一大包的东西心里带着欢喜的心情依依不舍地离开了常熟!
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
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