去年国庆节,爸爸和妈妈带我去黄山玩。
第二天早上,我们吃完早饭就出发了,来到了黄山公园。公园群峰高耸,雄伟多姿,秀嶂叠峙,卓立云表,以天都峰、莲花峰、光明顶、始信峰为代表的七十二峰,主山鼎立,群峰簇拥,主要类型有穹状峰、锥状峰、脊状峰、柱状峰、箱状峰。
我们先爬天都峰,这时我心里非常的害怕,爸爸说:“孩子你怎么不爬呀?”我说:“我心里害怕。”妈妈说:“你把你的胆量放大一点,那就不用怕了。”过了一会儿,我心想“我一定要爬上”我抓住铁链一直往上爬,那山壁非常的陡峭,我差一点就滑了下去。过了好久才爬到半山腰,爸爸妈妈在那儿停了下来,而我却继续往上爬,爸爸妈妈看见我就笑了,爬了好长时间,我们终于爬上了山顶,那大自然的风,一阵阵吹到了我的脸上,真是太爽了!我往下看去,真有一览众山小的景象。
突然我看见了一座山峰,名叫仙人峰,那山峰就像是仙人一样的美,它的下面有许多花草树木,旁边还有一座山峰,中间有一点儿缝隙,传说有仙人来过这里,所以人们把它叫做仙人峰。我还看见了仙人指路、迎客松,那迎客松长的非常的笔直,看起来好像是一把伞一样,旁边还有一块大大的岩石,上面刻着迎客松三个大字。接着又看见了一个像桃子一样的岩石。
我还看见过很多很多的美丽的景色,这都是来自大自然的景色。同学们,如果你们有时间的话就叫你们的爸爸妈妈带你去感受一下大自然的风光吧!
月亮出来了,暮霭像一层蟑翼般的轻纱,把黄山遮得绰绰约约。喧哗了一天的黄山,渐渐变得静谧,只是奔腾欢唱的溪水和低吟慢啸的松涛仍在不知疲倦地诉说着恋情。
不知是这流泉松涛的召唤,还是受了黄山暮霭的诱惑,我们决意夜踏天都峰,趁着这难得的清风明月,去聆听这认黄山的迷人的旋律,去欣赏这夜黄山迷人的风采。
幽蓝的天幕上,明月如银盘喷射出清冷的寒辉,引我们上路,几颗稀落的星星也不甘寂寞,眨着眼睛伴我们同行。远处飞瀑拍击岩石的轰鸣声和着松涛的阵阵呼啸,好似一首交响曲,又像一曲古老的歌谣,领着我们一步一步走进一个童话世界。于是我们便成了巡行在林中的小矮人,沿着山间缠绕的石径,去寻访白雪公主的踪迹。
穿白龙桥,上慈光阁,攀金沙岭,越青鸾桥,过山寺,我们来到了蟠龙坡。举目四望,那叫天门的金鸡变成了携手上天都的五老,望月的玉兔和拜观音的童子正在虔诚地抚掌膜拜,月光给它们镀上银辉,使它们更栩栩如生。天都峰似一堵巍峨的飞墙,直耸青天,山与天际相接,在皎洁的闪光下勾勒成一组剪影,如骏马奋蹄怒驰,又似群仙欢聚,或产,或坐,或卧,好个超凡脱俗人间盛会!我们陶醉了,仿佛随着皎洁的月光弥漫起的羽翼,向着这奇异的境地飞升。
走,登天都!
