Giant Panda is our national treasure, the state can be said for the protection of giant pandas put a lot of human and material resources giant now has been the world's people the protection and care, which is a good thing, of course, the Tibetan antelope as the country's animal protection , The National People have been recognized, however, this tiger? The poor will be extinct Siberian tiger who is going to have a genuine concern and care a little bit?
According to statistics, the Siberian tiger left at present, less than 20, still such a small number of these survive, has had imagined. Two years ago, in the mountains of Huanren, Liaoning found to be a man to die under the presentation of the Siberian tiger, from this we can see that the above countries and the people of the importance we attach to it, this first Manchurian tiger is actually how the dead do not Conclusion, and the other is only from the northeast where hu came to the place where the wonder and the third is the matter did not rise to the national media in particular. This really puzzled the other person you! Is it really the other tiger who fear love is not worth it, it really fate of the Siberian tiger so?
Towering mountains should not unique to human beings, should not have dense forest unique to human beings, rivers clear this should not be unique to human beings, the Siberian tiger survival of this nature should not be unique to human beings. Siberian tiger to the left of a piece of heaven and earth to survive it, the High IQ is the human species, there are still ways to leave that piece of local survival, and the tiger have to leave that piece of the local dead; you save tigers, is the human population control, engage in Family planning, and the Siberian tiger is scarce Rending it! Now we can hear the cries of tigers in the future even the Siberian tiger can be heard the cries.
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
我的家乡在汉江岸边,梨花湖畔。汉江是长江的第一大支流,是南水北调中线工程取水的源头。它不仅养育了汉江两岸的人民,也为解决我国北方缺水的问题发挥着重要作用。汉江从老河口市西边流过,建在老河口市境内的王甫洲水电站截流后形成了宽阔的水域和丰富的湿地景观,这里植被丰富,鹜鸟成群,这就是老河口市著名的梨花湖风景区。梨花湖中碧波粼粼,水产丰富;汉江岸边梨飘香,妩媚秀丽。因此,它是一个观光旅游、休闲娱乐的好去处。
然而,如今的梨花湖风景,也不像从前那么美丽了。南水北调中线工程完成后,丹江口水库蓄水量加大,减少向下游排水,导致离它不到二十公里远的梨花湖水位下降。近几年,老河口市城市建议迅猛发展,外资企业扎根老河口,城镇人口迅猛增加,这样建设建筑的垃圾多了,被倒入了汉江;工业的废水多了,被排入了汉江;生活的污水多了,被排进了汉江,……我们的母亲河——汉***渐渐被污染了,水不在像过去那么清澈了,鱼儿也不像过去那么成群了,江上的气味也不像过去那么清新了。
我们生存的环境已渐渐被破坏,如果再这样继续下去,我们就可能没有清洁的水可以饮用,我们就可能没有鲜活的鱼可以享用。环境已给我们敲响了警钟,我们该清醒了。因此,我呼吁保护梨花湖,爱我母亲河,要从我做起。
首先,我要向同学们、向家人、向身边的人广泛宣传保护环境的重要性,增强他们的环保意识,增强他们的绿色生活意识,增强他们的'绿色出行意识,自觉遵守环保法规和法律,养成文明做人做事的良好习惯。其次,保护环境从小事做起:少用塑料袋,不乱扔杂物。废物按指定地点存放,不乱倒垃圾。少用或不用清洁剂之类的化学制品,减少对水质的污染。节约用水,一水多用。用水时,龙头关小一点,用完后,随手关闭。比如,将洗菜、淘米的水可以用来冲厕所、拖地,可以用来浇花、浇菜地……其三,要有环境监督意识:对乱扔、乱倒垃圾的行为要制止;对未经处理随意排放的工业废水、生活污水的现象要举报,或者请宣传媒体曝光,或者向政府有关职能部门反映,及时制止一些破坏环境的行为。
总之,我们要携起手来,同破坏环境的行为作斗争。我想不久的将来,天会变得更蓝,水会变得更清,空气会变得更香,梨花湖会变的更美,自然会引来天下游客来此观光,来此休闲。
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
当弱小的小草正努力用它顽强的生命力钻出土地的那一刻,你却从它身上一跃而过,你为了自己的利益,剥夺了它那幼小的生命,这你愿意么?
将要开放的月季,里面好象充了气,灌满了水,显得那么娇嫩。等到绽开花朵的时候,你却无情的把它摘走,这你愿意么?
回答当然是不愿意。现今树木不断被砍伐,我国的森林覆盖率为12。5%。只近世界水平(22?)的一半,不久的将来,我们将面临天然屏障被破坏,森林经济崩溃,生态危机爆发的局面。影响整个自然规律的改变。群山中只剩下被砍伐完了的光秃秃的树头。留下几只可怜的`小鸟在传递着树的***。水土一天天流失,沙漠一天天扩大,耕地渐渐被吞没,眼前的郁郁葱葱,恐怕只有在梦里才看得见。原始的森林变得“千山鸟飞绝,万径人踪灭”。砍伐、火灾、虫害,吞噬着树的身体,树彻底失望了,留下了悲痛欲绝的眼泪。
曾几何时,地球是宇宙中最美丽的星球,她拥有茂密的森林、清澈浩瀚的海洋、巍峨的高山、奔腾不息的江河、“飞流直下三千尺”的壮观瀑布,繁衍了一代代的优秀儿女。地球穿着一条蔚蓝色的纱裙,成为众星球的焦点。幽幽蝉鸣,蛙声连连,海欧轻盈地掠过海面,秋风落叶,田野飘香;地球一直是人类的理想家园。
不要让厄尔尼诺和拉尼娜闯进我们的生活。历史和现实告诉我们:一个没有保护生态,参与环保精神作支撑的国家是难以繁荣昌盛的;一个没有保护生态,参与环保精神作支撑的社会是难以长治久安的;一个没有保护生态,参与环保精神作支撑的民族是难以自立自强的;同样,一个没有保护生态,参与环保精神作支撑的校园是难以持续发展的。
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