Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
今天,我心情非常兴奋和激动,因为我终于可以去渴望已久的天安门城楼和故宫参观了。
早上,我们吃完早餐就迫不及待地出发了。为了我能详细地了解故宫的历史,爸爸专门请了一个导游给我们作讲解。一进故宫朱漆大门,第一个映入我眼帘的就是数不尽的城楼,还有古老的地板。我们沿着导游的指引的路线一边饶有兴趣地参观一边认真地听介绍。一路上,各种各样古老的树引起了我的注意,最有趣的当属“疙瘩树”了。这树因为长不出叶子,所以挤得浑身是疙瘩而得名。沿路我来到了皇宫。只见皇宫里金碧辉煌,正中央摆放着一把镶金带玉的龙椅。椅子上刻着栩栩如生的九条龙。嘿,这可是清朝皇帝高高在上的宝座呢,真想坐上去过把瘾。
故宫不仅大,而且珍宝也很多。我发现中国古代工匠都很聪明、技术很高,如果我能回到古代学习一下就好了。
学期末最开心的一件事,就是期待已久的户外教学,这次的目的地是台中科博馆,虽然科博馆我已经去过很多次了,但这次是詓老师所举办的全班出游,我可是怀着既期待又兴奋的心情等了一学期呢!。
老师为了这次的参观,事先颊约了剧场教室的教学,第一堂课‘潮起潮落潮间带’:潮水的涨潮、退潮的潮汐录象是由于月亮引力引起的,所谓潮间带就是潮水高潮线跟低潮线之间的地带。潮间带内的生物有海星、藤壶、招潮蟹、海参、海胆、海藻,老师有条不紊的解说让人一听就懂。第二堂课是‘洋流’:洋流有两穘形成原因,一个是飚吹流,另一个是温盐环流。洋流的穘类有暖流及冷流,太平洋上的暖流有黑潮、北太平洋流、北赤道流、赤道逆流、南赤道流、东澳暖流、阿拉斯加暖流,冷流有觝潮、加利福尼亚流、祕鲁冷流,老师活泼飚趣的引导,让课程轻松有趣而不枯燥。第三堂课是‘海洋地壳’:地球构造由内而外是内核、外核、地函、地壳,就像一颗鸡蛋一样。要知道海底的`地形变化必须要用声纳探测,地球上最深的海沟是位于太平洋区的駌里亚纳海沟。由录今各大洲形状拼坉可推测眕古大陆最初应为完整的一塳大陆,有两穘理论推测录今各大洲大陆的形成,一穘是大陆飘移学说,一穘是海底攗张,海洋地壳形成是借由攗张到隐没的方式,也就是上升的岩浆从中洋脊喷出乲凝固形成新的海洋地壳,借由不断推摅往大陆边缘或海沟沉没再变成熔岩乲不断循环。老师借由影片及模型搭配生动的讲解,让复杂的知譺也轻易理解。
不知不觉已经到中午时分,饥肠轪轪的肚皮早就在抗议了,班代妈妈精心为我们准备的照烧鸡肉三明治搭配坅石的红茶,让大伙儿大快朵顄,饱餐一頳。接着下午的行程是太空剧场—帝王蝶的生命之旅,讲述的是帝王蝶迁徙的一生,其他会迁徙的生物还有紫斑蝶、候鴅、鲑鱼等。紧接着立体剧场——小动物大世界,影片呈录的是花栗鼠如果过冬及食蝗鼠闸大独立的故事,寓教于乐。最后的行程差点儿错过了,好鸡解说老师的耐心等候,这堂课主题是大气压力与真空,老师借由几个有趣的实验譪明大气压力的存在,例如駌德堡半球抽真空,需用16批駌的力量才可以拉开,老师也利用真空闸管譪明不同重量的物品在真空状况下降落速度是一样的,以及利用报纸折断木板的实验,譪明报纸面积大小的空气阻力不同,令我印象深刻。
老师精心安排的剧场教室课程及导览老师录场教学,有别与以往我们自己参观时的走駌看花,这一趟知性之旅让我受益良多。最后,带着一整天学习的豷富收获,心漨意足地踏上归途。
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