英语作文我的笔友五年级【一】
hello.how have you been?
I have read magazine advertisement knowing you are hunting for some people who can be your pen-friends
firstly,please allow me to introduce myself.I am LiPing and I have a happy life with my parents in Shanghai.my father who is working for a big company is a legal adviser and my mother has retired.
I am working for an advertising company as advertising design.
My hobby is sports such as playing basketball,football,swimming and so on.I think that sports can not only lose your weight but also give you a good shape.I am fond of billiards other than that.
As far as i know one of your hobby is learning foreign languages.I could teach you to learn chinese if you will.
If only I could be accepted and be good friends with you.
good luck to you.
Yours sincerely
Li Ping
英语作文我的笔友五年级【二】
如今战场风云变幻么测，说不定哪一天战争就会降临在我们身旁。而我要为自己的国家尽一点微薄之力，因为一个国家的强与弱就在于军事武器的变化而发展，如果某一个国家武器落后、装备不齐、国防能力差，那么必然会遭到别的国家的攻击，我国边远地区的防御能力比较差。应此作为一个堂堂正正的中国人，我应该为自己的国家多作贡献，制造出许多尖端的武器来增强自己的国防能力，是国家变得更加富强。
我曾听到这样一个故事：抗美援朝的时候，我军的一个整编师把美军的一个营包围了起来，固守在一个阵地上。但由于美军的武器十分先进，仅仅一个营的美军打退了我军的几次攻击，最终突出了包围圈。这是多么大的反差呀！是啊，“落后就要挨打”，只有自己的国家富强了，才能赢得其他国家的敬重。
应为我从小对武器十分感兴趣，遇到这样的书籍和图片总是爱不释手，所以一个当武器研究专家的念头就在我心中不由而生。为此我一定要努力、坚持、奋斗、才能赢取最后的成功。要成功就得接受磨练，磨练是让人成长的营养品。美国著名女作家海伦开了双眼失明，老天无疑给她开了个残酷的玩笑。虽然上帝关闭了她的门，但也给她留了一扇窗，她身残心不残，不懈的努力让她成长起来，走出心理阴影。何况我还是个健全的少年呢！
中国的著名数学家华罗庚说过：没有雄心壮志的人，他们的生活缺乏伟大的功力，自然不能盼望他们会有杰出的成就。所以说一个人有了理想就要不懈的努力奋斗，去实现自己的目标，如果失败了，一定要努力坚持，失败乃成功之母，只有失败过才会成功，只有成功理想才会实现！
历史上、文学上、科技上的灿烂辉煌都源于理想。生命因理想而精彩，生活应理想而更有意义！
英语作文我的笔友五年级【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文我的笔友五年级【四】
??的弟弟-五年级你们知道吗?我的弟弟是怎样的人?你们看了我的介绍一定会知道的。
我的弟弟长得像瓜子的脸，爸爸说他是“帅哥的标准脸。头发乌黑光亮，一双眼睛又黑又圆，扁扁的鼻子，像狗一样什么都能闻到。
他是一个尊老爱幼的孩子，记得有一次我和弟弟去玩，看见一个盲人阿姨过不了马路，弟弟看见后赶紧过去帮忙人阿姨扶到马路对面，盲人阿姨非常感动，说：“谢谢你，我虽然看不见，但我想问你叫什么名字。弟弟说：“阿姨，好人不留名，你就叫我红领巾吧。“真有礼貌啊。盲人阿姨夸到，我也对弟弟说：“你真棒。我真佩服他呀!
他也非常的'调皮。有一次，我刚回到家，他就立刻来到我的旁边，说：“姐姐，陪我一起玩吧!我叹了一口气，说：“不行，我已经很累了。他蹲下身子，抱住我的腿说：“姐姐，你不陪我玩，我就一直抱着你。我真是没有办法了，只好答应了，他却蹦得一跳三尺高。我和她玩的是“孙悟空，我当的是“妖怪，他当的是“孙悟空，他拿着他的“金箍棒，我拿着我的“大刀，他便向我说：“妖精，快把我师傅放出来!我说：“没门，我还要等着吃他的肉呢!她听完我的话，他便直接拿着一“金箍棒向我敲来，我也不甘示弱，也向他发起攻击，经过一系的回合，我和他打了几百大战，他忽然一个金箍棒打中我的腰，我便倒了下来，他看见后，欣喜若狂。我说：“既然你赢了，那我就可以歇息了吧!他说：“嗯，好的，不过下次我还要玩，这个游戏太好玩了，我太开心了!唉，真是的!
他也非常爱学习。有一次我叫他出去玩，他却说：“我的功课还没有做完，你先去玩吧。过了一两个小时，我去看看他把功课做完了没有，却看见他在在看书，我说：“你完成作业了吗?他说：“完成了。“那不去玩。我生气地说。他说：“对不起，我忘了。听了他的话，我想到了一个四字词语“废寝忘食。
这就是我的弟弟，你们想跟他做朋友吗?
