一份诚信,一腔热血,一片拿云心事。
一曲诚信,一阕高歌,一剑笑看风云。
——题记
有这样一棵诚信的树,它诚信于友情。这棵树里,长满了元稹。白居易的共看夕阳,互勉互励。这棵诚信的树里,深藏着王勃的“无为在歧路,儿女共沾巾”。韦应物的“相送情无限,沾襟此散央”。这棵诚信的树啊,浓郁,咏秀。
有这样一方诚实的土,它诚信于人民。这方土中,培养出***的鞠躬尽瘁,焦裕绿的不辞劳苦,洗礼出岳飞的精忠报国,戚继光的横扫逶寇,林则徐的虎门硝烟。这一方诚实的土啊,深厚,凝直。
这是一个诚信的世界,在这里,它早度了这朵诚信的.花,这棵诚信的树,这方诚信的土。
人类社会需要诚信,因为它是连接古今的桥梁,是维护国与国之间友好合作关系的纽带。彼此以诚相待,在浩瀚的民族之林巍然屹立,勇敢地生长,站出大树的勇敢和力量,站出大树的无畏和顽强。
人与人之间交往,更需要诚信的阳光普照大地。润泽生命的阳光带来友谊的生机勃勃,带来欣欣向荣的景象。它美丽地洗绦了生命的污点,拟就了人生的辉煌。
拥有诚信的世界就这样的青春荡漾,而失去诚信的世界,就带着苍白无力的呼喊步入死亡。
“三英战吕布”可谓是一段千古佳话。可吕布***丁原,叛董卓,见利忘义,无诚无信,最终死在曹操的手下。
没有了甘露,大地就不再枝繁叶茂;没有了开花的激素,美丽的花朵就不能绽放;没有了翅膀,天使又怎么能飞翔。
让我们多一些诚信吧,这样的人生大树就会更加参天;让我们多一些诚信吧,这样生命之花才会更加绚丽绽放;让我们多一些诚信吧,心中的那圣洁的天使才会自由的倘徉在生命的天堂。
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;
2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);
3.你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。
1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。
2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。
3)传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
相互感恩,就会让矛盾越走越远;互相感恩,就会让心灵越来越近。
“谁言寸草心,报得三春晖”是孩子对亲人的感恩;“海内存知己,天涯若比邻”是朋友对朋友的感恩;“树树皆秋色,山山唯落晖”是人类对大自然的感恩。正因为有了感恩,才让我们的生命更阳光,正因为有了感恩,才创造了和谐的社会。
父母赋予我们生命,在我们呱呱落地时,上帝便赋予我们一颗感恩父母的心,因为,是他们把我们带到了这个神奇的世界。“爱你才会管束你,爱你才会寸步不离的守护你,爱你才会默默地注视你。”恐怕这是我们最常听的话了吧。可是,又有多少人是真正地体会到这句话的含义。现在大多都是家里的“小皇帝”“小公主”,每天饭来张口,衣来伸手,家里最好的,父母都让给了自己。父母的爱,成就了今天的我们,也正是有了他们的爱,才成就了这个和谐的家庭。——我们要感恩亲人,感恩他们的丝丝关爱。
当我们离开家人后,必定会遇到很多朋友。俗话说得好“在家靠父母,出外靠朋友”。离开了家,离开了亲人,朋友就是你最大的依靠。友谊是一杯醇香的酒,值得你去品味;友谊是一幅无色的画,值得你去着色;友谊是一首动听的歌,值得你去聆听……当然,朋友之间还是有竞争对手的。面对这些对手,我们不必害怕,不必彷徨,应该大胆地去面对他,信心十足地迎接他的挑战。但无论是失败还是成功,都不要忘了感谢你的对手,因为是对手和你一起追逐,一起攀登,一起较量,一起腾飞,他是你前进途上的强心剂、推动器。——我们要感恩朋友、感恩对手,感恩他们的帮助与力量。