手扶铁索,一步一步小心地走过奇险的回峰曲路,山一点一点地被踩在脚下,云雾在身边缭绕,仿佛伸手可及。当你伸出手去,调皮的云儿又从你的指缝间溜走。古人曾云何年向日骑鸾鹤,踏碎天都峰上云。今夜,我们便要骑着脚下这数百年来石匠们斧凿而成的鸾鹤去游天都,去踏云,去追月。
我们终于登上了峰巅,成了天都仙客。正待饱览这迷人的天都月景,隐约间,山巅另一边竟有阵阵笑语,是群仙在欢聚吗?喂,你们好!他们是从更为险峻的天都旧道攀援上来的。
来,为天都之夜,为我们的相逢,干杯!我们在群仙万堂席地而坐,以茶代酒,摆开了野宴。开怀畅饮香醉的黄山茶,畅饮这迷人的朋光山色。
清光溶溶,夜雾缭绕;天色茫茫,山风满襟。欢歌笑语,润着月光在云雾里久久飘荡……
这就是天都峰月夜。就是这样的生动而神奇。它的美激起我心中情感的浪潮。
大自然啊!我爱你,爱你创造的每一件杰作!
祖国!我爱你,爱你无限美好的锦绣河山!
I have a great mother. She cares much about me in my life and study.
In the morning, she gets up early to make breakfast for me. When I was little, she prepared my schoolbag. But now, she tells me to do it by myself. Because she thinks I have been old enough to do it. Besides, she always checks my homework. When I finish my homework, she checks it and points out the mistakes. She is very careful and helps me a lot.
I love my mother.
My favorite sports star------ Sun Yang
Born on December 1, 1991 in Zhejiang Province, Sun Yang is very tall and the height is 1.99 meters. He was from a sports family.
He won the China's first gold medal in men's swimming game. He worked a miracle. Sun Yang is not only gifted but also diligent. He keeps training and has tenacious willpower; these are worth learning by other people. Sun Yang is a new frontrunner at the sports worlds.
Sun Yang is very popular with the young. He is adorable, charming, childlike and cool. He is kind and has the vigor of youth, and he is a little shy. But Sun Yang is easy-going, always with a smile on his face when he faces our. He sings well and sounds beautiful. To my surprise, he likes dolls very much.
Sun Yang sets us a good example, and Sun Yang has set a new world record of swimming, of which the whole country’s people are proud
Dear Sir/Madam:
As a teacher at xxxx school, I am writing to provide you a recommendation for Miss/Mr.xx so as to help you assess her/his application for acceptance into your program and consideration for financial aid.
Considered a promising student with originality and sophistication in her/his thinking, (she/he was asked, in the spring semester of 2008, to develop a subsystem of a DBMS project for her B.S.thesis, for which I was the chief leader. T
his subsystem was designed to manage the information of materials in NO.1 Foundry Plant of Dongfeng Auto Works.To do the job, she/he read many books about software engineering and took some courses in Database Principles and Management. Keenly aware that the design of a DBMS decides the quality of the whole software system, she did her/his utmost from the beginning of the project.(参加过什么活动. From analyzing users requirements to designing the whole system, from the detailed designing to the final programming, she was very level-headed and full of innovation every step of the way. Taking full advantage of her ability and creativity, she firmly focused herself on her objective and gnored all distractions. She successfully reached her goal. In the final software testing, only a few bugs were found in her subsystem. My appreciation of her talelent was thus confirmed.Miss is a very personable woman, friendly and helpful, and she has always been a team player in her work.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could give her application for candidacy to your Ph.D. program favorable consideration. Should you need any further information in your deliberation, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Sincerely xxxx
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ……
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ……
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……
6) Never in our history has the idea that …… been so popular.
7) Faced with ……, quite a few people argue that ……
8) According to a recent survey, ……
9) With the rapid development of ……,
10 When it comes to…, (当说到…
二、列举观点
I.Some people think/believe that…,
Other argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true
1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages.
2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.
3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. ,
4.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages.
5....has many advantages.For example,…
6. However,just as every coin has two sides,…has it’s disadvantages.
II…play(san important role/part in……
1.Computers play an important role in science and technology.
2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life.
3.Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies.
4.Education plays an important part in developing our mind.
5.Addiction to alcohol and drugs plays a role in homelessness.
6.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
7.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now,telephone,email,and fax have taken their place.
III.With the development of…
1.With the development of our economy,many Chinese families can afford a car.
2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious.
3.With the rapid development of Science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home.
