和谐社会类作文【一】
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1．学生给老师打分已很普遍；
2．人们对其持不同态度（肯定或否定的态度）；
3．你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然，此任务是写一篇议论文，主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论，开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况，从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活，但有一定的语言难度，也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作，也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下，也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙，写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时，也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思，学会换位思考，这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确，赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师，就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样，不仅对学生、学校有利，而且对老师本人也有利。这样，老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己，看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可，这将是对自己的一次鼓励，为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高，老师就应进行反思，调控教学方法和教学态度。这样，教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据，内容充实，贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用，是短文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式，给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下：
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ；Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象，然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响，最后提出解决问题的办法，或者得出结论，或者提出个人看法，或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张，论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多，但最常用的是因果分析法。即：分析事实与论点的因果关系，指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点，从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中，议论文的比重占得越来越多，议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型，但文体实际是议论文，而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是：
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间，上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文，列举吸烟的危害，并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来，越来越多的中学生出国学习，出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。
1）良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。
2）拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。
3）传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇：媒介，中间人：mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad．First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods．Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展，道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解，谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
和谐社会类作文【二】
书一开篇，作者就从希腊开始梳理在法学上的各种思想与主义。哲学，法学，哲理法学，法律哲学···这其中的一个个概念，各个概念之间的关系，确实是我不能驾驭和理解的。
在书中，作者写到这样两句话，“无论我们把文明看成是事实还是观念，我认为它是各门社会学科的出发点”“文明是人类力量不断的更加完善的发展，是人类对外在的或物质自然界和对人类目前能加以控制的内在的或是人类本性的最大限度的控制，文明的这两个方面是相互依赖的。”我所理解的是：法律是一门社会科学，以“文明”是法律的科学的出发点，而法律是对人类本性的最大限度的控制。但是这种对人类内在的或是本性的支配力到底是什么，是怎么样产生的，它是怎样得以保持、促进和流传的？之后有给出答案，这种支配力是直接通过社会控制来保持的，是通过人们对每个人所施加的压力来保持的。施加这种压力是为了迫使他尽自己本分来维护文明社会，并阻止他从事发社会的行为，也就是不符合社会秩序假定的行为。社会控制的手段就是道德、宗教和法律。“今天，社会控制首先是国家的职能，并通过法律来行使。它的最后效力依赖于专为这一目的而设立或遴选的团体、机构和官员所行使的强力。它主要地通过法律发生作用，这就是说，通过被任命的代理人系统的和有秩序的使用强力”。所以在庞德看来，法律的依赖于强力，强力的行使者为社会政治组织。
第二章作者讲述了“法律是什么。作者认为从纪元六世纪希腊人来世考虑这些事情以来，什么是法律就是一直是一个争论的题目。许多东西曾发生作用使这个问题成为一个困难的问题。但是困难最重要的根源是历史上三个完全不同的东西都曾使用法律的名称，给人们讨论“什么是法律”这个问题告成了很多混乱。因此，人们都曾试图用其中的一个来解释这三者。如果这三种意义可以可以统一起来的.话，最后就用“社会控制”的观念加以统一，并分析了有效法律行动的局限性，得出“如果法律在今天是社会控制的主要手段，它就需要宗教、道德和教育的支持”的结论。
第三章作者主要讲述了“法律的任务”。他在里面有这样一段话：“一个法律制度通过下面一些列办法来达到，或无论如何力图达到法律秩序的目的：承认某些利益；由司法过程（今天还要加上行政过程）按照一种权威性技术所发展和使用的各种法令来确定在什么限度内承认与实现那些利益；以及努力保障在确定限度内的被承认的利益”简单来说，法律的任务就是通过保护利益来调节利益冲突。利益又是什么呢？庞德在接下来有解释了利益同时又把利益区分为“个人利益”、“公共利益”和“社会利益”三类。
第四章最后一章作者讲到价值问题。“价值问题虽然是一个很困难的问题，但是它是法律科学所不能避免的”，因为“即使是最粗糙的、最草率的或是最反复无常的关系调整或是行为安排，在其背后总有对各种互相冲突和互相重叠的利益进行评价的某种准则。”这种准则可能仅仅是保持和平、保持社会现状、促进最大限度的个人自由或是一个占统治地位的社会或是经济阶段的自我利益的实施。
一种文明的理想、一种把人类力量扩展到金肯呢个最高程度的思想、一种为了人类的目的对外在自然界和内在本性进行最大限度控制的理想，必须承认两个因素送我控制：一方面是个人的主动精神，个人的自发的主张；另一个是有秩序的，组织起来的活动。
和谐社会类作文【三】
有一手歌是这么唱的：“因为我们是一家人/相亲相爱的一家人/有缘才能相聚/有心才会珍惜/何必让满天乌云遮住眼睛/因为我们是一家人/相亲相爱的一家人/有福就该同享/有难必然同当/用相知相守换地久天长/我喜欢一回家/就把乱糟糟的.心情都忘掉/我喜欢一起床/就带给大家微笑的脸庞......”
七（2）班就是我们每个成员温暖的“家”，在“家”中，我感到了力量是十分巨大的；在“家”中，我感受到了温暖；在“家”中，经过了大家的努力，我们的“家”已经获得了许多荣誉。每个人都渴望拥有一个温暖的家，每个都渴望拥有一个温暖的家，每人的成长都离不开集体的帮助，然而在集体中，碰到困难，只要依靠集体的力量，就能克服。
最近，班级中也有互相帮助的人，他们都具有医科美好的心灵，记得前不久的几天里，CLD把午休时间让出来，教ZZM读英语；有时候，我有几题数学题不会做，那曲问ZSW、CL、CX、SB等一些数学较好的同学，他们都很乐意教我，一直到我懂为止。在生活中，FYR的那无私奉献精神增添了我班的一种荣誉；在......
记得雷锋曾经说过；“一滴水放进大海才永不会干涸，一个人只有当他把自己和集体事业融合在一起的时候才能最有力量。”
和谐社会类作文【四】
假期的心情特别好，今天吃过早餐，哼着歌，随着轻快的拍子，走到阳台的摇椅上看起了新闻。
我看到其中的一侧新闻是这样说的：有一个人假期带着年老的母亲去看冰灯，开心地给老母亲拍照片，拍完了，在那检查是否照片虚了时，老母亲要下台阶，她对身边的女孩说：“闺女，能搭把手给我扶着你下这个台阶吗？”女孩伸出胳膊支持老母亲下那个台阶。老母亲谢过后，身后马上传来了女孩的妈妈教育女孩的声音：“老人要是摔倒，我们家就赔惨了。”
看完了这侧新闻我心都寒了，一个个字硬生生地敲着我的好心情。要知道我们中华传统文化就是尊老爱幼，要是没有人帮助老人，就连扶一下老人也怕成那个样子，怕要承担责任，我们现在谁也不敢扶，以后谁还会扶我们呢？
想了一天，我也想不明白，难道一个老人也扶不起吗？正是：爱吾爱，以及人之爱；老吾老，以及人之老；幼吾幼，以及人之幼。