在大自然中,动物和植物都给人类带来了无法计算的快乐,它们和我们一样,都有其存在的意义与价值。环境中的一草一木,一水一土,一山一丘。这些都是我们身边美好环境的构成分子。因为有了它们,我们才能享受充沛的阳光、温和的雨露和洁净的空气;居住在鸟语花香的地方;欣赏秀美壮丽的祖国山河。是它们赐给我们春夏秋冬四季的妖娆和美丽。伤害和破坏自然环境就是在伤害和扼***自己和子孙后代的生命,世界上还有什么比珍惜“生命”更重要的事呢?——我们要感恩大自然,感恩它给我们带来美好的环境。
古人说得好:滴水之恩当涌泉相报。一个人只有学会感恩,对一切事物怀有一颗感恩之心,那才能真正快乐。
生活给予我们挫折的同时,也赐予了我们坚强,我们也就有了另一种阅历。对于热爱生活的人,是从来不会吝啬感恩,我们要有一颗包容的心,来接纳生活的恩赐,酸甜苦辣不是生活的追求,但一定是生活的全部。试着用一颗感恩的心去体会,我们就会发现不一样的人生。
感恩是一种文明,感恩是一种品德,感恩更是一种责任。既然感恩,那么,就不要把所有事情都想得理所当然。
想想你现在所拥有的,都不是规定一定属于你。而这些东西,都是靠生活中的每一个人,每一件事,每一样物所得来的。想想别人为你退让的那一步,为你挽起的每一个笑容,然后你的生命变得很安详,变得很阳光,很温暖。如果整个社会是这样就太和谐了。
一份诚信,一腔热血,一片拿云心事。
一曲诚信,一阕高歌,一剑笑看风云。
——题记
有这样一棵诚信的树,它诚信于友情。这棵树里,长满了元稹。白居易的`共看夕阳,互勉互励。这棵诚信的树里,深藏着王勃的“无为在歧路,儿女共沾巾”。韦应物的“相送情无限,沾襟此散央”。这棵诚信的树啊,浓郁,咏秀。
有这样一方诚实的土,它诚信于人民。这方土中,培养出***的鞠躬尽瘁,焦裕绿的不辞劳苦,洗礼出岳飞的精忠报国,戚继光的横扫逶寇,林则徐的虎门硝烟。这一方诚实的土啊,深厚,凝直。
这是一个诚信的世界,在这里,它早度了这朵诚信的花,这棵诚信的树,这方诚信的土。
人类社会需要诚信,因为它是连接古今的桥梁,是维护国与国之间友好合作关系的纽带。彼此以诚相待,在浩瀚的民族之林巍然屹立,勇敢地生长,站出大树的勇敢和力量,站出大树的无畏和顽强。
人与人之间交往,更需要诚信的阳光普照大地。润泽生命的阳光带来友谊的生机勃勃,带来欣欣向荣的景象。它美丽地洗绦了生命的污点,拟就了人生的辉煌。
拥有诚信的世界就这样的青春荡漾,而失去诚信的世界,就带着苍白无力的呼喊步入死亡。
“三英战吕布”可谓是一段千古佳话。可吕布***丁原,叛董卓,见利忘义,无诚无信,最终死在曹操的手下。
没有了甘露,大地就不再枝繁叶茂;没有了开花的激素,美丽的花朵就不能绽放;没有了翅膀,天使又怎么能飞翔。
让我们多一些诚信吧,这样的人生大树就会更加参天;让我们多一些诚信吧,这样生命之花才会更加绚丽绽放;让我们多一些诚信吧,心中的那圣洁的天使才会自由的倘徉在生命的天堂。
很多时候,信念是一回事,务实又另当别论 ,或踌躇,或破坏,总之,面目会变,夹杂着些许不安,终究在纠结里叫人感叹情何以堪。
所以我们是凡人,我们是靠着票子和面子活着的人。如此思量,似乎就不算问题。
可依然还是问题,祖训里说,严以律己宽以待人,就不明白 ,一定要挤兑自己厚道他人,才算君子?有似乎涉及被现代人冠以权益和原则的东西,彼此有了冲突,即使,君子的甘愿牺牲,天若有知,何用?
平等是一种理想,等级就是一种常态 ,在等级里呼吁平等,还是问题,仁爱藏心宽厚待人者,发发善心,居高临下了的`眼神,满含着温柔却隐藏着傲慢,一丝丝难以察觉,壹基金,或姚基金,还有身旁的富人么。
人需要感恩,可不能太天真,人可以低调,但不能消沉;沉默未必就愚钝, 喧嚣不代表热闹,你不是我的,我只拥有我自己,永远。
这个世界,有太多的问题,可TA说,一切都还不是问题。
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