中国学生雅思作文均分【一】
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
中国学生雅思作文均分【二】
虽然来源于身边社会，但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮，拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到，只需要把事件中某一个具体的你，我，他，变成是客观群体，比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。
举例的常见表达方式：
for example,/for instance,（后加句子）
Such as/ like （后加词组）
Take... as an example,
A case in point is that......
其次，在举例时还应注意尺度。
1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称，为了加强客观性，应将人称写成第三人称。
改正：Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.（那些养宠物，例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感）
2. 应避免引用一项调查研究，并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉，用含糊的方法表示。
改正：There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. （大量证据表明。。。）
3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家，尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。
改正：Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.（在全世界，许多孩子在屏幕前待太久，导致了他们的视力减弱。
“全世界”的表达方式：around the world, all over the world, across the globe
【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.
中国学生雅思作文均分【三】
看完《中国骄傲》后，我的心为之一颤，我为电视中舍己为人的朱柱喝彩，同时又替他惋惜。
具体内容是这样的：一名女子要跳河轻生。朱柱看见后，报了警，才脱了一只塑胶鞋，就下水救人了。经过警方全力营救，那名轻生女子被救上岸，而朱柱却不幸永远离开了我们。
看完后，我不禁热泪盈眶。多好心的一位小伙子，就这么离开了我们。就算他不下水救人，他已经报了警，也不能说他见死不救的。因为他的执着，因为他对生命的珍惜，因为他的不忍心。他毫不犹豫，一点不想自己的处境，女子得救了，他牺牲了。
虽然他只是一名外来打工者，说他是普通人，但是他做的却不是普通人都能做的事。他舍己为人的精神是我们的榜样，我们永远怀念他。
中国学生雅思作文均分【四】
又是一年\"119\"消防宣传日，在这个特别的日子里，我和妻子、女儿坐在电视机前，全程观看了央视十二套播出的《中国骄傲—2015》消防特别节目，那份浓浓的\"消防情结\"深深地烙印在我全家人的心坎上……
整期节目采取故事讲述、现场访谈、特勤表演、文艺演出等常见形式，在平凡中见证奇迹，在担当中传递温馨，集中展现了新时期公安消防部队\"听党指挥、能打胜仗、作风优良\"的良好精神风貌，热情讴歌了广大一线消防官兵坚持人民利益至上、竭诚奉献牺牲的高尚职业情怀。
从入伍二十多年的特勤尖兵，到即将新婚燕尔的中队干部，到从军不到一年的稚气新兵，再到两鬓已近花白的沙场老将……我亲爱的战友们——这群和平年代里最可爱的人，他们的故事，无需跌宕起伏的情节，无需感天动地的话语，无需风花雪月的点缀，无需气壮山河的渲染，就用自己的`朴实无华、天真无邪、忠诚无畏、大爱无疆，谱写出了一篇篇青春的华章，定格成了一首首生命的礼赞！
一份执着后面，是一颗坚守的初心；一份感动后面，是一个英雄的群体。逝者安息，生者珍惜。我骄傲，我自豪，我荣光，我是消防人。即使逆火而行，即使爬冰卧雪，即使海啸山崩，即使满目疮痍，为了百姓的安康，为了城乡的安宁，我们时刻准备着。
中国学生雅思作文均分【五】
这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神，总是在主旨周围绕圈子，不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病，看似八九不离十，却总也不愿把话点破，让考官怎能不又急又气。
在所有的扩展方式之中，因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由，再扩展其结果，这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前，若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”，难免缺乏说服力，但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟，若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”，那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展，点头认同。由此可见，善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼，事半功倍。
引出原因的表达方式主要有：Because../Since.../As....
引出结果的表达方式主要有：so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..
【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.
【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...