4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed.
5.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious.
6.With more and more women entering the society,people's attitude towards women is changing.
7.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up, an increasing number of (a growing number of,a significant number of
families can afford a car.
三、陈述自己观点
There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements,but…
四、批驳
1)It is true that ……, but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ……, but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that……
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ……
7) Too much stress placed on …… may lead to ……
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ……
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ……
10) No one can deny the fact that ……
11) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
12) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ……
13) Recent studies indicate that ……
14) There is sufficient evidence to show that ……
15) According to statistics proved by ……, it can be seen that ……
五、结尾句型 :
英语议论文多以简要总结全文或对所讨沦的问题提出解决办法来结尾。总结全文时除常用到in one/a word,generally speaking,to conclude等外,没有固定模式。提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型:
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ……
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ……
3). We should take measures to control the rapidly increasing world population.
4). We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.
5). The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.
6). Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.
7) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ……
8) In conclusion, it is imperative that ……
9) There is no easy method, but ……might be of some help.
10) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ……
11) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
12) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
13) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ……
14) Taking all these into account, we ……
15) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear……
六、其他句型
I、There be结构
There+be+主语+(修饰成分,表示客观存在的'人或事物。 There must be a lot of fuel in the tank.
There remains nothing more to be done.
There is no point in talking about it again.
There is something you don't know.
There is not enough time to do the work. .
II、名词化结构
名词化结构用以表明抽象思维的逻辑性和概念化,从而使语体更加正式、更加具有书面语风格。
1.由of连接主谓关系
That the earth revolves around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
名词化:The revolution of the earth around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
2.由0f连接动宾关系
One of the most important natural phenomena is that energy is transmitted from one point to another in waves.
名词化:One of the most important natural phenomena is the transmission of energy from one point to another in waves.
3.用of连接含有by的短语,把简单句转换成名词短语
人们都说“五岳归来不看山,黄山归来不看岳”。我竟然有机会来到黄山,观赏黄山的景色。
我看见过冰雪覆盖的长白山,游览过红叶似火的香山,却从没看见过这“云奇山异”的黄山,黄山可真奇啊,玲珑隽秀,有的像精美的香炉,有的像层层叠叠的彩缎,有的像含苞欲放的莲花……说不尽的千姿百态,奇瑰艳美,使人疑心它不不是天然生成,而是能工巧匠精心制作的盆景。黄山可真高啊,连绵起伏,耸入云端。从山顶向下一看,云在脚下漂浮,人在山上好像仙人那样,能腾云驾雾,悠然而去似的。黄山可真险啊,平生以来我还从没看见过这样陡峭的山峰,危峰兀立,怪石嶙峋。崖壁陡似削,山石横如断,几乎是90°垂直的石梯,隔老远也让人心惊肉跳,似乎一失脚就会从崖上跌下去,摔得粉身碎骨。
我看见过马尾似的卷云,山峰似的积云,更长看见漂在空中的浮云,却从没看见过这滔滔流水似的黄山云海。黄山的云可真白啊,白的就像一批白纱缎,又犹如刚下的白雪,那么洁净,那么润泽,别有一番神采!黄山的云真静啊,静得让你感觉不到它在飘动,看上会使你陶醉。黄山的云真长啊,长的无法用眼睛望到边际,只让你感觉到它是那样浩瀚,像一张大幕把天地都罩起来了。黄山的云多么妙啊,妙就妙在它飘渺恍惚,给人以充分想象的余地,引起美感。这真是“绵绵长飘三万尺,疑是银河降人间”。难怪从黄山归来的人都说“黄山云海是个奇观”呢,的确是名不虚传啊!
这样的云环锁着这样的山,这样的山衬托着这样的云,再配上空中五彩缤纷的彩霞,山顶郁郁葱葱的`松林,山间红叶似火的枫树,山下淙淙作响的清泉,让你感觉到像是走进了连绵不断的画卷里,这真是“日照香炉生紫烟,遥看云海舞山间,奇山异树云中裹,天下美景归黄山”。
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